Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn; tránh lặp từ, tiếng ngập ngừng và chuyển câu không hoàn chỉnh. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (ví dụ: “Yes, I used to enjoy reading, but...”), (2) Giải thích lý do với một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại sách bạn từng đọc hoặc thời điểm bạn đọc), (3) Kết thúc bằng câu kết luận ngắn. Hạn chế độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu và dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, but).

Exemplo: Yes, I used to enjoy reading, but recently I have very little free time because I’m studying and working. I mainly read short articles or news on my phone now because it’s quicker. Sometimes I read novels at weekends when I have free time.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng và sắp xếp lý do theo trật tự mạch lạc; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ sai (ví dụ “does it bring me comedy” không đúng). Cụ thể: (1) Nói rõ lựa chọn ở câu đầu, (2) Liệt kê 2-3 lý do cụ thể, mỗi lý do một mệnh đề, dùng liên từ (because, and, so) để nối, (3) Thêm một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient and usually faster. For example, I can carry an e-reader or phone and access many books without buying them. Also, digital text often lets me search quickly, which saves time.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Tránh trả lời mơ hồ và ngắt quãng; đưa ra hai tình huống rõ ràng (khi cần đọc kỹ và khi không cần) với lý do cụ thể. Cố gắng dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để dẫn dắt. Ví dụ cấu trúc: “I need to read carefully when... because...” và “I don’t need to read carefully when... because...”.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully during exams because every detail can affect my answers and I must understand instructions precisely. On the other hand, I don’t read carefully when browsing social media or reading casual news because I only want the main idea.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời ngắn gọn, dùng từ đúng (say “scanning” or “skimming”), và giải thích rõ lợi ích với một ví dụ. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng; giữ 2-3 câu. Sử dụng liên từ (so, because) để kết nối lý do.

Exemplo: I prefer skimming or scanning because it saves time and helps me get the overall idea quickly. For instance, when I research topics online, I scan articles to find relevant sections instead of reading every word.

× And I used to like reading, but now when I have to go to school and also need to work, I don't have any time to spend to reading anymore.

✓ I used to like reading, but now that I have to go to school and also work, I don't have any time to spend reading anymore.

The error involves unnecessary 'to' after 'spend' and awkward tense/connector use. Use 'now that' to connect present reason; 'spend reading' is correct collocation (verb + -ing). Ensure parallel structure with 'go to school and work'. Suggestion: use 'now that' and remove 'to' before 'reading'.

× Uh, my favorite times are both is umm.

✓ Um, both are my favorite times.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and extra verb 'is' causing ungrammatical structure. Reorder to 'both are my favorite times' or specify the two items. Suggestion: place subject 'both' before verb 'are' and follow with complement 'my favorite times'.

× I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me save time and not to buy books and also does it bring me comedy and I can bring a screen anywhere and read any book I want.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me save time, so I don't have to buy books, it entertains me, and I can take a device anywhere and read any book I want.

Multiple problems: incorrect infinitive 'not to buy' should be 'don't have to buy'; awkward question-like 'does it bring me comedy' should be 'it entertains me'; 'bring a screen' is incorrect verb choice — use 'take a device'. Also punctuation and sentence linking need correction. Suggestion: use 'don't have to' for absence of necessity, 'entertains' as verb, and 'take' for portability.

× I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me save time and not to buy books and also does it bring me comedy and I can bring a screen anywhere and read any book I want.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me save time, I don't need to buy books, it entertains me, and I can take a device anywhere and read any book I want.

This repeats tense and modality issues: use present simple consistently ('helps', 'don't need', 'entertains', 'can take'). Avoid using an infinitive 'to buy' after a negative like 'not' without auxiliary. Suggestion: maintain parallel present-simple verbs and use 'don't need to' for clarity.

× MMM I think I need to read carefully the most in my exam, especially in I was reading tests and when I read some books, uh, suggest uh, animation, I think not.

✓ I think I need to read most carefully during exams, especially when doing test passages; when I read some books, such as suggested animations, I don't think so.

Errors: awkward adverb order 'read carefully the most' should be 'read most carefully' and incorrect preposition 'in my exam' -> 'during exams'. 'I was reading tests' is wrong tense/phrase; use 'when doing test passages' or 'when taking tests'. 'Suggest uh, animation' is unclear; assuming 'suggested animations' or 'animated suggestions'. Suggestion: use correct adverb order, proper noun phrases, and clearer vocabulary.

× I prefer scanning reading, uh, is, uh, have me save time and have the, uh, overall view of this, of this uh, uh, reading.

✓ I prefer skimming because it saves me time and gives me an overall view of the reading.

'Scanning reading' is awkward; use 'skimming' or 'scanning' alone. 'Have me save time' is incorrect structure — use 'saves me time'. 'Have the overall view' should be 'gives me an overall view'. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: use gerund 'skimming' and correct verb forms 'saves' and 'gives'.

× I don't need to, uh, find the meaning of every word in the reading and.

✓ I don't need to find the meaning of every word in the text.

Unnecessary pause and conjunction 'and' at the end; 'reading' as noun is vague—use 'text' or 'passage'. Structure 'need to find' is correct but remove trailing 'and' and fillers. Suggestion: finish the sentence and use precise noun 'text' or 'passage'.