Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误（如 used to having）、措辞不够地道和部分冗余。回答应更直接并控制在最多5句内；首句点明爱好，接着用1-2句具体说明原因或例子，使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。注意时态和固定搭配（例如 say “I enjoy reading” 或 “I used to read novels”）。

Exemplo: I enjoy several hobbies, especially reading, jogging and swimming. Reading helps me relax and reduce stress because I can immerse myself in a different world. For example, I often read novels before bed to calm down after a busy day.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体且相关，但存在句子碎片（“Every day after school.”）、时态不一致（mix of present and past），以及不够简练。应将碎片合并为完整句，用正确的过去时态，并用连接词（for example, such as）增强连贯性。

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child I used to play with friends in the park every day after school. We often played games such as hide-and-seek and tag, which made me feel happy and free because we could run around and laugh together.

Sugestão: 回答明确且有具体细节，但存在小的语法一致性问题（expand ... and helps → expand ... and help）和用词可以更自然（keep an active hobby → still read）。可以把理由和现在的习惯合并为两三句，用连接词使结构更流畅。

Exemplo: Definitely — reading. It has expanded my horizons and helped me gain knowledge since childhood. Even now I read for about half an hour before bed to relax and help me fall asleep.

Sugestão: 整体表达清晰、具体并有逻辑，但个别词组不够地道（“from a research paper to romance stories”可改为“from research papers to romantic novels”），并可用更自然的连接词。保持简洁同时突出具体影响即可。

Exemplo: Yes — we all enjoy reading. My parents read everything from research papers to romantic novels, and they often took me to the local library when I was young. This exposure sparked my interest in many subjects and helped me build a strong knowledge base.

× I used to having a novel which is a peaceful and enjoyable time because it can help me find my inner pace.

✓ I used to have a novel, which was a peaceful and enjoyable time because it helped me find my inner pace.

句中 should use the base verb after 'used to' 表示过去习惯应使用動詞原形，因此把 'having' 改為 'have'。另外時態需一致，後半句描述過去經驗，用過去式 'was' 和 'helped' 更合適；此外原句 'have a novel' 用法不自然，若指『看小說』應為 'read novels'，但在此保留最小改動。建議：'used to' 後接動詞原形，描述過去習慣時保持整句過去時態一致。

× Every day after school.

✓ Every day after school, I played with my friends.

原句片段不是完整句子，缺少動詞和主語。面試回答描述過去習慣，應用完整句子並用過去式。建議：確保句子有主語和謂語，避免獨立的片段句。

× I spend more time playing games such as hide and seek or attack in our community, which was an enjoyable and cheerful memory because those games could make us feel happy and free.

✓ I spent more time playing games such as hide-and-seek or tag in our community, which were enjoyable and cheerful memories because those games made us feel happy and free.

句子描述過去經驗，主句時態應為過去式，故把 'spend' 改為 'spent'；'attack' 用於遊戲名稱不自然，常用 'tag'；關係子句 'which was an enjoyable and cheerful memory' 與先行詞複數 'games' 不一致，改為複數 'were' 和 'memories'；最後從句也改為過去式 'made'。建議：敘述過去事件時全句使用過去時，主謂數一致並使用慣用詞彙（hide-and-seek, tag）。

× Definitely it's reading because it can expand my horizons and helps me gain more knowledge.

✓ Definitely it's reading because it can expand my horizons and help me gain more knowledge.

主語 'it' 對應兩個並列謂語 'can expand' 和 'help'，助動詞 'can' 應同時作用於兩者，因此第二動詞不應加第三人稱單數 '-s'，把 'helps' 改為 'help'。建議：當使用助動詞時，後接動詞用原形且注意不要重複加 -s。

× Today I still keep an active hobby of reading for half an hour before going to bed, which can make me recharge and fall asleep.

✓ Today I still maintain the habit of reading for half an hour before going to bed, which helps me recharge and fall asleep.

'keep an active hobby' 用法不自然，應用 'maintain the habit' 或 'still have a habit'；描述習慣的效果用現在時 'helps' 更合適（一般現在時表常態），且 'can make me recharge' 改為更自然的 'helps me recharge'。建議：用慣用搭配 'maintain a habit' 或 'have a habit of ...'，描述常態使用一般現在時及自然動詞搭配。

× That not only increased my interests in different subjects, but also built a solid foundation of knowledge for me.

✓ That not only increased my interest in different subjects, but also built a solid foundation of knowledge for me.

'interests' 在此語境中應為不可數名詞 'interest'（興趣作總稱），使用複數不太自然。句首缺少動詞形式，應為 'That not only increased...'（原句缺 'was' 無，但原句可直接加 'not' 前仍需 'That' 後接動詞已存在，這裡主要改 'interests'）。建議：將 'interests' 改為不可數 'interest' 表示整體的興趣；注意句子結構使動詞清晰。