Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Nói ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh sử dụng từ lặp, tiếng ồn (umm/uh). Trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1-2 lí do cụ thể với ví dụ. Hãy sửa ngữ pháp (e.g. "conservation" → "conversation") và tránh lỗi từ loại. Cố gắng giữ tối đa 4 câu và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: No, I don't enjoy reading very much because I often find it boring. Instead, I prefer listening to podcasts, which keep me engaged with interviews and stories. For example, I follow a weekly science podcast that helps me learn new facts while commuting.

Sugestão: Trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và sửa ngữ pháp, trật tự từ (e.g. "from my opinion" → "in my opinion", "refer to read in a screen" → "prefer reading on a screen"). Nêu hai lý do ngắn gọn, cụ thể và liên kết bằng từ nối như "because" hoặc "moreover". Giữ tối đa 4 câu và sửa thì/ngữ pháp.

Exemplo: In my opinion, I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. I can access articles on my phone or tablet anywhere, which saves time. Moreover, digital apps help me organize notes and highlighted passages easily.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và chính xác hơn về ngữ pháp; tránh cấu trúc lủng củng (e.g. "if they will have some reason to distinguish" không cần thiết). Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề tường minh, sau đó nêu hai tình huống cụ thể và dùng liên từ như "when" hoặc "however". Giữ ngắn gọn tối đa 4 câu.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to understand important information, for example before exams or when studying difficult topics. However, I skim or read quickly when I'm reading for pleasure, like novels or blogs, because I just want to enjoy the story.

Sugestão: Câu mở đầu tốt nhưng cần tránh tiếng lặp ("I I", "in in"). Trình bày rõ hai lựa chọn với ví dụ ngắn và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g. "if... then..., otherwise..."). Sửa câu cuối cho tự nhiên ("do more some activities" → "do other activities"). Giữ tối đa 4 câu.

Exemplo: It depends on my goal: if I'm preparing for an exam, I read in detail to fully understand the material. Otherwise, I scan texts quickly to get the main ideas so I can spend time on other activities like exercise or hobbies.

× Personally, no, because I find uh, reading is extremely, uh, boring.

✓ Personally, no, because I find reading extremely boring.

The issue is unnecessary filler words and punctuation; remove extra commas and hesitations so the sentence is grammatically correct and fluent. Keep 'find reading extremely boring' rather than 'find uh, reading is extremely, uh, boring' which incorrectly repeats a clause. Suggestions: practice speaking without fillers and use the structure 'I find + noun/adjective' for opinions.

× Instead, I usually umm, listen to the podcast and have some uh, actual conservation with my friends because I find it much more interesting and helpful.

✓ Instead, I usually listen to podcasts and have actual conversations with my friends because I find them much more interesting and helpful.

Plural and word choice errors: 'the podcast' should be plural 'podcasts' when speaking generally; 'conservation' is incorrect word choice—should be 'conversations'; 'have some actual conversation' awkward—use 'have actual conversations'; pronoun reference: replace 'it' with 'them' to refer to podcasts and conversations. Suggestions: use plural forms for general habits and check vocabulary ('conversation' not 'conservation').

× Well, from my opinion, I refer to read in a screen because I think reading in screen is much more convenient.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I prefer to read on a screen because I think reading on a screen is much more convenient.

Preposition and verb choice errors: use 'in my opinion' not 'from my opinion'; 'prefer' instead of 'refer'; use preposition 'on' with 'screen' (read on a screen). Also repeat 'on a screen' for clarity. Suggestions: learn common opinion phrases ('in my opinion') and prepositions with devices ('on a screen').

× I can read it anywhere and anytime I want.

✓ I can read on it anywhere and anytime I want.

Pronoun reference: 'it' was ambiguous; better to say 'on it' to refer to the screen/device. Alternatively say 'I can read anywhere and anytime I want on a screen.' Suggestions: ensure preposition+pronoun match the noun referenced (read 'on it' for screens).

× Moreover, it can also facilitate my schedule because I usually overwhelmed with my homework.

✓ Moreover, it can also help manage my schedule because I am usually overwhelmed with my homework.

Missing auxiliary verb for passive/adj state: 'usually overwhelmed' needs 'am' to form 'I am usually overwhelmed'. Also 'facilitate my schedule' is awkward; 'help manage my schedule' is more natural. Suggestions: use proper auxiliary verbs for states and choose common collocations ('help manage').

× Actually, if they will have some reason to distinguish 2 type of reading.

✓ Actually, if there is a reason to distinguish two types of reading,

There be issue and number agreement: use 'there is' not 'they will have'; use 'two types' plural and write out numbers in speaking transcripts. Sentence fragment: needs completion or attach to main clause. Suggestions: use 'there is/are' for existence and ensure subject-verb agreement and complete the sentence.

× First of all, I need to read carefully when I take an exam at school so that I can have a good mark.

✓ First of all, I need to read carefully when I take an exam at school so that I can get a good grade.

Word choice: 'have a good mark' is awkward; in English use 'get a good grade' or 'score well'. Suggestions: prefer natural collocations like 'get a good grade'.

× On the other hand, I when I want to entertain, I just read it quickly.

✓ On the other hand, when I want to relax/for entertainment, I just read quickly.

Word order and pronoun issue: extra 'I' after 'On the other hand,' incorrect 'entertain' verb—use 'for entertainment' or 'to relax'; avoid 'read it' unless referring to a specific text. Suggestions: use correct expressions for leisure reading: 'when I want to relax' or 'for entertainment, I just read quickly.'

× Actually it depends on my goal of reading.

✓ Actually, it depends on my reading goal.

Word order and article: 'my goal of reading' is awkward; 'my reading goal' or 'my goal for reading' is more natural. Add comma after 'Actually'. Suggestions: prefer concise noun phrases like 'reading goal'.

× For example, if I want to read carefully for my exam, I I would read it in in detail to have a good mark.

✓ For example, if I want to read carefully for my exam, I would read it in detail to get a good grade.

Remove duplicated words 'I I' and 'in in'; use 'in detail' not 'in in detail'; 'would' is acceptable in conditional but simple 'I read it in detail' or 'I would read it in detail' both possible—keep 'would' for hypothetical. Replace 'have a good mark' with 'get a good grade'. Suggestions: slow down to avoid repetitions and use common collocations.

× On the other hand, I will prefer scanning to read it quickly and do more some activities.

✓ On the other hand, I prefer scanning to read quickly and do more activities.

Modal/tense and word order: 'will prefer' is unnatural for habitual preference—use 'prefer'; 'read it quickly' unnecessary pronoun; 'do more some activities' incorrect word order—use 'do more activities'. Suggestions: use simple present for habits and correct adjective order: 'more activities' not 'more some activities'.