Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更有条理并减少犹豫词（如 uh, um）。开头直接给出观点，然后用两到三句具体支持理由，避免无意义或不完整的句子。此外注意语法和时态，以及表达清晰的情感或结果。可以把“brought my eyesight and I felt very”改为明确的结果句。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me relax after a busy day and lets me learn about different cultures and places. For example, I recently read a novel about Japan that taught me a lot about local customs. Reading also makes me feel calm and refreshed.

Sugestão: 回答要更准确地使用时态和句子结构，避免重复（例如 “read on a screen” 和 “reading read on a screen”）。给出一至两个具体原因并用连接词（because, so, therefore）使逻辑更清楚。结尾可简短总结。

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the tactile feel of pages and find screens strain my eyes. For instance, after reading on my phone for a long time I often have headaches, so paper books are more comfortable for long sessions.

Sugestão: 回答需要更清晰地划分两种情形，注意语法（如 remove 'must to' → 'must'或 'need to'），并用连接词对比（e.g. when…but when…）。避免含糊的短语如 'academic missions'，用更自然的词如 'assignments' 或 'studies'。

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm studying or preparing for assignments because I must understand details and facts. However, when I'm reading for leisure at night, I just skim and enjoy the story without focusing on every detail.

Sugestão: 避免口头填充词（uh, umm），用更简洁的句子说明偏好并给出具体原因。注意使用正确的搭配（e.g. 'helpful for me to understand' 而不是 'help helpful to me to detailed'）。可以举例说明何时会选择精读。

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the book and the author's ideas. For example, when I read a biography I pay attention to dates and events so I can learn the author’s perspective and background.

× Yes, I like reading because I think reading is very, uh, relaxed and uh, relaxed way to help me after a busy day and through books I can know more about the world and different culture. It brought my eyesight and I felt very.

✓ Yes, I like reading because I think reading is a very relaxing way to help me after a busy day, and through books I can learn more about the world and different cultures. It relaxed me and I felt very good.

句子中“relaxed”用作形容人或感受时表示“感到放松”，但这里要表示“使人放松的方式”，应使用现在分词或形容词“relaxing”。“know” 在此处应改为动词短语“learn about”。“different culture”应使用复数“different cultures”。最后一句不完整且用词错误，‘It brought my eyesight and I felt very.’没有意义，推测想表达“这让我放松，我感觉很好”，应改为“It relaxed me and I felt very good.” 建议多注意形容词/副词和动名词的区别，按语义选择正确形式，注意名词单复数和完整句子表达。

× Actually I prefer to read on paper because I think reading read on a screen didn't have the touch feeling and it is doesn't good to my eyes.

✓ Actually I prefer to read on paper because I think reading on a screen doesn't have the tactile feel and it isn't good for my eyes.

原句中有多处介词和短语用法不当："reading read on a screen"重复动词，应删去一个；"the touch feeling"应改为更自然的短语"the tactile feel"或"the feeling of touch"；"it is doesn't good to my eyes"中有助动词和否定词重复，且介词应为"for"而不是"to"。建议练习常用固定搭配，如"good for someone's eyes"和避免重复动词。

× When I read paper books I felt very relaxed and I like it.

✓ When I read paper books I feel very relaxed and I like them.

此句时态和指代不一致：前半句使用过去式"felt"，但陈述习惯性喜好应使用一般现在时"feel"。另外"I like it"中代指复数名词"paper books"，应使用宾格复数代词"them"或者改为单数"a paper book... it"。建议保持时态一致并用正确代词指代。

× Actually, when I have some academic missions or own class, I must to read carefully about the contents in the books and one night at home to relax.

✓ Actually, when I have some academic assignments or classes, I must read carefully about the contents in the books, and one night at home I can relax.

原句中时态混乱且词语选择错误："academic missions" 应为常用名词"academic assignments"或"academic tasks"；"own class"应为复数或复合表达"classes"；"must to read"错误地在must后加to，助动词must后应接动词原形"read"；句子后半部分结构不完整，推测为“某晚在家放松”，应用能愿动词如"can relax"或重写为完整句。建议注意助动词后不加to，使用常见名词搭配并保持句子完整。

× And so I don't need to read more carefully and just for relax.

✓ So I don't need to read more carefully and just relax.

短语"just for relax"不符合动词使用规则，"for"后应接名词或动名词（relaxing），但这里更自然直接用动词原形"relax"与主句并列。若用名词形式应改为"just for relaxation"。建议熟悉不定式/动名词及介词搭配的用法。

× Actually I prefer a detailed reading because I think uh, it is very umm help helpful to me to detailed the whole book contents and uh, it helped me to know more about the authors to write this book or write the article.

✓ Actually I prefer detailed reading because I think it is very helpful for me to understand the whole contents of a book in detail, and it helps me to learn more about the authors who write the book or the article.

句子中时态和形式混乱："help helpful"重复错误，应为"helpful"；"to detailed the whole book contents"中"detailed"误用为动词，应改为副词短语"in detail"或动词"detail"的正确结构，同时"helped"与现在习惯性陈述不符，应用一般现在时"helps"。此外"authors to write this book"应改为定语从句"authors who write the book"或过去式"who wrote"取决于上下文。建议理清时态（一般现在描述习惯）并使用固定表达如"in detail"、"helpful"和"helps me to learn"。