Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장 구조와 문법을 바로잡고 더 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다. 구체적으로는 주어-동사 일치(예: "I can't read a lot"), 불필요한 중복 제거(여러 번의 "I"나 "Umm"), 관사 사용("a information" → "information" 또는 "some information")에 주의하세요. 답변은 토픽 문장(직접적인 대답)으로 시작하고 1–2개의 구체적인 이유 또는 예시를 덧붙여 최대 4문장 이내로 유지하세요. 또한 어색한 끝맺음("and reading in")을 피하고 문장을 완결되게 말하는 연습을 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, but I can't read a lot because I have limited free time. Reading helps me learn new information and relax, so I try to read short articles or chapters when I can.

Sugestão: 의사 전달은 비교적 명확하나 시제와 표현을 더 정확하게 사용해야 합니다(예: "I felt" → "I feel"). 또한 간단한 이유를 하나 더 추가하면 답변이 풍부해집니다. 접속사(for example, because, so)나 이유 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 문장을 이어보세요. 전체 길이는 2–3문장으로 자연스럽게 유지하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I find screens uncomfortable and they make my eyes tired. For example, after reading on a tablet for an hour I often get headaches, so I usually choose print books.

Sugestão: 답변이 혼란스럽고 문법 오류(예: "at testing" → "during tests", "read not carefully" → "don't read carefully")가 많습니다. 질문에는 두 가지 상황(언제 꼼꼼히 읽는지, 언제 그렇지 않은지)을 명확히 나눠 대답해야 합니다. 연결어(when, but, because)를 사용해 대조를 분명히 하고 구체적인 예시(예: 시험의 중요성, 소설을 즐겁게 읽는 경우)를 추가하세요. 말할 때는 불필요한 중복과 'umm'을 줄이고 문장을 끝까지 완성하세요.

Exemplo: I read very carefully during exams or when I'm studying at university because accuracy matters and I need to understand details. However, when I'm reading for pleasure, like novels, I don't read every word closely; I focus on the story and enjoy the experience.

Sugestão: 의견은 전달되었지만 표현이 반복적이고 어색합니다(예: "a very hurry in a hurry person" → "a very hurried person" 또는 "I am usually in a hurry"). 이유를 더 깔끔하게 정리하고 예시를 하나 들면 좋습니다. 연결어(because, so, therefore)를 활용해 이유와 결과를 논리적으로 연결하세요. 문장 수는 2–3문장으로 유지하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I'm usually in a hurry and need to find key points quickly. For instance, when I look for information online, I scan headings and first sentences to decide if an article is useful.

× Oh actually I I like reading but I can't reading a lot.

✓ Oh, actually I like reading but I can't read a lot.

'Can't' (cannot) must be followed by the base form of the verb (infinitive without to), not the -ing form. Use 'read' after 'can't'. Also remove the duplicate 'I' and add a comma for natural flow.

× Umm because reading always gives me a information and reading in.

✓ Umm because reading always gives me information.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. The fragment 'and reading in' is unclear and unnecessary, so remove it to make a complete, grammatical sentence.

× I prefer to read on paper because when I read a book on screen I felt so uncomfortable and my eyes tired.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I read a book on a screen I feel so uncomfortable and my eyes get tired.

Maintain present tense to match 'I prefer'. Use 'feel' (present) instead of past 'felt'. Use 'on a screen' for clarity. 'My eyes tired' is incorrect; use 'my eyes get tired' or 'my eyes feel tired'.

× Umm I read carefully at testing like in university umm, but usually I read not carefully in in lifetime because umm I want to read a books. Enjoy enjoy.

✓ Umm I read carefully during tests at university, but usually I don't read carefully in my free time because I want to enjoy reading books.

Use 'during tests' and 'at university' for natural phrasing. To express habitual negative, use 'I don't read carefully'. 'In lifetime' is incorrect; use 'in my free time' or 'in my leisure time'. 'A books' is wrong: 'books' is plural with no 'a'. 'Enjoy enjoy' should be 'enjoy reading' to complete the idea.

× I prefer scanning, reading and about scanning reading and detailed reading.

✓ I prefer scanning and detailed reading.

The original repeats words and uses 'and about' incorrectly. Combine the two types succinctly: 'scanning and detailed reading'.

× But maybe I choose only one.

✓ But maybe I would choose only one.

Use conditional/modal 'would' to indicate a hypothetical choice. 'Choose' alone sounds abrupt; 'would choose' fits the tentative meaning 'maybe'.

× I prefer scanning because uh, I'm uh, I'm a very hurry in a hurry person, so uh, I want to check the points and information about the topic.

✓ I prefer scanning because I'm a very hurried person, so I want to check the main points and information about the topic.

'In a hurry' is an idiom but incorrectly used here; use 'hurried' (adjective) or 'I tend to be in a hurry'. 'Very hurry' is incorrect. Also 'check the points' is better as 'check the main points'. Removed filler 'uh' and duplicate 'I'm' for clarity.