Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và trả lời đúng câu hỏi, nhưng cần rút gọn để tự nhiên hơn, sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I actually I'm' không đúng), dùng cấu trúc chủ đề + lý do/ngắn gọn. Ngoài ra nên dùng từ vựng cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: 'fluency and communication skills', 'generate ideas'). Giảm lặp và chia câu dài thành 2 câu tối đa.

Exemplo: I don’t usually enjoy reading for pleasure, but I do read occasionally to improve my fluency and communication skills. I also read articles and essays to learn how to develop and organize ideas.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm/ngữ pháp khiến ý không mạch lạc. Cần sửa ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ, và dùng linking words để so sánh (e.g., 'however', 'on the other hand'). Nêu hai lí do rõ ràng cho từng lựa chọn và kết luận ngắn gọn về sở thích của bạn.

Exemplo: It depends. On paper I find reading less tiring for my eyes and more comfortable for focusing. However, reading on a screen is more convenient for quick research because I can look up information instantly, so I usually use screens for studying and paper for leisure reading.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời hợp lý nhưng có nhiều lặp từ và vài lỗi nhỏ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng linking words ('for example', 'however') và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: học tài liệu, hướng dẫn, hay đọc tiểu thuyết). Giữ tối đa 3 câu, sửa lỗi như 'types' → 'text', 'you're trying' → 'you are trying'.

Exemplo: It depends on the purpose. If I’m searching for information or answering exam questions, I usually skim to find the main ideas quickly. However, when I read a novel for pleasure, I read carefully to appreciate the details and language.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và phù hợp nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'like I always reading'). Hãy dùng câu chủ đề ngắn, tiếp theo là hai nguyên nhân rõ ràng với linking words ('for example', 'because'). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống học thuật để tăng độ chi tiết.

Exemplo: It depends on the purpose. For academic texts I usually scan to find key points and answer questions quickly because efficiency matters. For leisure reading, I prefer detailed reading to immerse myself in the story and enjoy the language.

× Well, I actually I'm not really a type of person who enjoys reading, but I do occasionally read so that I can improve my fluency and communication skill and also learn how to develop ideas.

✓ Well, actually I'm not really the type of person who enjoys reading, but I do occasionally read so that I can improve my fluency and communication skills and also learn how to develop ideas.

The phrase 'a type of person' is less natural than 'the type of person' in this context; use 'the type' to refer to a category the speaker belongs to. 'Communication skill' should be plural 'communication skills' because it refers to a general set of abilities. Also remove the redundant 'I' after 'actually' to fix pronoun/word order. Suggestion: say 'Well, actually I'm not really the type of person who enjoys reading, but I do occasionally read to improve my fluency and communication skills and to learn how to develop ideas.'

× Well I think it depends like if I read on paper and I might not get my eye shrimp and also I might find more my my fight less destructive and reading on the screen.

✓ Well, I think it depends: if I read on paper I might not strain my eyes and I might find my focus less distracted than when reading on a screen.

Several issues: 'get my eye shrimp' is incorrect—use 'strain my eyes' to describe eye fatigue. 'Find more my my fight less destructive' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is likely 'find my focus less distracted' or 'be less distracted.' Use preposition 'than when' to compare paper and screen reading. Suggestion: practice common verb+object collocations like 'strain my eyes' and comparative structures 'less distracted than.'

× But reading on the screen is more convenient since you can research about anything in on the.

✓ But reading on a screen is more convenient since you can research anything online.

Use 'a screen' not 'the screen' for a general statement. 'Research about' is nonstandard; 'research' is a transitive verb: 'research anything.' 'In on the' is fragmentary; likely intended 'online.' Suggestion: use 'research anything online' for concise, correct phrasing.

× Well, when I guess it depends and when you're trying to skim through the types in your trying to find, find the main ideas and you might not actually read all the details.

✓ Well, I guess it depends: when you're trying to skim through a text to find the main ideas, you might not actually read all the details.

Redundant 'when' and incorrect noun 'types' instead of 'text(s)'. 'In your trying' is ungrammatical; use infinitive 'to find.' Tense and aspect: present continuous 'you're trying to skim' is fine, but wording needs correction. Suggestion: restructure sentence to 'when you're trying to skim through a text to find the main ideas, you might not read all the details.'

× But when you're enjoying a book or novel, then you might want to read all the details carefully so that you can actually enjoy.

✓ But when you're enjoying a book or a novel, you might want to read all the details carefully so that you can fully enjoy it.

Sentence misses the object 'it' after 'enjoy' and uses 'actually enjoy' awkwardly; 'fully enjoy it' is clearer. Keep present continuous 'you're enjoying' consistent. Suggestion: always include the object after 'enjoy' when referring to the book.

× Well I think it depends on what reading I'm doing.

✓ Well, I think it depends on what kind of reading I'm doing.

Missing noun phrase: 'what reading I'm doing' is understandable but unnatural; use 'what kind of reading' or 'what I'm reading.' Also maintain word order 'I think' then comma. Suggestion: practice expressions like 'depends on what I'm reading' or 'depends on the kind of reading.'

× For academic reading like I always reading and I might prefer to scan the ideas to solve all the questions.

✓ For academic reading, like when I'm always reading, I might prefer to scan the texts to find the answers to the questions.

'I always reading' is incorrect; needs auxiliary 'am' for present continuous: 'I am always reading' or rephrase. 'Scan the ideas' is odd; use 'scan the texts' or 'scan to find main ideas.' 'Solve all the questions' should be 'find the answers to the questions.' Suggestion: use correct continuous form and collocations: 'scan the texts' and 'find the answers.'

× But when I'm enjoying a book then I might do detailed reading to immerse myself.

✓ But when I'm enjoying a book, I might do detailed reading to immerse myself in it.

Sentence needs the preposition 'in' plus object 'it' to indicate immersion in the book. Also remove redundant 'then.' Suggestion: say 'immerse myself in it' and keep commas for clarity.