Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g., "usually" twice), and use specific details. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words (e.g., "because," "so," "also").

Exemplo: I enjoy several hobbies in my free time, but I often go to the public park with my friends. We go there to relax and reduce stress after classes because the green space helps us unwind. Also, we like to sit by the lake and chat while enjoying the fresh air.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use past tense consistently), and finish your thought. Add a linking word to connect the reason or result of that hobby. Provide a specific detail about how it inspired you.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved playing sports as a child, especially football. After school I often played football in our backyard with my brother and neighbors, which improved my teamwork and fitness. Because of that experience, I became more confident and interested in team activities.

Sugestão: Give one clear hobby as the main answer, use correct tense and word forms, and be specific about what you do and why. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep the response concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed listening to music since childhood. I also used to play in the nearby field with my family during breaks because it made me feel relaxed and happy. Those moments taught me to appreciate simple outdoor activities.

Sugestão: Answer directly: say whether your hobbies are the same, then give 1–2 specific contrasting details. Reduce hesitations and use smoother linking words (e.g., "however," "while"). Correct verb tenses and make sentences concise.

Exemplo: Not really — my family and I have different hobbies. While my family often goes out to meet friends or socialise for work, I prefer to stay at home and relax because it helps me feel calm and recharge.

× Yes, I have many hobby especially during my free time.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies, especially during my free time.

The noun 'hobby' is countable. When using 'many' you must use the plural form 'hobbies'. Also add a comma before 'especially' for clarity.

× We usually go to the park public because let's see there.

✓ We usually go to the public park because it's nice there.

The phrase 'park public' is incorrect word order; use 'public park'. Also the clause 'let's see there' is ungrammatical; replace with a suitable phrase such as 'it's nice there'. This fixes word order and usage.

× It's allow us to feel relaxed and release the stress after the class.

✓ It allows us to feel relaxed and relieve the stress after class.

'It's allow' is incorrect because 'allow' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it' as 'allows' (third person singular). Also use the verb 'relieve' with 'stress' rather than 'release' for correct collocation; omit 'the' before 'class' in general statements.

× Additionally, we can actually connect here with the nature.

✓ Additionally, we can actually connect with nature here.

The preposition 'with' should directly follow 'connect' and 'nature' does not need the definite article 'the' in this context. Place 'here' at the end for natural word order.

× When I was a child, my favorite hobby it would be sport I would say.

✓ When I was a child, I would say my favorite hobby was sports.

The original has redundant pronoun 'it' and awkward word order. Use past tense 'was' for a past preference and plural 'sports' for general activities. Move 'I would say' to a natural position.

× After my secondary class, I used to play football in my backyard with my neighbor and my brother.

✓ After secondary school, I used to play football in my backyard with my neighbor and my brother.

'Secondary class' is not natural; use 'secondary school' to refer to that level of education. The rest is fine.

× I find out that that activity was inspire me to be a.

✓ I found that that activity inspired me to be one.

'Find out' in past context should be 'found'. 'Was inspire' is incorrect — use past tense 'inspired'. The sentence also lacked a clear noun after 'a'; use 'one' or specify the role (e.g., 'an athlete').

× Yes, I have several hobby.

✓ Yes, I have several hobbies.

Use the plural 'hobbies' with quantifiers like 'several'.

× When I was in childhood, I would say those happy were listening to music and play in the right field with my family.

✓ When I was a child, I would say I was happiest listening to music and playing in the nearby field with my family.

'When I was in childhood' is unnatural; use 'When I was a child'. 'Those happy' is incorrect; use 'I was happiest'. Use gerunds 'listening' and 'playing' in parallel and correct 'right field' to 'nearby field' or 'the field nearby'. Ensure consistent verb forms.

× During break time, I usually go there for relaxing and make sure that I am feeling joy.

✓ During break time, I usually go there to relax and make sure that I feel happy.

Use the infinitive 'to relax' rather than 'for relaxing'. 'Make sure that I am feeling joy' is awkward; use 'make sure that I feel happy' or 'feel joyful' for natural expression.

× Well, it's not, uh, my family and I don't have a similarity hobby, uh, because it depends on our mood.

✓ Well, my family and I don't have similar hobbies because it depends on our moods.

'A similarity hobby' is incorrect; use 'similar hobbies' to match plural family members. Also 'mood' should be plural 'moods' when referring to different people.

× I would say, uh, most of my family prefer to hang out, uh, with their friends or sometime, uh, they get to uh, hang out for the work.

✓ I would say most of my family prefer to hang out with their friends, or sometimes they hang out because of work.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) rather than 'sometime'. 'Get to hang out for the work' is unnatural; 'hang out because of work' or 'hang out for work' is clearer. Keep verbs consistent: 'they hang out' rather than 'they get to hang out' if describing a habit.

× But for me, I prefer to stay home instead because it allowed me to feel calm.

✓ But for me, I prefer to stay home because it allows me to feel calm.

The speaker uses present preference 'prefer', so the following clause should be present tense 'allows' (third person singular) rather than past 'allowed'.