Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Улучшите связность и грамматику. Сформулируйте основную мысль кратко, исправьте ошибки (например, «stay alone» неуместно), используйте связки и приведите конкретный пример. Также избегайте повторов («in a very in a wide variety»).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Reading refreshes my mind and helps me think more critically. For example, I often read science fiction and psychology books because they challenge my assumptions and introduce new ideas.

Sugestão: Улучшите грамматику и точность выражений, используйте связующее слово для логики («because») и уточните пример. Сократите перечисления и исправьте согласование (например, «numerous information» → «a lot of information»).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because the internet gives me access to a lot of information quickly. For instance, I can read business articles, psychology reports and the latest news all in one place.

Sugestão: Нужна ясная структура: короткое утверждение, затем примеры. Исправьте грамматику и выбор слов (например, «structures given» непонятно; «you should needs to reads» → «you should read»). Уточните контраст между ситуациями и добавьте связки («however», «for example»).

Exemplo: It depends on the context. For example, you must read carefully during exams or when following instructions, because mistakes can be costly. However, you can read more casually when watching videos with subtitles.

Sugestão: Сделайте ответ более кратким и точным: начальная мысль, затем два конкретных преимущества с правильной грамматикой и связками. Уберите тавтологию («in in») и неопределённые фразы («while waiting» непонятно).

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me notice subtle points and understand the main ideas. For example, by reading carefully I often find examples and arguments that improve my understanding and language skills.

× Yes, definitely. Reading helps me to refresh my mind and think critically in a very in a wide variety of ways and stay alone Reading for example science fiction, psychological books.

✓ Yes, definitely. Reading helps me refresh my mind, think critically in a wide variety of ways, and enjoy being alone. For example, I read science fiction and psychology books.

The original sentence has word order and repetition problems, extra articles, missing conjunctions and punctuation, and a sentence fragment. This fits sentence structure errors. Suggestions: remove redundant words ('to' after helps), delete duplicate phrases ('in a very in a wide'), add commas and conjunctions for clarity, make 'stay alone' into 'enjoy being alone', and split into two sentences with 'For example' to introduce book types.

× I prefer reading on a screen because while browsing Internet you can find numerous information on wide variety of themes like business, psychological books and reports or even news.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because while browsing the Internet you can find a lot of information on a wide variety of topics, such as business, psychology books, reports, or even news.

Errors include missing article 'the' before Internet and incorrect prepositions/articles with 'information' and 'wide variety'. Also 'psychological books' is awkward; 'psychology books' is correct. Suggestions: add 'the' before Internet, use 'a lot of information' or 'numerous pieces of information', use 'on a wide variety of topics', and use 'such as' to introduce examples.

× It depends on the situation. During exams or essential occasions or even structures given you should needs to reads carefully as it is basic strategy. Maybe you don't need to while watching with subtitle.

✓ It depends on the situation. During exams, on important occasions, or when given complex texts you should read carefully, as it is a basic strategy. Maybe you do not need to when watching with subtitles.

Problems: incorrect modal+verb ('should needs to reads' mixes modals and forms), wrong noun 'structures' likely meant 'structured texts' or 'complex texts', missing article 'a' before 'basic strategy', and incorrect singular/plural and preposition in 'with subtitle'. Suggestions: use 'should read' (modal + base verb), replace 'structures given' with 'when given complex texts' or 'when texts are complex', add 'a' before 'basic strategy', and use plural 'subtitles'.

× I prefer detailed reading because you could catch hidden information while waiting. Also you can focus on the main topic and situation that is happening in in that text. It's also helps you develop.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because you can catch hidden information while reading. Also, you can focus on the main topic and the situation described in the text. It also helps you develop.

Errors: inconsistent pronoun/modal 'you could' should be 'you can' for general truth (present), wrong verb form 'It's also helps' uses auxiliary 'is' incorrectly with main verb (third person singular issue). Also 'while waiting' is wrong preposition/context; should be 'while reading'. Duplicate 'in in'. Suggestions: use 'you can' for general statements, remove incorrect 'is' before 'helps', correct prepositional phrase to 'while reading', and fix duplicated 'in'.