ChattingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like chatting with friends?

Candidato

Yes, I enjoyed chatting with my friends. I think this is a fantastic way to strengthen the relationship and build the connection with others, and I think it's a fantastic way for me to refresh and relax and also from.

Examinador

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Candidato

We really chat about our school, our future career and also the education plan is all about our study and our school and we also chat about something terrible and interesting like the.

Examinador

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Candidato

I prefer to chat with a group of people. I like to get the feeling of cooperation and I think this is a fantastic way to make friends with others and the demo information and.

Examinador

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Candidato

I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's more it's easier for me to does the exact feeling and attitude of my friend and I think if I have the opportunity and the the.

Examinador

Do you argue with friends?

Candidato

Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends but just some terror things and at that time we are not in good mood and have the oppo that attitude so we'll have some argument.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Pontuação: 58.0

Sugestão: 回答要更自然、简洁并且句子结构正确。避免重复短语(例如多次说 “fantastic way”),并补全不完整的句子。可以先直接回答(Yes/No + 简短理由),然后用一到两句具体说明如何帮助放松或增进关系。注意时态一致和词语搭配。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends helps me relax and maintain close relationships. For example, after a stressful day at school I often talk with a classmate about our day, which makes me feel supported and refreshed.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Pontuação: 52.0

Sugestão: 回答应更有条理,使用连接词组织话题,避免重复并补全句子。具体说明常谈话题并举一两个具体例子(如讨论课程、升学计划或最近发生的趣事)。保持最多五句。

Exemplo: We usually talk about school and our future careers. For instance, we discuss which subjects to focus on for university applications and share interesting or funny events from classes. Sometimes we also talk about current news that affects students.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Pontuação: 56.0

Sugestão: 回答要更具体,说明喜欢群聊的原因并给出比较(群聊 vs 一对一)。去掉无意义短语(如 “demo information”),用连词使逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because it feels lively and allows me to hear different opinions. Compared with one-on-one talks, group conversations help me meet new people and practice teamwork when we plan activities together.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Pontuação: 54.0

Sugestão: 要表达清楚原因并用正确的短语(例如 “get the exact feeling” 应为 “get the exact feeling and attitude” 或 “read their expressions”)。避免重复词语并完成未说完的想法,可以简短比较面对面与社交媒体的优缺点。

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to read people's expressions and tone. While social media is convenient, meeting in person helps me understand friends' emotions better and reduces misunderstandings.

Do you argue with friends?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答要更清晰并用礼貌、自然的表达说明争吵的原因和结果。避免模糊或错误的词(如 “terror things”, “oppo that attitude”)。可以举例说明争吵通常因为什么引发以及如何解决。

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue, usually about small things like misunderstandings or plans that go wrong. For example, we once argued about who should do more work for a group project, but we resolved it by discussing each person's responsibilities calmly.

Gramática

Past tense issue

× Yes, I enjoyed chatting with my friends.

Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends.

学生在问现在喜好(Do you like chatting with friends?)时使用了过去时“enjoyed”,时态不一致。应使用现在时“enjoy”表示一般现在的习惯或喜好。建议:在回答关于现在的习惯或喜好时使用一般现在时。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think this is a fantastic way to strengthen the relationship and build the connection with others, and I think it's a fantastic way for me to refresh and relax and also from.

I think this is a fantastic way to strengthen relationships and build connections with others, and it's a fantastic way for me to refresh and relax.

原句中“the relationship”“the connection”在泛指人际关系时不需要定冠词,且复数更自然;最后的“and also from”是不完整和错误的介词短语,应去掉。建议:谈泛指时用复数或不加定冠词,删除不完整的片段。

Sentence structure errors

× We really chat about our school, our future career and also the education plan is all about our study and our school and we also chat about something terrible and interesting like the.

We usually chat about our school, our future careers, our education plans, and sometimes about interesting or bad things.

原句结构混乱,重复“our school”“is all about”等,且结尾“like the.”不完整。需简化并按并列结构列出话题:学校、职业、学习计划,以及有趣或糟糕的事情。建议:列举时保持并列短语一致性,避免句子未完。

Verb in the present participle form

× I prefer to chat with a group of people. I like to get the feeling of cooperation and I think this is a fantastic way to make friends with others and the demo information and.

I prefer to chat with a group of people. I like the feeling of cooperation, and I think it's a good way to make friends.

原句末尾“and the demo information and”是残缺短语,应删除;“to get the feeling of cooperation”可简化为“like the feeling of cooperation”。建议:保持句子完整,避免多余或未完的短语。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's more it's easier for me to does the exact feeling and attitude of my friend and I think if I have the opportunity and the the.

I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's easier for me to perceive my friend's exact feelings and attitude.

原句中“it's more it's easier”重复冗余;“to does the exact feeling”中动词形式错误且搭配不当,应为“to perceive/feel my friend's exact feelings”;结尾“and the the”残缺。建议:使用正确动词(perceive/feel),注意动词不定式的形式和句子完整性。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends but just some terror things and at that time we are not in good mood and have the oppo that attitude so we'll have some argument.

Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but only about minor things. At those times we are not in a good mood and have opposite attitudes, so we may have an argument.

原句使用了不准确的词汇“terror things”“oppo that attitude”,应改为“minor things”“opposite attitudes”;时态和情态动词也需调整为与一般现在习惯相符的表达(sometimes argue / may have)。建议:用准确词汇表达‘小事’和‘相反的态度’,并保持时态一致。

Vocabulário

FantasticMarvelous; Fanciful; Strange; Tremendous
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
InterestingAbsorbing
TerribleDreadful; Repulsive; Severe; Unkind
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