Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct grammar and more precise linking words. Try to limit to 3–4 well-formed sentences: state that you enjoy reading, say when you read, mention your preferred genre and explain why with one clear reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading in my free time, especially history books. I usually read in the evenings after work because I find it relaxing. I prefer history because it helps me understand how past events shaped the present and gives me a lot of factual knowledge.

Sugestão: Start with a direct preference sentence, then give one or two clear reasons using linking words (because, whereas, however). Avoid vague phrases and unclear grammar. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and I enjoy turning physical pages. In contrast, reading on a screen distracts me and makes my eyes tired more quickly.

Sugestão: Answer directly by distinguishing two situations with clear reasons and linking words (when… / but when…). Avoid repeating the same phrase and improve grammar. Provide specific examples of when close reading is necessary and when skimming is enough.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is complex or important, for example, a chapter about a historical event I must remember for an exam. However, I skim articles or simple news when I just want the main idea and don’t need every detail.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference sentence, then explain why with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid redundancy. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the plot and the characters more deeply. For example, when I read a historical novel in detail I learn both the facts and the author’s perspective, which I find more satisfying.

× Yes I like reading and whenever free time that I read books and mostly I read the history books because I think that when I read history books that time get lot of knowledge about history.

✓ Yes, I like reading, and whenever I have free time I read books. Mostly I read history books because I think I get a lot of knowledge about history when I read them.

Errors include incorrect present-tense constructions and missing auxiliary verbs. Use the simple present for habits: 'I have free time' (not 'whenever free time that'). Insert subjects/auxiliaries: 'I read books.' Use 'a lot' for quantity. Place clauses in natural order: 'I get a lot of knowledge about history when I read them.' Suggestions: add commas, include 'have' after 'free time', use 'a lot', and replace 'that time' with 'when' or remove it.

× I prefer to read on paper because when I read on paper that time I make a good interest in book and but under the side when people read the book on screen that time they easily reduce the I said so that I prefer to read book on paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I read on paper I become more interested in the book. But when people read on a screen, they easily lose concentration, so I prefer reading books on paper.

Multiple present-tense and word-choice problems: use 'become more interested' or 'take more interest' instead of 'make a good interest'. Use 'lose concentration' rather than 'reduce the I said'. Use articles: 'on a screen' and 'reading books on paper'. Remove redundant 'that time'. Suggestions: simplify clauses, use correct verbs for mental states (become/feel/lose), and include appropriate articles.

× When I know the book is so interesting, so that time I read the book carefully and that time I make good focus in book so that I read the book carefully.

✓ When I know a book is interesting, I read it carefully and focus on it.

Repetitive and awkward present-tense phrasing. Use 'know a book is interesting' rather than 'know the book is so interesting'. Use pronoun 'it' for the book. 'Make good focus' is incorrect; use 'focus on it' or 'concentrate on it'. Remove redundant phrases like 'so that time' and repeated clauses. Keep simple present for habitual actions.

× And sometime when I give a good knowledge about the history and about the book, so that time I read the book carefully.

✓ Also, sometimes when I gain useful knowledge about the history or the book, I read the book carefully.

Tense and verb-choice errors: 'give a good knowledge' is incorrect; use 'gain' or 'learn'. Use 'sometimes' (not 'sometime') and maintain simple present for habitual actions. Use 'or' instead of 'and about' for clarity. Remove unnecessary 'so that time'.

× So it's a very good way for me.

✓ So it is a very good way for me to learn.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but vague. Clarify the object: 'a very good way for me to learn' makes the meaning explicit. This improves sentence structure by adding purpose.

× When I read the book in detailing and that time get lot of knowledge about the story and that time I make a good interest in stories so that it is I prefer to read the book in detailing reading.

✓ When I read a book in detail, I gain a lot of knowledge about the story and become more interested in it, so I prefer detailed reading.

Several errors: use 'in detail' rather than 'in detailing'. Use 'gain a lot of knowledge' and 'become more interested' instead of 'make a good interest'. Keep simple present tense for habitual actions. 'Detailed reading' is the correct noun phrase instead of 'detailing reading'. Remove redundant 'that time' phrases.