Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子结构和时态不够准确，表达有冗余且有语法错误。回答应更直接地回应问题并控制在最多5句内。可以先给出主题句（Yes/No + 简短原因），然后用1-2个具体细节支持，注意主谓一致和代词使用。比如把“most of people”改为“most people”，把“pay more attention on my mobile phone”改为“focus more on my phone”。

Exemplo: Yes, I used to read a lot, but recently I read less because I spend more time on my smartphone. For example, I often browse news and social media during my commute, which leaves me with less time for books.

Sugestão: 表达清晰度和语法需改进，存在多余词和连接词错误（“The but”应删除）。可以先给出直接答案，再用一两个具体原因支持，并使用连接词使句子流畅。避免重复并用更自然的短语如“adjust the brightness”而不是“the brightness... can change by yourself”。

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because you can easily adjust the brightness to suit different lighting conditions. Also, digital texts are portable and let me search for information quickly.

Sugestão: 回答有重复（“read my read”）且句子略显笨拙。应先给出直接回应（e.g. I need to read carefully during exams and official documents），然後提供简洁具体的例子和原因。注意冠词和名词短语的搭配，例如“on the answer paper”或更自然的“the exam paper”。

Exemplo: I need to read very carefully during exams and when signing official documents, because misunderstanding a question or clause can lead to serious mistakes. For everyday messages or social media posts, I usually skim instead.

Sugestão: 表达上有重复和不完整（句尾缺少对象），逻辑可以更清楚地对比两种阅读方式。建议先给出偏好并说明原因，再承认另一种方法的优点。使用连词（however, whereas）使对比更自然。

Exemplo: I usually prefer scanning because it helps me gather a lot of information quickly when time is limited. However, detailed reading is better if I need to understand a topic deeply or study for exams.

× In the past, I loved reading very much, but nowadays, with the development of the technology, most of people, including me, pay more attention on my mobile phone.

✓ In the past, I loved reading very much, but nowadays, with the development of technology, most people, including me, pay more attention to their mobile phones.

存在多处时态和用法问题：句首“ In the past, I loved”与“nowadays”对比合理，但‘the technology’中的定冠词不必要，通常用复数或无冠词的“technology”。“most of people”搭配不正确，应为“most people”。动词短语应使用“pay attention to”而非“pay attention on”，且代词需与主语一致，原句混用了第一人称和单数物主代词，改为“their mobile phones”或保留“me”改为“my mobile phone”。建议：注意固定搭配‘pay attention to’，注意冠词使用及主语与代词一致性。

× I prefer to read on a screen because the brightness of the screen can change by yourself and satisfies your needs. The but the paper can't change.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because the screen brightness can be adjusted by yourself and satisfies your needs, but paper can't be changed.

错误主要在介词和被动结构：‘change by yourself’不自然，正确表达应为‘be adjusted by yourself’或‘you can adjust’。句中多余的定冠词‘the’和连接词顺序也有问题，‘The but the paper can't change’语序错误，改为‘but paper can't be changed’或更自然的‘but paper can't be adjusted’。建议：使用被动时注意‘be + 过去分词’，或改用主动语态‘you can adjust the screen brightness’；连接词‘but’前不加定冠词。

× Of course, during the examination I have to read my read the questions in answer paper very carefully because it may influence the result of the examination.

✓ Of course, during the examination I have to read the questions on the answer sheet very carefully because it may influence the result of the examination.

问题包括用词和介词错误：‘read my read the questions’有重复和语序错误；常用搭配为‘questions on the answer sheet’而不是‘in answer paper’。时态‘have to read’用于考试期间是正确的（现在时表示习惯或必需）。建议：删去重复词，使用固定搭配‘answer sheet’或‘answer paper’前加冠词并用介词‘on’。

× I prefer scanning because in the limited time scanning can get more information and let me acquire more knowledge. But detailed reading can only know a little knowledge about a specific part of the.

✓ I prefer skimming because, in limited time, skimming can get more information and allow me to acquire more knowledge. But detailed reading can only give a little information about a specific part of the text.

句子结构和词汇选择有误：英语中常用'skimming'或'scanning'需根据语义选择（若指快速浏览信息应为'skimming'或'scanning'），‘in the limited time’更自然为‘in limited time’或‘in a limited time’；‘let me acquire’应为‘allow me to acquire’或‘help me acquire’；最后一句语法不完整，缺少宾语并且‘know a little knowledge’表达错误，应改为‘give a little information’或‘provide limited knowledge about a specific part of the text’。建议：注意名词搭配（information vs knowledge），保持句子完整并选择合适的动词搭配。