Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời chưa rõ ràng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (thời thì, danh từ không phù hợp như “flights”), nội dung lặp lại và không mạch lạc. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi thì và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: daily life, experiences), đồng thời giới hạn 2–4 câu, tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily lives and things that happened at university, like memories from picnics and shared experiences. Those conversations help us stay close and support each other.

Sugestão: Nội dung mơ hồ và từ vựng sai (ví dụ “flights”, “planes” không phù hợp). Cần trả lời trực tiếp nêu chủ đề chính (hobbies, plans, studies), dùng liên từ (for example, also, because) để kết nối ý, và cung cấp một hoặc hai ví dụ cụ thể, trong 2–4 câu.

Exemplo: We usually talk about everyday topics like our studies, hobbies and future plans. For example, I often tell them about my career goals and we give each other advice, which makes the conversations helpful and interesting.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi cấu trúc; lặp ý. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer...), giải thích lý do với liên từ (because, when) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ 2–3 câu, tránh từ không đúng như “proofs”.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with a small group of close friends because it’s easier to share stories and feel comfortable. For instance, in a group of three or four friends we can discuss personal experiences and make plans together.

Sugestão: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng ngữ pháp và trật tự từ sai (ví dụ missing articles, verb forms). Nên dùng liên từ để giải thích (but, however), sửa thì và cấu trúc (I prefer communicating face-to-face because...), và đưa ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn.

Exemplo: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it feels more personal and clear. However, when friends live far away or we are busy, I use social media like video calls or messaging to stay in touch.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ không đúng và thiếu logic. Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + short reason), giải thích khi nào xảy ra tranh luận và cách xử lý (compromise, apologise). Sử dụng cấu trúc đơn giản, câu ngắn, 2–3 câu.

Exemplo: Sometimes I argue with my friends, usually when we have different opinions about plans or responsibilities. In those cases I try to stay calm and talk things through so we can understand each other and resolve the issue.

× Yes, of course I'm fond of sharing my things revolving around my daily flights with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course I'm fond of sharing things about my daily life with my friends.

'Revolving around' is awkward here; use 'about' to indicate topics. 'Daily flights' is likely a mistranslation for 'daily life'; choose 'daily life'. Also omit the redundant 'my' before 'things'.

× For example, when I was a university student, I have a soul mate, we often have a picnic at that time.

✓ For example, when I was a university student, I had a soulmate; we often had picnics then.

Sentence mixes past and present tenses. Use past tense consistently ('was', 'had', 'had'). Use 'soulmate' as one word and pluralize 'picnics' for repeated events. Replace comma splice with semicolon or separate sentences.

× We share everything revolving around my daily flights together whenever I think about.

✓ We shared everything about my daily life whenever we met.

Sentence structure is unclear and tense inconsistent. 'Revolving around' and 'whenever I think about' are inappropriate; use 'about my daily life' and 'whenever we met' to match past context.

× Of course, we share about many things such as daily flights and my dream in the future and near planes, which allows us to talk too much.

✓ Of course, we talk about many things such as daily life, my future dreams, and nearby plans, which gives us a lot to discuss.

'Share about' should be 'talk about'. 'Daily flights' seems wrong; use 'daily life'. 'Near planes' likely meant 'nearby plans' or 'short-term plans'. 'Which allows us to talk too much' is unnatural; use 'gives us a lot to discuss'.

× Especially when I have in common with my friends, it's easy to me to share.

✓ Especially when I have things in common with my friends, it's easy for me to share.

Missing object after 'have'; add 'things'. 'Easy to me' is incorrect word order; use 'easy for me'.

× It depends on the how many people in the proof.

✓ It depends on how many people are in the group.

'the how' is incorrect; use 'how many'. 'Proof' is wrong word; replace with 'group'. Add verb 'are' for correct sentence structure.

× It depends on the number of but the number of proofs and are it's having my close friends or not.

✓ It depends on the number of people and whether they are my close friends or not.

Sentence is fragmented and contains wrong words 'proofs'. Rephrase to 'depends on the number of people and whether they are my close friends'.

× I refer to that with close friends, even in a small group, which allows me to share great experiences together.

✓ I mean that with close friends, even in a small group, I can share great experiences together.

'Refer to that' is incorrect; use 'I mean that'. 'Allows me to share' is passive and slightly odd here; use 'I can share'.

× I prefer communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face.

After 'prefer' use infinitive 'to communicate' (or gerund 'communicating'). The original omitted 'to'.

× I believe communication directly is the best option, but sometime when I have to live far from my close friends and rarely do I have time spent together, I have to use communicate.

✓ I believe face-to-face communication is best, but sometimes when I live far from my close friends and we rarely have time together, I have to use online communication.

'Communication directly' is awkward; 'face-to-face communication' is natural. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I have to live' -> 'when I live'. 'Time spent together' better as 'we have time together'. 'use communicate' should be 'use online communication' or 'communicate online'.

× Ready do I argue with my friends, especially my girlfriends?

✓ Do I argue with my friends, especially my female friends?

'Ready do I' is incorrect word order. 'Girlfriends' may be confusing; use 'female friends' if meaning women friends. Use standard question order 'Do I...'.

× Are there are too tired of my friends?

✓ Are they too tired of me?

Sentence is ungrammatical and uses wrong pronouns. Likely intended to ask if friends are tired of the speaker: 'Are they too tired of me?'. Remove duplicate 'are' and correct object.

× One is quite strange to me and 1 is very close to me.

✓ One is quite distant from me and one is very close to me.

Use 'one' not numeral '1'. 'Strange to me' is odd; 'distant from me' or 'not close to me' is clearer.

× If the friends is trained to me, I think I don't pay too much attention to them too and read to being angry them.

✓ If a friend is rude to me, I don't pay too much attention to them and I try not to get angry with them.

Many issues: 'friends is' violates subject-verb agreement; use 'a friend is' or 'friends are'. 'Trained' is wrong word, likely 'rude'. 'Read to being angry them' is garbled; replace with 'try not to get angry with them'.