Hobby— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid tense errors and redundant words (e.g., “the books”, “used to” when you mean current habits).

Exemplo: I have several hobbies. For example, I enjoy reading novels and playing outdoor sports like cricket. I also like to spend quality time with my family at weekends, which helps me relax.

Sugestão: Keep the answer natural and correct grammar (use past tense consistently). Give one clear favorite and a brief reason, avoiding awkward phrases like “gaming period.” Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I played many outdoor sports such as cricket, badminton and soccer. Cricket was my favourite because it was a team game with eleven players, and playing it kept me active and excited.

Sugestão: Avoid informal fillers and exaggerations. Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense (I have played table tennis since childhood). Keep to 2–3 sentences and give a realistic supporting detail about frequency and benefits.

Exemplo: Yes, I have played table tennis since I was a child. I practice almost every day because it keeps me fit and improves my concentration, and it has helped me gain confidence over the years.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid awkward phrasing. State directly whether your hobbies are the same, then give one or two specific differences with linking words like “however” or “while.” Correct collocations (e.g., “reading books” not “reading the books every time”).

Exemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. While they enjoy reading books and newspapers at home, I prefer outdoor sports such as table tennis, cricket and badminton, so our pastimes don’t really overlap.

× I have different hobbies as I love to read the books, play the outdoor games like cricket and sometimes used to spend quality of time with my family.

✓ I have different hobbies: I love to read books, play outdoor games like cricket, and sometimes spend quality time with my family.

Use of plural 'books' is fine but article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary (Article errors, but falls under singular/plural here because 'the books' implies specific books). 'Play the outdoor games' should be 'play outdoor games' without 'the'. 'Used to spend' is incorrect in this present context; use 'sometimes spend'. Remove extra articles and adjust word order to list hobbies clearly.

× During my childhood, I used to do lots of outdoor activities like playing cricket, badminton and soccer.

✓ During my childhood, I used to do a lot of outdoor activities like playing cricket, badminton, and soccer.

'Lots of' is informal; 'a lot of' is more natural here. Comma needed before 'and' in a list (Oxford comma optional). Tense 'used to' is correctly used for past habitual actions.

× The most I like is the cricket as it has a team of 11 players and which makes me energetic throughout my gaming period.

✓ What I like the most is cricket because it has teams of 11 players and it makes me energetic throughout the game.

'The most I like' is awkward; use 'What I like the most'. 'The cricket' is incorrect article usage; use 'cricket' without 'the'. 'Team of 11 players' should be plural 'teams of 11 players' when speaking generally. 'Which makes me energetic throughout my gaming period' is awkward; use 'and it makes me energetic throughout the game.' Adjusted word forms and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yeah, there is one hobby which I was having in my childhood until now that is playing the table tennis, which I never skip even a single day of my life.

✓ Yes, there is one hobby that I have had since childhood: playing table tennis, which I have never skipped even for a single day.

'There is one hobby which I was having in my childhood until now' is incorrect. Use 'I have had since childhood' to show a hobby continuing to the present. 'Playing the table tennis' should be 'playing table tennis' (no 'the'). 'Which I never skip even a single day of my life' should use present perfect 'have never skipped' and 'even for a single day.' This corrects tense and article usage and clarifies meaning.

× So this habit makes me energetic and more confident throughout my life and I will never skip this until I get an old.

✓ This habit makes me energetic and more confident, and I will never stop it until I grow old.

'Until I get an old' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'until I grow old'. 'Skip this' is awkward for a habit; use 'stop it'. Maintain future intention with 'will' and correct verb phrase.

× No, actually my hobbies are not similar to my family members as they are different thoughts of reading the books every time and spending most of the time by reading the newspaper since I am just opposite to it.

✓ No, my hobbies are not the same as my family members'. They prefer reading books and spending most of their time reading the newspaper, while I prefer outdoor activities.

Pronoun and possessive errors: 'my hobbies are not similar to my family members' should be 'not the same as my family members'' (possessive). 'They are different thoughts of reading the books every time' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'They prefer reading books'. Remove unnecessary articles ('the books', 'the newspaper' can be 'books' and 'the newspaper' depending; kept 'the newspaper' is acceptable). 'Since I am just opposite to it' is incorrect; use 'while I prefer' to contrast. Improve pronoun reference and parallel structure.

× I spend most of the time in playing the outdoor activities such as table tennis, cricket and the badminton.

✓ I spend most of my time playing outdoor activities such as table tennis, cricket, and badminton.

Use 'most of my time' not 'most of the time'. Remove 'in' before 'playing'. 'The badminton' should be 'badminton' without 'the'. Make list parallel and remove unnecessary articles.

× So however, they are not similar to me.

✓ Therefore, their hobbies are not similar to mine.

'So however' is a conflicting connector; choose one ('therefore' or 'however'). 'They are not similar to me' is awkward; better to say 'their hobbies are not similar to mine' for clarity and correct comparison.