Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, use correct grammar and realistic time references, and avoid repetition. Link ideas with simple connectors (for example, because, so).

Exemplo: I don't enjoy reading books much because I find it hard to concentrate for long periods. For example, when I tried to read last month I could only focus for about 20 minutes, so I usually prefer listening to audiobooks instead.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use accurate phrases (paper/book vs. on paper), and explain your preference with clear reasons and one linking word. Correct vocabulary like 'environmental reasons' and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more immersive and I remember information better. However, for environmental reasons and convenience, I sometimes buy e-books and read on my tablet.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence stating specific situations when careful reading is necessary and when it is not. Use linking words (for example, however) and give concrete examples to make your answer coherent and informative. Fix repetition and complete sentences.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when studying for exams or reading legal documents because accuracy matters. However, I don't read carefully when I skim social media posts or fiction for entertainment, where I just want the main idea.

× No, I don't like reading a book because I can't concentrate on just reading a book.

✓ No, I don't like reading books because I can't concentrate on just reading.

The original repeats 'reading a book' which is redundant and awkward. Also 'reading' as a general activity should use the plural 'books' or uncountable 'reading'. Revise to remove repetition and use plural/general noun for natural expression.

× For example when I tried to read a book.

✓ For example, when I tried to read a book, I couldn't concentrate.

This fragment lacks a main clause and is therefore incomplete. Add the result clause to make a full sentence and include a comma after the introductory phrase.

× After two 220 minutes I stopped reading because I cannot.

✓ After about 20 minutes I stopped reading because I couldn't concentrate.

The phrase 'two 220 minutes' is incorrect quantifier usage and unclear. Likely intended '20 minutes' or 'two hundred and twenty minutes' — context suggests a short time so 'about 20 minutes' fits. Also tense and modal should match past action: use 'couldn't' not 'cannot.'

× I prefer to read a paper because I can feel that I'm reading a book, but due to the environmental safe reason, I try to purchase a book on the screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it feels like I'm reading a book, but for environmental reasons I try to buy books on a screen.

Use 'read on paper' not 'read a paper'. 'Feel that' is wordy; 'it feels like' is natural. 'Environmental safe reason' is incorrect collocation; use 'for environmental reasons.' Use 'buy books on a screen' or 'buy e-books' for clarity and correct preposition/verb choices.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?

Question requires parallel structure; include the auxiliary 'do' in the second clause to form a complete question.

× When the when I read the main area I do care about reading, but if not.

✓ When I read the main parts I do read carefully, but if it is not important I do not.

Original contains repetition 'when the when' and is a fragment 'but if not.' Fix repetition, replace vague 'main area' with 'main parts', and complete the contrast clause for clarity and grammatical completeness.