Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'meditate' → 'meditate' or better 'helps me relax'). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a couple of hobbies. I practise Taekwondo for fitness and discipline, and I paint to relax and clear my mind. For example, painting before bed helps me unwind and sleep better.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with a specific reason and a brief example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'when I was a child', 'I loved painting', 'the reason I like drawing comes from...'). Use a linking word to connect idea and example.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved painting as a child. In fact, I started drawing with my parents' help, which helped me develop my skills, so painting has stayed with me into adulthood.

Sugestão: Respond directly and use correct tense and sentence structure. Avoid short fragments and repetition. Provide one clear supporting detail with a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'so').

Exemplo: Yes, painting is a hobby I've had since childhood. Because it helps me relax both mentally and physically, I still paint regularly to de-stress after a busy day.

Sugestão: Clarify which hobby you share and correct unclear phrasing. Start with a topic sentence, then add a brief detail or example. Use linking words like 'so' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, my uncle and I share the same hobby of Taekwondo. For example, we sometimes practise together on weekends, which helps me improve and motivates me to train harder.

× I like to painting because it's medicate myself and it relaxes my mind.

✓ I like painting because it helps me relax and calms my mind.

The phrase 'like to painting' mixes infinitive and -ing; use either 'like to paint' or 'like painting'. 'Medicate myself' is incorrect in this context; use 'helps me relax' or 'calms me'. Also adjust verb agreement and word choice for natural English. Suggestion: Use 'I like painting' or 'I like to paint' and replace 'medicate myself' with 'helps me relax' or 'calms me.'

× It's relaxes my body before sleeping.

✓ It relaxes my body before sleeping.

The auxiliary 'it' plus verb 'relaxes' is redundant; do not use 'it's' (it is) before a main verb. Use the third-person singular verb 'relaxes' with subject 'it.' Suggestion: Use 'It relaxes my body before sleeping.'

× Yes, when I was child.

✓ Yes, when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before the singular noun 'child.' Without it, the phrase is ungrammatical. Add the indefinite article for correct structure. Suggestion: Say 'when I was a child.'

× I think my painting skills and the reason that I like to drawing comes from my childhood.

✓ I think my painting skills and the reason I like drawing come from my childhood.

Use the gerund 'drawing' after 'like' (or use 'like to draw'). Also fix subject-verb agreement: the compound subject 'my painting skills and the reason...' is plural, so use 'come' not 'comes.' Remove unnecessary 'that.' Suggestion: '...the reason I like drawing come from my childhood.'

× Yes, I had it is painting.

✓ Yes, it is painting.

The original mixes past 'had' and a fragment 'it is painting.' The question asks about a hobby held since childhood, so present tense 'it is painting' or 'yes, painting' is appropriate. Use a simple, clear present tense response. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, it's painting.' or 'Yes, painting.'

× So much painting.

✓ I do a lot of painting.

'So much painting' is a fragment and not a complete sentence. Use a full sentence with a subject and verb: 'I do a lot of painting' or 'I paint a lot.' Suggestion: 'I paint a lot.'

× Will help me to relax my body and relax my mind.

✓ It helps me relax my body and mind.

Beginning with 'Will' is incorrect in this context; it's not a question or future statement. The speaker should use present tense 'helps' to describe a habitual effect. Also streamline 'relax my body and relax my mind' to 'relax my body and mind.' Suggestion: 'It helps me relax my body and mind.'

× My uncle loves to do take one or two, so me and my uncle we share the same hobby.

✓ My uncle likes to take lessons one or two times, so my uncle and I share the same hobby.

The phrase 'loves to do take one or two' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'take one or two lessons' or 'take one or two classes.' Also pronoun order and case: use 'my uncle and I' (subject form), not 'me and my uncle.' Remove redundant 'we.' Suggestion: 'My uncle likes to take one or two lessons, so my uncle and I share the same hobby.'