Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more accurate and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and tense, avoid contradictions, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love reading; I often read for several hours a day. When I was a child I read even more, but I still enjoy it because books transport me to different worlds and help me relax.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct preference and support it with two concise, specific reasons. Correct word order and avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase to add a second reason.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the texture of the pages and the feel of a physical book. Also, physical books are easy to carry and don’t strain my eyes like screens do.

Sugestão: Answer both parts directly and complete your sentences. Use a topic sentence, then explain with specific examples and a contrasting situation. Avoid unfinished sentences and aim for logical linking words.

Exemplo: I need to read very carefully when studying professional material, for example medical textbooks or clinical guidelines, because details are important. By contrast, I don’t read carefully when I read light fiction or news articles; there I skim for the main idea.

Sugestão: Give a clear statement followed by a concise explanation with correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace filler words, correct verb forms, and use linking words to show sequence (first, then).

Exemplo: It depends on the material. First I usually scan a book to identify the most interesting chapters, and then I go back to read those sections in detail.

× I can read several hour per day.

✓ I can read several hours per day.

The noun 'hour' needs to be plural after 'several'; use 'hours'. This fixes a countable noun pluralization in present tense context. Suggestion: remember that 'several' always takes a plural noun.

× When I was little, even now, I didn't read book as much as I used to, but I love how the books take you to other words.

✓ When I was little, and even now, I don't read books as much as I used to, but I love how books take you to other worlds.

Multiple issues: tense and verb form—'even now' requires present tense 'don't' rather than past 'didn't'; 'book' should be plural 'books' after 'read'; 'other words' is a wrong lexical choice, should be 'other worlds'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when contrasting past habit with present ('used to' vs 'don't'), use plural for countable nouns after verbs that refer generally, and choose the correct noun ('worlds').

× I prefer read it on paper because I love the texture when I feel the hard book and I love how it touches because I love the book, can carry it, whatever.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I love the texture when I hold a hardback book, and I like how you can carry it anywhere.

Errors addressed that match allowed types: missing infinitive after 'prefer' (correct structure 'prefer to read'); incorrect verb for 'feel' when holding a book—use 'hold'; 'hard book' is unnatural—use 'hardback book'; sentence was ungrammatical and run-on, so rephrased to be concise while preserving meaning. Suggestion: use 'prefer to + verb' for habits and choose verbs that fit the action (hold, carry).

× That is interesting question. I found out when I read in the professional study such as medical area or healthcare books. I have to read it carefully and if I.

✓ That is an interesting question. I find that when I read professional material, such as books on medicine or healthcare, I have to read carefully.

Problems: missing article before 'interesting question' (add 'an'); awkward verb tense 'found out'—'find' is better for general statements; 'professional study' is incorrect collocation—use 'professional material' or 'professional texts'; 'medical area' should be 'medicine' or 'medical topics'; 'read it carefully and if I.' is incomplete; removed fragment and combined into a complete sentence. Suggestion: use articles where needed, prefer simple present for general statements, and avoid sentence fragments.

× It depends uh depends on topic.

✓ It depends on the topic.

Redundant repetition 'depends uh depends' removed and article 'the' added before 'topic' for specificity. Suggestion: use 'the topic' when referring to a specific topic under discussion and avoid filler repetitions.

× Sometimes I scamming the whole book to find which topic I interested the most, then I will go back to read it.

✓ Sometimes I scan the whole book to find which topic I am most interested in, then I go back to read it.

Errors: 'scamming' is wrong form and word; correct verb is 'scan' (base form) with present simple for habitual action; 'I interested the most' needs passive/active structure 'I am most interested in' and preposition 'in' after 'interested'; future 'I will go back' is okay but present simple 'I go back' fits habitual pattern. Suggestion: use 'scan' for skimming actions, use 'be interested in' for expressing interest, and keep tense consistent for habitual actions.