Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and pronunciation errors, and give a brief reason with one supporting detail. Use linking words if adding more information.

Exemplo: To be honest, I don't enjoy reading much. I often feel sleepy when I read, so I prefer other activities like watching videos. However, I sometimes read short articles when I need information quickly.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, use correct grammar, and give two specific reasons linked logically. Replace vague phrases with precise vocabulary and avoid fillers.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because digital content is easy to access anytime and it is regularly updated. For example, I can quickly scroll through news apps to catch headlines, and I can search for additional information instantly.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence that describes the general rule, then give one or two specific examples using correct tense and linking words. Be concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation: I read carefully when I need to remember or use the information later, such as for an exam or a work report. In contrast, I skim articles or social posts when I just want a quick update.

Sugestão: Answer directly using natural phrasing, explain why with specific reasons, and give a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I usually want a quick overview of the main idea. For example, when I read news or blogs, I scan headings and the first paragraph to see if it's worth reading in full.

× To be honest, I don't like to read because it's make me feel more, uh, sleepy and I don't like red, uh, so.

✓ To be honest, I don't like to read because it makes me feel more sleepy and I don't like reading, so.

Errors: 'it's make' uses incorrect subject and verb form; correct subject is 'it' and verb should be third person singular 'makes' (Third person singular issue, ID 2/27). 'red' is a misspelling/incorrect form; context needs the gerund 'reading'. Suggestions: Use 'it makes' for describing effect and 'reading' as the noun form. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× I prefer to read on a screen because paper we don't found easily and screen every time.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because we don't find paper easily and screens are available most of the time.

Errors: 'paper we don't found' uses wrong verb tense and word order; 'found' should be 'find' and subject should precede verb (Present tense issue and sentence structure, IDs 6 and 26). 'screen every time' is unclear; use 'screens are available most of the time' to express frequency and plurality (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Suggestions: Keep present simple 'we don't find' and pluralize 'screens' when speaking generally.

× Whenever we scroll that time we read some kind of information and it's help us to, uh, get that news.

✓ Whenever we scroll, we read some information and it helps us get the news.

Errors: 'it's help us to get that news' has incorrect verb form after 'it' (should be 'it helps' third person singular) and unnecessary particle 'to' before 'get' in this structure (Third person singular issue ID 2; Verb + -ing/form and sentence structure ID 8/26). 'some kind of information' can be simplified to 'some information'. Suggestions: Use 'it helps us get' and remove filler words.

× Uh, it's depending on the situation.

✓ Uh, it depends on the situation.

Errors: 'it's depending' uses progressive with 'depend' where simple present is appropriate; 'it depends' is the correct expression (Present tense issue ID 6; There be issue ID 3 is related but primary is tense). Suggestions: Use simple present 'it depends' to describe general truths or habitual situations.

× If I will have paper a few days later, then I need to read carefully that book and also remember everything.

✓ If I have the paper in a few days, then I will need to read that book carefully and remember everything.

Errors: In conditional sentences, English uses present simple in the if-clause, not 'will' (Future tense issue ID 7). Also 'need to read carefully that book' has awkward word order; place adverb 'carefully' after the verb phrase or before the verb for clarity. Use 'the paper' or 'the book' consistently. Suggestions: Use 'If I have... then I will need...' for first conditional and reorder modifiers for natural English.

× So I need I, I did, I do to read carefully.

✓ So I need to read carefully.

Errors: The original repeats pronouns and mixed tenses leading to an ungrammatical fragment (Sentence structure errors ID 26). 'I need to read carefully' is the concise, correct form. Suggestions: Avoid repeating subjects and unnecessary tense shifts; use a simple declarative sentence.

× High profile scanning reading because I like to read and know the only.

✓ I prefer skimming or scanning because I like to get the main idea.

Errors: 'High profile scanning reading' is an incorrect and awkward phrase (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs ID 13; sentence structure ID 26). 'I like to read and know the only' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'know only the main points' or 'get the main idea.' Suggestions: Use standard terms 'skimming' or 'scanning' and 'get the main idea' for clarity.

× I just wanna know the topic and what is going to happen.

✓ I just want to know the topic and what is going to happen.

Errors: 'wanna' is informal spoken contraction; replace with 'want to' for proper writing (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12 partly, but mainly register and contraction; we include as pronoun/word usage). Suggestion: Use 'want to' in formal contexts; sentence otherwise grammatically correct.

× I don't like to read literally so.

✓ I don't like to read in detail, so I avoid it.

Errors: 'read literally' is incorrect word choice; 'literally' misused as adverb and 'so' hanging at end makes sentence incomplete (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs ID 13; adverb placement ID 20; sentence structure ID 26). Suggestions: Use 'read in detail' or 'read thoroughly' and complete the sentence with a result clause if using 'so.'