Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, grammatically correct and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh) and incorrect word forms (e.g., ‘they give me useful gain knowledge’). Use linking words like ‘for example’ or ‘such as’ to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I enjoy reading because it broadens my horizons and helps me learn new things. For example, I often read non-fiction books about scientists and technology, which inspire me and give practical ideas I can use in my studies and career.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference sentence, explain reasons with accurate vocabulary, and avoid contradictions. Use one or two supporting points and linking words like ‘however’ or ‘on the other hand’. Make sure statements are factually correct (you can search on screens).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the tactile feeling of turning pages and find it easier to concentrate. However, I sometimes read on screens for convenience, since digital texts are portable and allow quick searches.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly. Start with a topic sentence stating when you read carefully and when you skim. Give specific examples (e.g., legal documents vs. social media) and reasons. Avoid vague or irrelevant phrases and reduce hesitation.

Exemplo: I read carefully when the material is important, for example legal documents, academic articles, or instructions, because mistakes could cause problems. For casual content like social media posts or headlines I usually skim to get the gist quickly.

Sugestão: Make a clear choice and explain why, using correct vocabulary (scan vs detailed reading). Provide concrete examples of when each method is appropriate. Keep answers to a few coherent sentences and avoid repetition and unclear names or phrases.

Exemplo: I usually prefer scanning when I need to gather general information quickly, such as checking news headlines or emails. However, I choose detailed reading for complex texts like textbooks or research papers because I need to understand nuances and remember details.

× I definitely enjoy reading because it helps me broaden my horizon and they give me useful gain knowledge.

✓ I definitely enjoy reading because it helps me broaden my horizons and gives me useful knowledge.

The sentence has pronoun and subject-verb agreement issues. 'Horizon' should be plural as the set phrase is 'broaden my horizons' (Grammar problem type: singular and plural). 'They' incorrectly refers to 'reading' (singular) so replace with singular verb 'gives' and remove 'gain'. Also 'useful gain knowledge' is ungrammatical; correct to 'useful knowledge'. Suggestion: use 'broaden my horizons' and match verb form to the singular subject 'reading'. ID: 12,1,27

× For instance, I adore read non fiction book especially if it comes to uh scientists and the fiction which gives me uh opportunity to success in the future.

✓ For instance, I adore reading non-fiction books, especially those about scientists, and fiction that gives me opportunities for success in the future.

Several errors: 'adore read' should be 'adore reading' (verb + -ing). 'Non fiction book' should be plural 'non-fiction books' for general preference (singular/plural). 'If it comes to uh scientists' is informal and incorrect; use 'those about scientists'. 'The fiction which gives me uh opportunity to success' needs articles and correct noun forms: 'fiction that gives me opportunities for success'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'adore', pluralize general nouns, and use 'opportunities for success'. ID:8,1,13

× Uh, to be honest, I enjoy reading on my paper because I like feel like turn on the papers and the serious mail is pretty good actually.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I enjoy reading on paper because I like the feel of turning pages and the physical format is actually quite good.

'Reading on my paper' should be 'reading on paper' or 'reading on paper (a book/newspaper)'. 'I like feel like turn on the papers' mixes structures: correct is 'I like the feel of turning pages' (noun phrase + gerund). 'The serious mail' is unclear; likely meant 'physical format' or 'paper format'. Suggestion: use 'the feel of turning pages' and 'physical format/print' to convey meaning. ID:11,8,13

× Uh, but on the screen it's also good, but, uh, you can't search any information on the screen and that.

✓ However, reading on a screen is also good, because you can easily search for information on it.

The original uses contradictory 'but...but' and a negative 'you can't search any information on the screen' that is likely unintended. Improve cohesion: use 'however' or 'but' once and choose correct polarity. Also 'and that' is vague; replace with 'on it' or 'on a screen'. Suggestion: decide whether searching is possible and state it clearly; 'you can easily search for information on it' fits typical advantage of screens. ID:16,26,11

× Well, actually I will. I always read carefully all the time because if I didn't understand why it is, uh, happen, I can uh, just moving on and the seal, uh, still stuck in one paper in the.

✓ Well, actually I always read carefully because if I don't understand why something happened, I can just move on, but some points may still stay on the same page.

Multiple tense and morphology errors: 'I will. I always read carefully all the time' is redundant and inconsistent; use present simple 'I always read carefully'. 'If I didn't understand why it is, uh, happen' mixes past/present; correct conditional is 'if I don't understand why something happened' or 'if I don't understand why it is happening'. 'I can uh, just moving on' should be 'I can just move on' (modal + base verb). 'the seal...still stuck in one paper' is unclear; I assumed meaning 'some points may still stay on the same page'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use base verb after modal 'can'. ID:6,4,26

× I would rather boss because Frisbee scanning, it's I can understand a lot of information by scanning this or just can't learn. Uh, can't learn carefully.

✓ I would rather skim because with scanning I can understand a lot of information quickly, but I can't learn details carefully that way.

Numerous word choice errors: 'rather boss because Frisbee scanning' seems misheard; likely 'rather skim because through scanning'. Use 'skim' or 'scan'. 'It's I can understand' should be 'with scanning I can understand' or 'by scanning I can grasp'. 'Can't learn' needs subject: 'I can't learn details carefully'. Suggestion: use 'skim' or 'scan' and contrast overview vs detailed learning clearly. ID:14,26,13

× But when I read, uh, the David Putin, I could understand what is written by after and the uh.

✓ But when I read in detail, I can understand what is written and the meaning afterward.

This sentence is unclear and contains name 'David Putin' which is likely misheard; assuming intended 'in detail'. Use present tense 'I can understand' to match habitual action. 'By after' is incorrect; use 'afterward' or 'later'. Suggestion: replace unclear fragments with 'in detail' and 'afterward' to convey meaning clearly. ID:6,26,26