Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 직접적이고 자연스러운 주제문으로 시작한 것은 좋습니다. 다만 문법 오류(예: “I like reading of books” → “I like reading books”), 중복 표현(“Yeah, absolutely. Yes”)과 어색한 표현(“mainly reading a book to related English book”)을 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 답변을 2~3문장으로 간결하게 유지하고, 구체적인 예시나 이유를 연결어(For example, Recently, because)로 제시하면 더 명확해집니다. 발음이나 유창성에서는 약간의 망설임과 어색한 구조가 보입니다. 향상 포인트: 문장 구조 단순화, 적절한 연결어 사용, 구체적 예시 추가.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading books. Recently I’ve been focusing on English study materials, such as graded readers and grammar guides, because I want to improve my vocabulary and understanding. For example, I read one chapter of an English book every evening to practice.

Sugestão: 주제에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만 문법(“a paper”→“on paper”, “a old man”→“an older person”), 중복 표현(“so so”)과 불명확한 표현(“I like original 1”)을 고쳐야 합니다. 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요(예: 눈의 피로, 종이책의 질감). 연결어(Because, so, therefore)를 사용해 이유와 결과를 논리적으로 연결하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 제한하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and I don’t get eye strain as easily. For example, I enjoy the texture of a paperback and I can easily flip back to review previous pages.

Sugestão: 직접적으로 질문에 답했고 상황을 구별한 점이 좋습니다. 다만 반복과 어색한 표현(“I don't think so carefully to read the books”)을 개선해야 합니다. 구체적인 상황과 이유(예: 시험 공부, 업무 관련 문서) 및 대조 연결어(When… , but when…)를 사용해 문장을 명료하게 정리하세요. 문장 길이는 2~3문장으로 유지하고 예시를 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I’m studying or preparing for an exam because I need to fully understand the details. However, when I’m reading for pleasure, I read more casually and don’t focus on every sentence.

Sugestão: 좋은 의도를 표현했지만 문법과 표현을 고쳐야 합니다(예: “My personality, a bit of detail”→“I’m a bit detail-oriented”, “tend to very carefully reading”→“tend to read very carefully”). 또한 이유(예: I like understanding nuances)나 예시를 덧붙여 연결어(so, therefore)를 사용하면 답변이 더 설득력 있어집니다. 답변은 2문장으로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Exemplo: I’m quite detail-oriented, so I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand nuances and remember information. For instance, when I read a novel, I pay attention to character development and plot details.

× Yes, I like reading of books.

✓ Yes, I like reading books.

The preposition 'of' is unnecessary after 'reading' when mentioning the object 'books'. Use the verb 'read' or the noun 'reading' directly with the object: 'reading books'. Suggestion: say 'I like reading books.'.

× Recently I have to study English, so I'm mainly reading a book to related English book.

✓ Recently I have been studying English, so I'm mainly reading books related to English.

The phrase 'have to study' suggests obligation; use present perfect progressive 'have been studying' to describe ongoing action. 'a book to related English book' is ungrammatical—use plural 'books related to English' or 'books related to learning English'. Suggestion: use 'I have been studying' for ongoing recent activity and 'books related to English' as correct noun phrase.

× I prefer to read a paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper.

'a paper' implies a single newspaper or paper item; the question asked medium (paper vs screen), so the correct expression is 'on paper'. Use the preposition 'on' for reading medium: 'read on paper'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer to read on paper.'.

× I'm a old man.

✓ I'm an old man.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel sound. 'old' begins with a vowel sound, so 'an old man' is correct. Suggestion: remember article rules: 'a' before consonant sounds, 'an' before vowel sounds.

× I think I'm an old person so so I read a paper book.

✓ I think I'm an old person, so I read paper books.

The repetition 'so so' is unnecessary. 'read a paper book' is awkward; use 'paper books' or 'physical books'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to 'so I read paper books.'.

× I like original 1.

✓ I like original ones.

'original 1' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended 'original ones' meaning original/physical editions. Use 'ones' as plural pronoun. Suggestion: say 'I like original ones' or better 'I prefer original editions.'.

× When I study something, I have to read carefully.

✓ When I study something, I have to read carefully.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence is acceptable as written. However, for naturalness you can say 'When I study, I have to read carefully.' Suggestion: omit 'something' if vague.

× I read a book very carefully, but in other case I don't think so carefully to read the books.

✓ I read books very carefully, but in other cases I don't read them so carefully.

'a book' vs general habit should be 'books'. 'in other case' should be 'in other cases'. Word order 'don't think so carefully to read the books' is wrong; use 'don't read them so carefully'. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally and correct adverb placement: 'I read books very carefully, but in other cases I don't read them so carefully.'.

× My personality, a bit of detail.

✓ My personality is a bit detail-oriented.

Sentence fragment lacking verb and incorrect phrase 'a bit of detail'. Use 'is' and 'detail-oriented' to describe tendency. Suggestion: 'My personality is a bit detail-oriented.' or 'I'm a bit of a detail-oriented person.'.

× So when I'm reading a book, I tend to very carefully reading.

✓ So when I'm reading a book, I tend to read very carefully.

After 'tend to' use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Also adverb order: 'read very carefully' is correct. Suggestion: use 'tend to' + base verb: 'tend to read very carefully.'.