Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và cấu trúc câu: sửa lỗi số ít/số nhiều (a hobby/various hobbies), dùng động từ đúng thì và dạng (-ing), nối các ý thành câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh câu rời rạc. Thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, and, also). Nói đủ ý trong tối đa 5 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề và kèm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể.

Exemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy reading novels because they help me relax and learn new ideas. I also like discovering new artists on music streaming platforms, especially indie singers. In addition, I often play strategy games online to challenge my thinking. I usually read a book before bed to unwind.

Sugestão: Sắp xếp câu và dùng thì phù hợp: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/When I was a child). Tránh lỗi cấu trúc và thiếu chủ ngữ; nối các câu bằng liên từ để mạch lạc. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (tên trò chơi, hoạt ảnh yêu thích) để tăng tính mô tả.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I loved spending time with my friends. We often played video games like Mario Kart and watched cartoons such as Tom and Jerry. Those afternoons were fun and relaxed, and we would sometimes make up our own games. I have many happy memories from that time.

Sugestão: Làm rõ ý chính và từ vựng phù hợp: câu hiện tại (have had) nên trả lời rõ hobby cụ thể; sửa cụm từ không tự nhiên ('brightest technology' không rõ nghĩa). Giải thích cách hobby được duy trì từ nhỏ với chi tiết (tên hoạt động, tần suất, lợi ích). Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I have had a sporting hobby since I was a child: I practiced taekwondo regularly. My parents took me to training sessions every week, and those classes helped me build confidence and stay physically fit. I still practice occasionally to keep in shape.

Sugestão: Tốt nhưng có thể làm rõ và thêm ví dụ cụ thể: dùng số nhiều khi cần (football matches), tránh từ thừa ('just together'). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (đội/diễn biến trận đấu, hoạt động khi xem) để câu phong phú hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, my dad and I share a hobby: we love watching football matches together, especially during the World Cup. We often discuss tactics and our favorite players, and sometimes we go to a sports bar to watch with other fans. It’s a great way for us to bond.

× Yes, I have various hobby.

✓ Yes, I have various hobbies.

'Hobby' is a countable noun; when referring to more than one, use the plural form 'hobbies'. Use 'various' with plural nouns: 'various hobbies'. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns after quantifiers like 'various'.

× I enjoy reading books and.

✓ I enjoy reading books and discovering new artists.

After 'enjoy', use the -ing form 'discovering'. Also 'artist' should be plural 'artists' when referring to multiple. Complete the sentence after 'and' to join two gerunds. Suggestion: use parallel -ing forms and include the second element after 'and'.

× Discovering new artist.

✓ Discovering new artists.

Sentence fragment; make it a complete clause or attach to previous sentence. Also use plural 'artists' when referring to more than one. Suggestion: combine with previous clause: 'I enjoy reading books and discovering new artists.' or make it 'I like discovering new artists.'.

× Are playing strategy games.

✓ I enjoy playing strategy games.

Fragment missing subject and appropriate verb. Add subject 'I' and verb 'enjoy' or say 'I play strategy games.' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and a main verb.

× I usually read book before and.

✓ I usually read a book before bed.

'Book' is countable and needs an article 'a' if singular. The phrase 'before and' is incomplete; likely meant 'before bed' or 'before sleeping'. Suggestion: use 'a book' and complete the time expression: 'before bed'.

× Child When I saw a child, I love spending time with my friends.

✓ When I was a child, I loved spending time with my friends.

Incorrect word order and tense. 'When I was a child' is the correct time clause. Use past tense 'loved' to describe past habitual actions. Suggestion: start with 'When I was a child' and ensure past tense for past habits.

× We often play video games and watch cartoons together.

✓ We often played video games and watched cartoons together.

The context is about childhood, so past tense should be used. Change present simple 'play/watch' to past simple 'played/watched'. Suggestion: match tense to time reference.

× Enjoy those afternoons because they were fun and relaxed and I have many happy memories from that time.

✓ I enjoyed those afternoons because they were fun and relaxed, and I have many happy memories from that time.

Fragment 'Enjoy those afternoons' needs subject and correct past tense 'enjoyed' to match past time frame; keep 'have' for present result ('I have many happy memories'). Suggestion: use 'I enjoyed' for past experience and join clauses with a comma and 'and'.

× Yes, I have brightest technology since I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have been interested in technology since I was a child.

'Brightest technology' is incorrect and unidiomatic. To express a long-term interest, use 'have been interested in technology' or 'have loved technology'. 'Since' requires present perfect continuous/simple. Suggestion: use 'have been interested in' or 'have loved' with present perfect to indicate continuing state.

× My parents used to take me to training sessions every week, and training there helped me build confidence and stay physically fit.

✓ My parents used to take me to training sessions every week, and the training there helped me build confidence and stay physically fit.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'training' when referring to specific training sessions mentioned earlier. Use 'the training' for clarity. Suggestion: include 'the' when referring back to a specific noun previously mentioned.

× Yes, of course. My dad and I share the same hobby.

✓ Yes, of course. My dad and I share the same hobby.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. 'Hobby' singular is fine because they share one hobby. Suggestion: no correction necessary.

× We love watching football match just together, especially during the World Cup, and we often talk about tactics and favorite players.

✓ We love watching football matches together, especially during the World Cup, and we often talk about tactics and our favorite players.

Use plural 'matches' when speaking generally. 'Just together' is awkward; 'together' alone suffices. Add 'our' before 'favorite players' to show possession. Suggestion: use plural for general activities and include possessive adjectives where needed.