Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar for tense and word choice, and avoid irrelevant or repeated phrases. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love reading because it helps me relax and learn about new cultures. For example, I enjoy books about Japanese culture and try to read a little every day. I also read long novels recommended by my friends, usually finishing one every month.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference first, then explain one or two clear reasons using simple linking words (because, however, for example). Avoid unclear fragments and irrelevant details. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I remember information better. However, I read news on my phone when I need quick updates. For long texts like novels or study materials, I usually choose paper.

Sugestão: Answer directly with contrasting situations and give specific examples. Use linking phrases such as "when..." and "but when..." and correct grammar (e.g., "I need to read carefully when..."). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I sign legal documents or official forms because small mistakes can cause problems. But I don't read carefully when I browse news headlines or social media, since I just want a quick overview.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly (scanning or detailed) and explain with specific conditions and reasons. Use linking words (however, when) and correct sentence structure. Provide one clear example of each mode.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning for most texts because I usually want to find the main ideas quickly. However, when I read a novel or study materials, I switch to detailed reading to understand the content thoroughly.

× I love to read my favorite classes books are mango.

✓ I love to read; my favorite kinds of books are manga.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and wrong word choice ('classes books' and 'mango'). This is a sentence structure and word choice problem. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to link ideas and correct 'mango' to 'manga' (Japanese comics) or 'mango' if fruit was intended; here 'manga' fits context. Also use 'kinds of books' or 'genres' for clarity.

× I've been canceled on time but Japanese culture and I'm trying to read every day or at least answer my friend my friend really long novel build once a month and.

✓ I became interested in Japanese culture, and I'm trying to read every day, or at least answer my friend's messages; my friend reads very long novels, so I try to finish one once a month.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect verbs ('been canceled') and repetition. Reconstruct into clear clauses: 'became interested in Japanese culture' expresses starting interest; separate ideas with commas and semicolons; 'answer my friend' clarified to 'answer my friend's messages'; 'really long novel build once a month' corrected to 'finish one once a month'. This fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× 19 Morning Episode 3 than two things before I was hoping you were feeling the news and when we used to learn something.

✓ In the morning I read episodes and news; before, I used to read things when I wanted to learn something.

This fragment contains numbers and incorrect sequencing. Rephrase to clear time expressions and actions. Remove stray numbers and restructure to show habitual past action with 'used to'. This corrects sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× I also resizing how concepts on my eyes and some paintings.

✓ I also enjoy visualizing concepts through diagrams and paintings.

'Resizing' is incorrect here. Use a verb that matches meaning, such as 'visualizing' or 'imagining'. 'On my eyes' is unidiomatic; use 'through' or 'with'. This corrects word choice and verb usage to convey seeing concepts visually.

× However, and I don't mean to remember that.

✓ However, I don't mean to remember everything literally.

The original is unclear and contains an extra conjunction 'and'. Clarify intent: 'I don't mean to remember everything literally' or similar. This fixes sentence structure and removes redundant conjunction.

× I need to be carefully signed documents appealed and replacement refills.

✓ I need to carefully read and sign documents related to appeals and replacement refills.

'Be carefully signed' is passive and incorrect here; use active infinitive 'to carefully read and sign'. 'Appealed' was likely intended as 'appeals'. Reorder words to place adverb before verb for clarity and correct noun forms.

× And just like I read the 9 News and I thought I wanted to make a big spectrum and listening to my phone as well, but you know, in a tough situation in a tough situation.

✓ I also read the news and sometimes listen to audio on my phone, especially in difficult situations.

The original repeats phrases and mixes tenses and nouns. Simplify to a single clear statement: 'read the news' and 'listen to audio on my phone'; remove repetition 'in a tough situation' and correct tense consistency.

× Address scanning, but I have to be. I'm looking at backspace on Diamond, so I need to capture the main ideas in the packs.

✓ I prefer scanning, but I have to be careful. I'm looking for key points, so I need to capture the main ideas in the text.

'Address scanning' is incorrect; likely 'I prefer scanning'. 'Have to be' needs completion ('careful'). 'Backspace on Diamond' is unintelligible—replace with 'looking for key points'. 'Packs' should be 'texts' or 'passages'. This reorganizes the sentence for clarity.

× But when I really need to take a time, let's say if I read like a novel and I like to read.

✓ But when I really need to take my time, for example when I read a novel, I like to read slowly and enjoy it.

The original mixes phrases and omits possessive 'my' in 'take my time'. Rephrase to provide a clear example and verb ('read slowly and enjoy it') to complete the thought and correct sentence structure.