Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Сократите заполнители (например, «umm») и дайте более конкретное объяснение причины, почему вам не нравятся традиционные романы. Начните с прямого тематического предложения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных примера или деталей, связывая мысли связкой (например, «because» или «for example»).

Exemplo: To be honest, I'm not really a bookworm; I mostly read manga and manhwa. I prefer them because their visual format and shorter chapters keep the story moving, whereas many traditional novels feel slow to me. For example, I enjoy series with clear episodic arcs because they hold my interest.

Sugestão: Устраните небольшие грамматические неточности и сделайте второе предложение более естественным: используйте связку причинно-следственного характера и приведите конкретный пример того, что вы копируете или как это помогает вам. Избегайте повторов (например, «paper reading materials» звучит громоздко).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because staring at a screen makes my eyes tired. For that reason, I often print articles or copy important passages into a notebook so I can read comfortably and review notes later.

Sugestão: Уберите паузы и лишние слова, исправьте форму глаголов и уточните пример: объясните, какие именно детали вы запоминаете и в каких ситуациях применяете поверхностное чтение, используя связки («when», «because», «however»).

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to memorize facts or fully understand complex ideas, for example when studying for exams. However, if I'm only curious about a topic or just looking for general information, I skim the text to save time.

Sugestão: Отличный краткий ответ; можно сделать его более естественным, добавив плавные связки и конкретный пример для каждой стратегии чтения, чтобы показать контроль над формой и содержанием.

Exemplo: It depends on my goal: I use detailed reading to understand ideas and context deeply, for example when reading academic articles. In contrast, I scan when I'm looking for specific facts or dates, such as when searching for a phone number or a key statistic.

× I have read a few books but mostly I enjoy reading manga and manhwa which are Japanese and Korean comics.

✓ I have read a few books, but mostly I enjoy reading manga and manhwa, which are Japanese and Korean comics.

Missing commas around the nonessential relative clause 'which are Japanese and Korean comics' and missing comma before coordinating conjunction 'but' joining independent clauses. Use commas to set off nonrestrictive clauses and to separate independent clauses joined by a conjunction. Suggestion: Add a comma before 'but' and commas around the clause starting with 'which'.

× Umm. I often find traditional novels quite boring, probably because of umm story.

✓ I often find traditional novels quite boring, probably because of the story.

Awkward phrase 'because of umm story' lacks article and contains filler words. 'Story' here is a noun requiring the definite article 'the'. Remove fillers like 'umm' in formal responses. Suggestion: Use 'because of the story' or 'because of the plot' and avoid fillers.

× I prefer reading on paper rather than on screen because staring at screen makes my eyes feel uncomfortable and tired.

✓ I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because staring at a screen makes my eyes feel uncomfortable and tired.

Countable noun 'screen' requires an article when singular; use 'a screen' or 'the screen'. Also add 'a' before 'screen' twice. Suggestion: Use 'on a screen' and 'staring at a screen'.

× For this reason, I try to copy on paper reading materials.

✓ For this reason, I try to copy reading materials onto paper.

Incorrect word order and preposition use: 'copy on paper reading materials' is ungrammatical. The correct order places the object 'reading materials' after 'copy' and the destination 'onto paper' after the object. Suggestion: Use 'copy reading materials onto paper'.

× I read carefully when I need to memorize some details or for deeper understanding of the texts.

✓ I read carefully when I need to memorize some details or gain a deeper understanding of the texts.

Parallelism error: 'when I need to memorize some details or for deeper understanding' mixes a verb phrase with a prepositional phrase. Make structures parallel by using two verb phrases: 'need to memorize' and 'gain a deeper understanding'. Suggestion: Use parallel verb forms and include article 'a' before 'deeper understanding'.

× However, umm, if the information is not essential and it's purely of the curiosity, I try to skimming instead.

✓ However, if the information is not essential and it's purely out of curiosity, I try to skim instead.

Multiple issues: 'purely of the curiosity' is incorrect prepositional phrase—use 'out of curiosity'. 'I try to skimming' mixes verb forms; after 'try to' use the base verb 'skim'. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: Use 'out of curiosity' and 'try to skim'.

× It really depends on the purpose.

✓ It really depends on the purpose.

No grammatical error detected; sentence is correct in present tense and appropriate for context. Suggestion: None.

× I use detailed reading when I want to understand fully ideas and context, but I prefer scanning when I want to find key information.

✓ I use detailed reading when I want to fully understand ideas and context, but I prefer scanning when I want to find key information.

Adverb placement: 'understand fully' is acceptable but more natural to place adverb before the verb's object as 'fully understand ideas and context'. This improves fluency. Suggestion: Place adverb 'fully' before the verb 'understand'.