Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn; tránh dùng cụm từ mơ hồ như “something” và thêm chi tiết cụ thể; giữ câu ngắn gọn (<=5 câu) và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading new books because they help me relax and reduce stress. I also learn a lot, especially about history and personal development, which I can apply in my daily life.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: "it have myself" không đúng); tránh cảm tính quá chung chung, mô tả rõ lý do như cảm giác xúc giác, mỏi mắt; dùng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the tactile sensation of holding a book. Reading on screens strains my eyes and distracts me, so I find physical books more comfortable for long sessions.

Sugestão: Làm rõ hoàn cảnh cụ thể và dùng từ chính xác như "keywords" hoặc "important details"; cấu trúc câu nên ngắn gọn với chủ đề rõ ràng rồi bổ sung chi tiết bằng liên từ.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm looking for keywords or important details, such as when studying for an exam or checking a contract. For casual reading, like news headlines, I usually just skim for the main idea.

Sugestão: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "it make" → "it makes"), loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng như "uh" và diễn đạt rõ kết quả của việc đọc chi tiết; dùng liên từ để kết nối lý do và hậu quả.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it allows me to fully immerse myself in the story and understand the ideas deeply. As a result, I retain more information and can reflect on the author's arguments.

× Yes I do, I really enjoy reading new books because I feel release my stress and get more knowledge about something.

✓ Yes, I do. I really enjoy reading new books because I feel it releases my stress and helps me gain more knowledge about various things.

The sentence used 'feel release my stress' which is incorrect word order and form. Use 'feel it releases my stress' or 'it relieves my stress'. Also 'get more knowledge about something' is vague and uses incorrect verb form; use 'helps me gain more knowledge about various things'. Improve by using subject + verb agreement and clear noun phrases. ID:13

× I am a big fan of reading books because I love the feeling when I touch paper and I hate the read on the screen because it have myself and it make me tired of eyes.

✓ I am a big fan of reading books because I love the feeling of touching paper, and I hate reading on a screen because it strains my eyes and makes me tired.

Several issues: 'the feeling when I touch paper' is better as 'the feeling of touching paper'. 'hate the read on the screen' is incorrect: use 'hate reading on a screen'. 'it have myself' is ungrammatical and unclear; intended meaning is 'it strains me' or 'it makes my eyes tired' so use 'it strains my eyes'. 'make me tired of eyes' should be 'makes me tired' or 'makes my eyes tired'. Correct word forms and collocations. ID:13

× I think the time when I need to read carefully, that is the moment when I want to find out the keyword or something.

✓ I think the time when I need to read carefully is when I want to find keywords or specific information.

Original is redundant and awkward ('the time when... that is the moment when'). Also 'find out the keyword or something' is vague; use plural 'keywords' or 'specific information'. Simplify clause structure: 'the time ... is when ...'. ID:26

× I want to read carefully on detail of information.

✓ I want to read carefully to get details of the information.

Incorrect preposition 'on' and noun form 'detail' should be 'details'. Use purpose phrase 'to get details of the information' or 'to read information in detail'. Recommend 'read information in detail' for natural phrasing. ID:11

× I prefer detailed reading because it make me feel uh immerse myself in the story of books and I can gain carefully knowledge.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it makes me feel immersed in the story of a book and I can gain knowledge more deeply.

Errors: 'it make' should be 'it makes' (subject-verb agreement but here treated as adjective/adverb issue too), 'feel uh immerse myself' incorrect form; use 'feel immersed' or 'helps me immerse myself'. 'story of books' better 'story of a book' or 'stories in books'. 'gain carefully knowledge' wrong adverb placement and collocation; use 'gain knowledge more deeply' or 'gain in-depth knowledge'. ID:13}]}ющие