Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar: give a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use past/present consistently and correct phrasing (e.g., “I read a few pages before bed every night”). Include a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., “so” or “because”).

Exemplo: I do — I usually read a few pages before bed every night. For example, I read about two or three pages around 8 or 9 pm because it helps me relax and sleep better.

Sugestão: Clarify preference with one clear sentence, correct word choice (use “paper” or “physical books”), and give a concise reason. Avoid filler words and fragmented sentences. Use a linking word (e.g., “because” or “although”) to connect preference and reason.

Exemplo: I prefer reading physical books rather than screens because holding a paper book helps me concentrate more. Although I sometimes use a phone or tablet when a paper copy isn't available, I find printed pages easier on my eyes.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence about when careful reading is needed, followed by a specific example and brief reason. Correct grammar (e.g., “Before an exam” or “when the plot is complex”) and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words like “for example” or “because.”

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the plot or language is complex, for example with thrillers or academic texts, because small details and tone often carry important meaning. For light fiction or simple instructions I skim rather than read every word.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give a concise reason and an example. Reduce repetition and improve sentence structure (e.g., avoid “whatever the book is”). Use linking words such as “because” and “for example.”

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because scanning often makes me miss important ideas. For instance, when I study or read novels I read sentence by sentence to fully understand the meaning.

× I like the reading books before bed.

✓ I like reading books before bed.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before a general plural noun 'reading books'. Remove 'the' to express the general activity. Suggestion: omit articles with plural nouns when speaking generally.

× I always read one book, like 2-3 pages or three like kind of thing.

✓ I usually read one book for about 2-3 pages each night.

The original mixes singular/plural and vague phrasing. Use 'usually' for frequency and 'about 2-3 pages' for approximate quantity. Also clarify 'each night' to indicate when.

× After getting after reading that book, I got that good sleep.

✓ After reading that book, I get a good sleep.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'got' and redundant 'after getting after'. For habitual action use present simple 'get'. Remove redundant words.

× Yeah, every day I read the book around 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM before the bed happens.

✓ Every day I read around 8:00 PM or 9:00 PM before bed.

Do not use 'the' before 'bed' in this expression and avoid 'happens'. Use 'before bed' as the standard phrase and omit 'the book' if speaking generally.

× I always prefer the uh property instead of screen because if when I was reading, when I reading, read the when I read the book, I feel like it's physical book.

✓ I prefer paper to screens because when I read a physical book I can feel it is tangible.

Replace unclear 'property' with 'paper' and use 'prefer X to Y' structure. Simplify tense and pronoun references: 'when I read' is correct; 'it is tangible' clarifies 'physical book' feeling.

× Uh, other than remaining times, I've always using the screens right away.

✓ At other times, I always use screens instead.

Original has incorrect progressive form and awkward phrase 'remaining times'. Use simple present 'use' for habitual actions and 'at other times' for contrast.

× The screens where the books are available.

✓ I use screens when books are available on them.

'Where' is misused and sentence is a fragment. Make a full clause: subject 'I' and verb 'use'. Clarify meaning: use screens when books are available on them.

× If not ever you have to use the phone, but the books are.

✓ If not, you have to use your phone to read the books.

Original is ungrammatical and incomplete. Use conditional 'If not' and complete the clause with 'to read the books' and appropriate possessive 'your phone'.

× Yeah, before, before like 5 minutes before the bad.

✓ Yes, about five minutes before bed.

Remove repetition and correct 'bad' to 'bed'. Use 'about five minutes before bed' as standard time expression.

× Especially I read very careful and especially at the like the tones and this you need to understand that one like thriller so that I'm also I read very careful and reminding them since it goes like quick.

✓ I read very carefully, especially the tone in thrillers, because you need to follow them closely as they move quickly.

Use adverb 'carefully' not adjective. Clarify 'tone in thrillers' and reason. Avoid repeated 'especially' and 'like'. Use 'move quickly' instead of 'goes like quick'.

× I always follow the detailed reading.

✓ I always do detailed reading.

'Follow the detailed reading' is awkward. Use 'do detailed reading' or 'prefer detailed reading' to express habit.

× I don't want to scan, skim the books.

✓ I don't want to scan or skim books.

Use parallel structure with 'or' between verbs and omit 'the' for general statement.

× Like if you scan something you didn't understand that when you miss all the meaning of the whatever the book is paragraph is.

✓ If you scan something, you won't understand it and you miss the meaning of the paragraph.

Use conditional with comma and consistent tense: 'won't understand' for future consequence. Remove fillers 'whatever' and fix word order 'meaning of the paragraph'.

× So I always read very carefully by word by word like that.

✓ So I always read very carefully, word by word.

Use adverb 'carefully' and idiomatic phrase 'word by word'. Remove redundant 'like that'.