Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct tense (present perfect vs past) and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid unnecessary words like "it" after "like" and choose countable/uncountable forms correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. Since childhood I have read many manga and novels by Japanese authors, and I especially like stories with strong character development.

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and confident. Use correct phrases: "it depends" and "read on paper." Give one clear reason with a linking word (because/so) and avoid fillers like "uh" and repeated words. Limit to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: It depends, but generally I prefer reading on paper because I find I remember information better when I hold a book. For example, I can recall page locations and notes more easily after studying from paper.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and clearer structure: state the situation first, then explain why with specific details. Replace "it's including" with "they include" and avoid unnecessary fillers. Keep to two sentences maximum and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when studying materials from my university professors because they include many difficult terms in economics and politics. In contrast, I skim light articles or news when I just want a quick overview.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and improve coherence. Use a clear topic sentence: state preference, then give a reason with a linking word. Correct phrasing like "I read books slowly" and "it's a better way". Provide a brief example of when you use scanning instead.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I read books slowly to fully understand the ideas. However, I sometimes scan articles when I only need the main points for quick research.

× Since I was a child, I had read many mangas and books written by Japanese writers.

✓ Since I was a child, I have read many mangas and books written by Japanese writers.

The original uses past perfect 'had read' which implies a specific past time before another past action; however the speaker refers to an experience from childhood continuing to now, so present perfect 'have read' is appropriate. Use present perfect for life experiences or actions with relevance to the present. Suggestion: use 'have read' for experiences up to now.

× Uh, well, it's depending on the situation, but in general, I prefer reading the paper because, uh, by reading the screens, I cannot memorize anything.

✓ Uh, well, it depends on the situation, but in general, I prefer reading on paper because when I read on screens, I cannot memorize anything.

'It's depending' is incorrect; stative verbs like 'depend' take simple present 'depends' or 'depend' with it/subject. Also 'reading the paper' should be 'reading on paper' and 'by reading the screens' is unnatural; use 'when I read on screens'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual states and correct prepositions: 'depend on', 'read on paper/on screens'.

× But I, I don't know why, but I can memorize everything by reading the paper.

✓ But I don't know why, I can memorize everything by reading on paper.

Minor redundancy 'I, I' and preposition 'by reading the paper' is awkward; use 'reading on paper'. Use simple present 'can memorize' is correct for ability. Suggestion: remove duplicated filler and use correct preposition.

× Ah well, I had to read carefully when I read some materials given by the university professors because it's including the many difficult terms about the economics and politics.

✓ Ah well, I have to read carefully when I read materials given by university professors because they include many difficult terms about economics and politics.

Original mixes past perfect 'had to' and present reference; use present 'have to' for general obligation. 'It's including' is incorrect; use 'they include' (simple present) to describe content. Also 'the many' and 'the economics and politics' are incorrect articles; use no article: 'many difficult terms about economics and politics.' Suggestion: use consistent present tense for general statements and correct subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× Well, I prefer detailed reading because I read the book they slowly, so it's better way to understand the book's content.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because I read books slowly, so it's a better way to understand the book's content.

'I read the book they slowly' is ungrammatical: likely intended 'I read books slowly'. Change 'the book' to plural 'books' to match general preference and remove 'they'. Also add the article 'a' before 'better way'. Use simple present for habits. Suggestion: say 'I read books slowly, so it's a better way to understand the book's content.'