Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant with a topic sentence and supporting detail, and it is natural. To improve, vary sentence structures slightly and add a brief reason or personal detail to make it more specific (avoid repeating 'read' twice). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It’s a daily habit for me because reading helps me relax and learn new things, so I usually finish a chapter of a book every evening.

Sugestão: Your response answers the question but has grammatical errors, a repetition and lacks clarity. Improve by removing fillers, correcting grammar, and adding one specific reason with a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I can highlight passages and write notes in the margins, which makes it easier to remember key points.

Sugestão: The answer is on topic and gives an example, but has grammatical mistakes and could use clearer linking and specificity. Improve by correcting articles and verb forms, using a linking phrase like 'for example' or 'in contrast', and briefly explaining why careful reading is needed.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. For example, when I take an exam I need to read carefully to avoid mistakes; in contrast, when I’m browsing news articles I usually scan to pick out the main points quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer communicates a preference but contains irrelevant address ('Bill'), grammar errors and awkward phrasing. Improve by removing unnecessary words, using correct verb forms, and giving one specific benefit of scanning with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning because it helps me identify the main ideas quickly, so I can decide which articles or chapters are worth reading in detail later.

× Well for me I do like reading a book on paper because it it allows me to highlight the on the passage which can help me to keep my points.

✓ Well, for me I do like reading a book on paper because it allows me to highlight parts of the passage which can help me keep my points.

Errors: repeated word 'it it', unnecessary article 'the' before 'on the passage', and awkward phrase 'highlight the on the passage' and 'keep my points'. Correction uses present simple 'allows' (matches habitual preference) and present participle not required; adjusted nouns and removed extra words. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words, use 'highlight parts of the passage' and 'help me keep my points'.

× Well, it depends the situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

Error: missing preposition 'on' after 'depends'. This fits 'There is preposition' category but within provided list 'Article errors' closest? Actually this is a preposition error. Use: 'depends on the situation'. Suggestion: remember 'depend' requires 'on' when followed by a noun phrase.

× For example, if I attend a exam, I need to read carefully, otherwise I just scan the passage and get the important point.

✓ For example, if I attend an exam, I need to read carefully; otherwise I just scan the passage and get the important points.

Errors: wrong article 'a' before vowel sound 'exam' should be 'an'; run-on sentence punctuation and number agreement 'point' should be plural 'points' to match general meaning. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds and pluralize general nouns when appropriate; separate clauses with a semicolon or period.

× Bill, for me, I prefer scanning reading because most of the time I really want to get the main points from the author and learned as much as I can compare to detailed reading.

✓ For me, I prefer scanning because most of the time I want to get the main points from the author and learn as much as I can compared to detailed reading.

Errors: unnecessary name 'Bill' presumed stray; 'scanning reading' is incorrect collocation — use 'scanning' or 'scanning reading' not needed; tense inconsistency 'learned' should be present 'learn' to match 'want to' and habitual preference; 'compare to' should be 'compared to' or 'compared with'. Correction: 'prefer scanning', 'want' present, 'learn' present, and 'compared to detailed reading'. Suggestion: use correct verb + -ing collocations, maintain consistent tense, and use 'compared to' or 'compared with' correctly.