Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid vague phrases and repetitions, and correct verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns (e.g., “charm” not “charming”; “brings” instead of “can brings”).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. I especially like fiction because a well-written story lets me relax and imagine different worlds, which helps me unwind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then support with one clear, specific reason. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement: “books feel,” “experiences help”), and avoid unrelated or unclear words (e.g., “scenery” here is confusing). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because physical books feel comforting; I enjoy the smell and the texture, which helps me focus and read for longer periods.

Sugestão: Give a clear contrasting structure: state when careful reading is necessary and when it’s not. Use correct grammar and specific examples (e.g., academic articles vs. novels). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like “witness” or “somewhat relative.”

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when studying academic articles or preparing a research paper because accuracy matters; but I can read more casually when enjoying fiction or light articles for pleasure.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give a reason using correct vocabulary (skimming/scanning, not “scamming”). Explain context when each method is used and correct grammar (e.g., “it depends on time”). Avoid repetition and be concise.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation, but I usually scan or skim when I’m short of time to find key ideas quickly; however, I read in detail when I need to fully understand or cite material for a paper.

× No one can resist the charming from reading, especially when you are reading in a very fascinating storybook.

✓ No one can resist the charm of reading, especially when you are reading a very fascinating storybook.

The noun 'charming' is incorrect here; 'charm' (noun) is required. Also the preposition 'from' is wrong; use 'of' with 'charm'. Use 'a very fascinating storybook' (article and adjective order). Suggestion: replace 'the charming from' with 'the charm of' and keep article before 'very fascinating storybook'.

× So reading can brings a lot of real stuff for me.

✓ So reading can bring a lot of real things for me.

Modal verb 'can' must be followed by the base verb 'bring', not 'brings'. 'Stuff' is informal and vague; 'things' is more neutral. Suggestion: use 'can bring' and consider more precise nouns.

× I am definitely a friend of reading because physical book feel magical and have a special charm for me.

✓ I am definitely a fan of reading because physical books feel magical and have a special charm for me.

Use 'fan' rather than 'friend' for preference. 'Physical book' should be plural 'physical books' to match verb 'feel' (plural). Subject-verb agreement: 'books feel' and 'have' agree. Suggestion: use plural noun when speaking generally and choose correct collocations.

× I enjoy the smell and the texture of the books and the scenery.

✓ I enjoy the smell and texture of books and the scenery.

Article 'the' is unnecessary before 'books' in a general statement; removing it reads more natural. 'The smell and texture of books' is idiomatic. Suggestion: omit extra articles for generalizations.

× Experiments helps me to concentrate and motivate me to keep reading.

✓ Experiments help me concentrate and motivate me to keep reading.

Plural subject 'experiments' requires plural verb 'help' not 'helps'. The infinitive 'to concentrate' can be simplified to 'concentrate'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and streamline infinitives.

× Well, if you are read a story book, it's definitely for you to witness.

✓ Well, if you read a storybook, it's definitely for you to enjoy.

Incorrect verb form 'are read' should be simple present 'read' in conditional general statements. 'For you to witness' is unnatural; use 'to enjoy' or 'to experience'. Suggestion: use simple present in conditional 'if' for general situations and choose appropriate verb.

× Well, if you are study for paper like scholar journal, you have to read carefully because it's somewhat relative with your uh journal paper.

✓ Well, if you are studying for a paper like a scholarly journal, you have to read carefully because it's somewhat related to your journal paper.

Use present continuous 'are studying' for ongoing action. Add articles 'a' before 'paper' and 'scholarly' is the correct adjective form. 'Relative with' is incorrect; use 'related to'. Suggestion: use correct progressive form and appropriate preposition 'related to'.

× Well it quite depending on the time.

✓ Well, it quite depends on the time.

Incorrect continuous structure 'depending' without auxiliary; simple present 'depends' is appropriate. Suggestion: use 'depends' for general statements: 'it depends on the time'.

× The time is cons constant and limited.

✓ Time is constant and limited.

Redundant article 'the' is unnecessary in this context; 'cons' seems to be an error—remove it. Use 'time is constant and limited' or better 'time is limited'. Suggestion: eliminate typos and unnecessary words; prefer 'time is limited'.

× I will definitely prefer skimming and take the keywords which is may potentially good for my papers.

✓ I would definitely prefer skimming and taking the keywords which may potentially be useful for my papers.

Verb pattern: 'prefer' followed by gerund 'skimming' is fine; when contrasting use 'would prefer'. Parallel structure requires 'taking' after 'prefer'. Relative clause: 'which is may potentially good' is ungrammatical—use 'which may potentially be useful'. Suggestion: maintain verb patterns and correct relative clause structure.

× So I will prefer scamming when I have limited time to submit my paper.

✓ So I will prefer skimming when I have limited time to submit my paper.

Spelling error 'scamming' (meaning fraud) should be 'skimming' (quick reading). Verb 'prefer' + gerund 'skimming' is acceptable. Suggestion: correct spelling and ensure word choice matches meaning.