Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatically correct statement and add one brief supporting detail. Avoid short fragments and redundant phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy dancing. I take dance classes twice a week, which helps me stay fit and relieve stress.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and grammar, reduce fillers (uh, umm), and give one specific detail (when/where/how often) using a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I used to love dancing as a child because I practiced ballet at a local studio every weekend, and it always helped me relax.

Sugestão: Make a concise, grammatical statement about continuity, avoid unclear phrases (e.g. "forget about this dress") and repetition. Use one linking word and provide a clear specific effect or reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I have — I have been dancing since childhood because it helps me relax and boosts my energy, especially when I practice contemporary dance routines.

Sugestão: Answer directly and cleanly, eliminate hesitation sounds and avoid repeating the same phrase. Add a brief comparison or reason to enrich the response.

Exemplo: No, we have different hobbies. I enjoy dancing, while my family prefers outdoor activities like hiking, so we usually spend free time separately.

× Yes, I have and it is dancing.

✓ Yes, I do; it is dancing.

The student used 'have' without an object; with 'do you have any hobbies?' the appropriate short answer is 'Yes, I do.' Then state the hobby with 'it is dancing.' Use a semicolon or separate clauses to be natural. Suggestion: respond 'Yes, I do. My hobby is dancing.'

× Yes, I had, and it was, uh, dancing because I used to dance a lot when I was child and it made me, umm, feel relaxed when I dance. So yeah, it was dancing.

✓ Yes, I did; it was dancing because I used to dance a lot when I was a child, and it made me feel relaxed when I danced. So yes, it was dancing.

Multiple issues: for past questions use auxiliary 'did' for short answer (matches Grammar Problem Type 6 but per instructions only apply listed types; article error 'when I was child' requires 'a child'). Also tense consistency: 'used to' and past simple 'made' and 'danced' should be past. Remove filler words. Suggestion: Use 'Yes, I did' and 'when I was a child' and keep past tense throughout.

× Yes I have and it is dancing because when I dance I forget about this dress and I feel relaxed whenever I dance and it makes my body to feel to get inner energetic and dancing makes me.

✓ Yes, I do; it is dancing because when I dance I forget about my stress and I feel relaxed. It energizes me and makes me feel revitalized.

Several issues: use 'do' for present short answer; 'this dress' likely intended 'stress' so correct noun; phrasing 'makes my body to feel to get inner energetic' is ungrammatical. Use verbs without 'to' after 'make' (make someone feel). Simplify to 'It energizes me' or 'makes me feel energetic.' Suggestion: keep sentences concise and use correct collocations: 'forget about my stress,' 'feel relaxed,' 'makes me feel energetic.'

× No, we have different hobbies. I like dancing and they don't, uh, they don't really enjoy dancing.

✓ No, we have different hobbies. I like dancing, and they don't really enjoy it.

Redundant clause 'they don't, uh, they don't' should be reduced to one clause. Also replace repeated 'dancing' with pronoun 'it' for naturalness. Suggestion: avoid repetition and filler words; use 'they don't really enjoy it.'