Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Улучшите грамматику и последовательность ответа: используйте простые правильные структуры (Present Simple), правильные формы глаголов и логичные связки. Дайте короткое вводное предложение, затем 1–2 поддерживающих детали, избегая лишних слов. Исправьте ошибки в словах и выражениях (например, «read» → «read books», «play in a guitar» → «play the guitar», «don't run» — непонятно; возможно вы имели в виду «I also like running» или «I don't run»).

Exemplo: I have several hobbies. I enjoy reading books about marketing and business because they help me understand the economy. I also play the guitar, which relaxes me, and sometimes I watch movies when I have free time.

Sugestão: Сфокусируйтесь на правильных временах (Past Simple) и упрощайте ответы. Начните с прямого утверждения в прошлом, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных примера с правильной грамматикой и связками («because», «and», «also»). Исправьте фразы: «I have» → «I had», «started studying English the primary school» → «started learning English at primary school».

Exemplo: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I started learning English at primary school and practiced speaking with classmates. I also trained in Taekwondo and played volleyball with my team.

Sugestão: Используйте корректные времена и компактные фразы: простое утверждение + причина. Избегайте повторов и бессвязных частей («everyday singing», «as a month of times I have so many subjects» непонятно). Говорите чётко о длительности и причине (since + причина).

Exemplo: Yes, I have been singing since childhood because I love music. I sing every day to relax and sometimes I join school performances.

Sugestão: Исправьте согласование и порядок слов, используйте простые конструкции для объяснения сходства: кратко ответьте «yes/no», затем дайте пример с правильной грамматикой («my brother and I take guitar lessons»). Избегайте лишних фрагментов и недописанных предложений.

Exemplo: Yes, I share some hobbies with my family. For example, my older brother and I both take guitar lessons, and he helps me learn the instrument.

× I enjoy read books about marketing and business because they help me understand this world and the economy.

✓ I enjoy reading books about marketing and business because they help me understand the world and the economy.

Использование после глагола enjoy требует герундия (reading). Также артикль 'this' не нужен перед 'world' в общем контексте; следует использовать 'the world'.

× I play in a guitar and don't run.

✓ I play the guitar and don't run.

В английском говорится 'play the guitar' (артикль the перед музыкальными инструментами). Предлог 'in' здесь лишний.

× It's so relaxed to me and sometimes when I have free time I just watch it movies.

✓ It relaxes me a lot and sometimes when I have free time I just watch movies.

Нужно использовать глагол 'relax' в активной форме 'It relaxes me' вместо 'It's so relaxed to me'. 'watch it movies' неверно: лишнее 'it' удаляется, правильно 'watch movies'.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child? Student: Yeah, of course, when I was a child, I have so many hobbies.

✓ Yeah, of course, when I was a child, I had so many hobbies.

В придаточном предложении с указанием прошлого времени требуется прошедшее время 'had', а не настоящее 'have'.

× For example, I learned languages and I started studying English the primary school and I'm also practice speaking with other students.

✓ For example, I learned languages and I started studying English at primary school and I also practiced speaking with other students.

Нужен предлог 'at' перед 'primary school'. 'I'm also practice' неверно: в прошедшем времени корректно 'I also practiced'.

× And I'm also was going to in Taekwondo and playing volleyball with my teams.

✓ I also used to go to Taekwondo classes and played volleyball with my team.

Фраза 'was going to in Taekwondo' некорректна: правильная конструкция 'used to go to Taekwondo classes' или 'went to Taekwondo classes'. 'teams' следует заменить на 'team' в данном контексте.

× I have a hobby that I have had since childhood that's singing because I just love singing and everyday singing because this helps me relax it and as a month of times I have so many subjects.

✓ I have had a hobby since childhood: singing, because I just love it and I sing every day because it helps me relax. Sometimes I have many topics to practice.

Используйте 'I have had' для длительного состояния, 'every day' как два слова, 'singing because this helps me relax it' некорректно — лучше 'I sing every day because it helps me relax'. Последняя часть была неясна; исправлена на понятную форму 'Sometimes I have many topics to practice'.

× Yeah, I have a same hobbies as my family members, for example, that's my older brother because you're both we going to playing guitar course and that my brother helps me learn to guitar so easily.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobbies as my family members. For example, my older brother and I both went to a guitar course and my brother helped me learn the guitar easily.

Используйте 'the same hobbies' (определенный артикль). 'That's my older brother because you're both we going to playing guitar course' содержит несколько ошибок: местоимения и порядок слов неверны; правильно 'my older brother and I both went to a guitar course'. 'learn to guitar' неверно — 'learn the guitar'.

× It's so.

✓ It was very helpful/It was great.

Фраза 'It's so.' неполна и неясна; необходимо завершить мысль: например 'It was very helpful' или 'It was great'.