Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise by fixing grammar and sentence flow. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g. "after reading relaxing" is incorrect) and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially novels and short stories. I find it relaxing and it helps me focus on a single story, which lets me escape from stress after school. For instance, a short story can lift my mood after a busy day.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and use clearer linking to compare paper and screen. Begin with a direct choice, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g. "because", "however"). Avoid awkward phrasing like "have me focus" and "offer strains".

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because printed books help me focus and I remember information better. However, reading on screens often strains my eyes, especially during long sessions, so I usually avoid them for heavy reading.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but needs smoother language and a linking phrase to contrast the two situations. Be slightly more specific about what "study materials" means and give a brief example to support the point.

Exemplo: I read carefully when studying textbooks or notes because I need to understand concepts and sometimes memorize key facts. By contrast, when I read fiction for pleasure I usually skim to get the general plot and enjoy the story more quickly.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement) and clarify vocabulary ("sense" unclear). Structure: start with a clear preference sentence, then give a linked specific example. Keep sentences concise and correct.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me notice details I might otherwise miss and improves my understanding. For example, when I read science or history articles slowly, I often discover interesting facts that make the topic more engaging.

× Yes, I really enjoy reading, especially novels and short stories after reading relaxing and it helps me concentrate on a single story so I can escape from stress after school.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy reading, especially novels and short stories, because it's relaxing and helps me concentrate on a single story so I can escape from the stress of school.

The original sentence has run-on structure and unclear phrasing ('after reading relaxing'). This is a sentence structure error: clauses need proper connectors and punctuation. Use 'because' to show reason, add commas, change 'after school' to 'the stress of school' for clarity, and use 'it's' (it is) to complete the clause.

× I guess I will choose the old school one.

✓ I guess I would choose the old-school option.

'I will choose' sounds too definite for a preference; 'would' or simple present 'choose' better expresses preference. Also 'old school' as adjective should be hyphenated when before a noun and 'one' is vague; 'option' is clearer.

× I prefer reading on paper because printed books have me focus and I find it easier to remember what I read.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because printed books help me focus, and I find it easier to remember what I read.

'have me focus' is incorrect collocation; 'help me focus' is correct. There is also a missing comma before 'and' joining independent clauses.

× But reading on the screen offer strains my eyes, especially when I read for the long time.

✓ But reading on a screen strains my eyes, especially when I read for a long time.

'reading' is singular gerund, so verb should be 'strains' not 'offer strains'. Remove 'offer' which is incorrect here, change 'the screen' to 'a screen' and 'for the long time' to 'for a long time' for natural English.

× When I read study materials, I read very carefully because I need to fully understand and sometimes even memorize facts or the words.

✓ When I read study materials, I read very carefully because I need to fully understand and sometimes even memorize facts or words.

'the words' is unnecessary specific; use plural 'words' without 'the'. This is an article/word choice issue: removing 'the' makes the expression general and natural.

× A perfect detailed reading because it helps me notice information that I hadn't paid attention to before, which improve my understanding of the text.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me notice information that I hadn't paid attention to before, which improves my understanding of the text.

Sentence lacked a main verb ('A perfect detailed reading' is fragment). This is a verb -ing/form and sentence structure issue: start with 'I prefer' to form a complete sentence. Also 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular noun 'which' referring to 'detailed reading'.

× For example, when I read sense or history articles slowly, I often discover fun facts that makes the topic more interesting.

✓ For example, when I read science or history articles slowly, I often discover fun facts that make the topic more interesting.

Two issues: 'sense' is likely a typo for 'science', and 'that makes' should be 'that make' because 'fun facts' is plural, so verb must be plural. This is subject-verb agreement error and word choice typo.