Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with connectors. Correct verb forms and remove redundancy.

Exemplo: I have several hobbies, but my favourite is playing volleyball. It helps me relieve stress and I usually play with friends in the evenings at a local court, which makes it both relaxing and social.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and use correct vocabulary. Give a clear topic sentence about a childhood hobby and one specific example with correct nouns and verbs. Avoid unclear words like 'drying' or 'drink' if you mean 'drawing'.

Exemplo: Yes. As a child I loved drawing; I often sketched cars, buses and fruit in my notebook. Drawing helped me practise detail and imagination.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with clear reasons. Use correct tense and avoid awkward phrases like 'my all the hobby sick'. Mention how interests changed with age and give one concrete detail.

Exemplo: No, my interests have changed over time. When I was younger I liked quieter activities like drawing, but as I grew taller I became more interested in active sports such as volleyball.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain contrast with a clear reason. Use correct grammar for likes and avoid irrelevant details. Provide one specific comparison between your hobby and a family member's hobby.

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For example, my mother enjoys teaching and my father prefers early-morning walks, while I prefer playing volleyball with friends in the evenings.

× Yes I have lot of hobbies like play, wake up early in the morning and playing volleyball but my favorite hobby is playing volleyball because when I playing volleyball that I'm easily due to stress in my mind and the evening time I spend time with my friends and playing volleyball in the ground.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of hobbies like playing, waking up early in the morning, and playing volleyball, but my favorite hobby is playing volleyball because when I play volleyball I can easily relieve stress, and in the evening I spend time with my friends playing volleyball on the ground.

Errors: 'lot of hobbies' needs the article 'a' because 'lot' with 'of' requires 'a lot of'. 'play' and 'wake up' should be in parallel gerund form 'playing' and 'waking up' to match 'playing volleyball'. Use 'play' not 'playing' after 'when' in this context: correct is 'when I play volleyball'. 'in the ground' should be 'on the ground'. Suggestion: use consistent verb forms (gerunds) in lists and correct articles with quantifiers.

× Yes, whenever child that I have interest on drying because I make a lot of drinks on my notebook like car, bus and fruit so that I have trust in drink.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I was interested in drawing because I used to draw many pictures in my notebook like cars, buses, and fruit, so I trusted my drawing skills.

Errors: 'whenever child that I have interest on drying' should be 'when I was a child I was interested in drawing'. Use 'interested in' not 'interest on'. 'drying' is likely 'drawing'. 'make a lot of drinks' should be 'draw many pictures' and plural nouns need plural forms 'cars, buses'. 'used to' fits habitual past. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('interested in', 'draw pictures') and correct past habitual form 'used to'.

× No, because my all the hobby sick and change according to my age and now my favorite hobby is playing volleyball so that I have changed all the hobbies according to my height.

✓ No, because all my hobbies change according to my age, and now my favorite hobby is playing volleyball, so I changed my hobbies according to my height.

Errors: 'my all the hobby' should be 'all my hobbies' (plural and word order). 'sick and change' is incorrect; likely meant only 'change'. Use present simple 'change' for habitual/general truth. 'I have changed all the hobbies' is awkward; use 'I changed my hobbies' or 'I have changed my hobbies' depending on context. Suggestion: correct noun order and plurality, remove unrelated word 'sick', and use consistent tense.

× No, because my mother like teaching and my father like wake up early in the morning so that there are lot of difference in hobbies because I like volleyball so that.

✓ No, because my mother likes teaching and my father likes waking up early in the morning, so there are a lot of differences in hobbies because I like volleyball.

Errors: 'my mother like' and 'my father like' need third person singular 'likes'. 'wake up' should be gerund 'waking up' after 'likes'. 'there are lot of difference' needs 'a lot of differences' or 'a lot of difference'. Remove redundant 'so that' at the end. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement for third person and use gerunds after verbs like 'like' when referring to activities.