Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific hobbies with brief reasons or details. Correct grammar (no unnecessary articles: say "football," not "the footballs"). Use linking words to connect items (e.g. "and" or "also").

Exemplo: Yes — I have several hobbies. I enjoy reading novels because they relax me, cycling for exercise, and playing a mobile game called Free Fire occasionally to unwind with friends.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and give a short topic sentence plus one specific detail. Use linking words (e.g. "and" / "sometimes") correctly and correct verb forms ("I used to draw").

Exemplo: Yes, I used to have a few hobbies as a child. I often drew pictures and sang songs at home, and sometimes I practised football with my classmates.

Sugestão: Answer directly about continuity since childhood, use present perfect or 'since' to show duration, and give a specific example. Fix grammar ("I adore reading books"; "I meet my friends"). Keep to 2–3 sentences max.

Exemplo: Yes, I've loved reading since I was a child — I still read novels every month. I also enjoy cooking, and sometimes I meet friends at a café to chat and try new dishes.

Sugestão: Make a clear direct contrast with your family using linking words (e.g. "but"/"however"). Correct grammar and word choice ("go to the beach"), and shorten to 2–3 concise sentences with one specific reason why your hobbies differ.

Exemplo: Not really — my family prefers cooking and going to the beach, but I prefer drawing and reading because I enjoy studying and being creative.

× Yes, of course I have many of hobbies.

✓ Yes, of course I have many hobbies.

'Many' is used with plural nouns directly; 'of' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Remove 'of' so the correct phrase is 'many hobbies'. Suggestion: use 'many' + plural noun (many hobbies).

× I enjoy the footballs and reading the books and cycling and sometimes I play free fire in my phone.

✓ I enjoy football, reading books, cycling, and sometimes playing Free Fire on my phone.

Do not use 'the' with general activities or plural nouns when speaking generally; 'footballs' is incorrect for the sport (use 'football' or 'playing football'), and 'reading the books' should be 'reading books'. Also use consistent verb forms: 'sometimes playing' (gerund) fits the list. Use 'on my phone' rather than 'in my phone'. Suggestion: list activities using base nouns or gerunds and use preposition 'on' for phone apps.

× Yes, in my childhood I was drawing and singing and sometimes I go to practice football.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I drew, sang, and sometimes went to football practice.

When referring to past habitual actions, use simple past ('drew', 'sang', 'went') rather than past continuous or present. 'Was drawing' implies an action in progress; 'go' is present tense and should be past 'went'. Also 'practice football' should be 'football practice'. Suggestion: use simple past for habitual past activities.

× Yes, I adore reading the books and cooking and sometimes I meeting my friends for a cafe.

✓ Yes, I adore reading books and cooking, and sometimes I meet my friends at a cafe.

After 'sometimes' use base verb 'meet' not 'meeting'. Use 'reading books' without 'the' for general activity. Use 'at a cafe' for meeting location. 'Adore' is followed by gerund (reading, cooking) which is correct. Suggestion: use base verb after subject ('I meet') and use appropriate preposition 'at' for places.

× No, my family is. My family loves cooking and go to beach, but really I enjoy drawing and reading my books because I adore my study.

✓ No, my hobbies are different from my family's. My family loves cooking and going to the beach, but I really enjoy drawing and reading books because I love studying.

'My family is.' is incomplete; it needs completion to show contrast. 'Go to beach' should be 'going to the beach' (gerund + article). 'Reading my books' is better as 'reading books' for general preference. 'Adore my study' is unnatural; use 'love studying' or 'I love to study.' Also ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel forms. Suggestion: provide a complete contrasting sentence, use gerunds for activities, include articles where needed ('the beach'), and use natural collocations ('love studying').