Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, reduce hesitations, and give one or two specific details. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') correctly and avoid repeating filler words like 'uh'. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy playing video games in my free time because they help me relax and unwind after studying. For example, I usually play strategy games for about an hour each evening, which helps me forget stress and improves my concentration.

Sugestão: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence and limit hesitations. Use correct tense and word forms (e.g., 'when I was a child' and 'I preferred'). Add a specific example of activities and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect reasons.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I preferred hanging out and playing sports with my friends. For example, we often played football in the park after school, which kept me active and improved my fitness.

Sugestão: Answer directly and accurately using simple past or present perfect as needed. Avoid confusing tense shifts and unnecessary fillers. Give a brief explanation with a clear contrast (then/now) using linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

Exemplo: No, I don't have a hobby I've kept since childhood. When I was younger I used to play sports with friends, but now I study more and have less free time, so I usually stay at home and study instead.

Sugestão: Be concise and correct: start with a clear statement about shared hobbies, then give a specific routine or example. Reduce hesitations and ensure vocabulary is accurate (e.g., 'we watch football on TV').

Exemplo: Yes, I share a hobby with my father. Every evening after I finish my homework, I sit with him in the living room and we watch football on TV, which is a nice way for us to relax and bond.

× Yes, I have a hobby is playing game, of course, because it is very suitable with a lot of uh, young people like me, because it is help me uh, reduce stress and uh, relax after I am study.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby: playing games, of course, because it is very popular with many young people like me, and it helps me reduce stress and relax after I study.

Errors: awkward sentence structure and incorrect adjective/adverb forms. 'a hobby is playing game' is ungrammatical; use a colon or rephrase to 'I have a hobby: playing games'. 'playing game' should be plural 'playing games' or 'playing video games'. 'suitable with a lot of young people' is incorrect collocation; use 'popular with many young people'. 'it is help me' is incorrect verb form—use 'it helps me' (subject-verb agreement and present tense). 'after I am study' mixes progressive and base verb; use simple present 'after I study' for habitual action. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct verb forms, and choose appropriate collocations (popular with, helps me, after I study).

× To be honest, when I was try, I prefer, uh, hang out and, uh, playing sports with my friend We, because it helped me spend, uh, spend my time with uh, my friends and, uh, help me keep fit. It uh, improve my, uh, health.

✓ To be honest, when I was younger, I preferred to hang out and play sports with my friends, because it helped me spend time with them and helped me keep fit. It also improved my health.

Errors: incorrect tense and form. 'when I was try' is wrong word; use 'younger'. Mixing present 'prefer' with past context—use past 'preferred'. Use infinitive 'to hang out' and base form 'play sports'. 'with my friend We' is garbled—use 'with my friends'. Parallel verbs need past tense: 'helped me' not 'help me'. 'It improve' should be past 'improved'. Suggestion: match past tense throughout when talking about childhood, use correct verb forms and plural 'friends'.

× No, when I was shy I prefer hang out with my friend and playing a sport and exercise. But now when I was grow I have less time with my friend and I have to spend more time to my study so I prefer sit in a house.

✓ No, when I was shy I preferred to hang out with my friends and play sports and exercise. But now that I have grown up I have less time with my friends and I have to spend more time on my studies, so I prefer to stay at home.

Errors: tense inconsistency and incorrect verb forms/prepositions. 'when I was shy' likely intended 'when I was younger' or 'when I was shy' but tense should be past: 'preferred'. Use infinitive 'to hang out' and base form 'play sports'. 'playing a sport and exercise' is awkward—use 'play sports and exercise'. 'when I was grow' incorrect; use 'now that I have grown up'. 'less time with my friend' -> plural 'friends'. 'spend more time to my study' should be 'spend more time on my studies'. 'prefer sit in a house' -> 'prefer to stay at home'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense, use correct prepositions (on studies), and natural collocations (stay at home).

× Umm, I, I think I have the same hobby with my father. Uh, every evening when I, uh, finish my homework, I usually, uh, uh, go to living room and, uh, sit with my father and we usually, uh, watch, uh oh, 73 Vietnam, uh, playing football.

✓ Umm, I think I have the same hobby as my father. Every evening when I finish my homework, I usually go to the living room and sit with my father, and we usually watch Vietnam play football.

Errors: incorrect preposition and pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. Use 'same hobby as my father' (not 'with'). 'go to living room' needs article: 'go to the living room'. 'watch, uh oh, 73 Vietnam, uh, playing football' is unclear; likely intended 'watch Vietnam play football'. Use correct verb 'play' not 'playing' after 'watch' in this context. Suggestion: use 'same ... as', include definite article with rooms ('the living room'), and construct the clause 'watch [team] play [sport]'.