Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and direct: start with a simple topic sentence saying whether you like reading, then give one or two specific reasons with clear vocabulary and correct grammar. Avoid irrelevant words and repetitions. Keep answers under five sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading because it broadens my knowledge and helps me understand different perspectives. For example, I recently read a history book that taught me about past events and inspired my career plans.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference with one or two specific reasons and correct phrases. Use linking words such as 'because' and avoid confusing or incorrect expressions. Mention concrete sensory details briefly and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I like the feeling of turning pages and the smell of a real book. Also, reading on paper helps me focus better than reading on a screen.

Sugestão: Answer directly by contrasting situations that require careful reading and those that do not. Use correct grammar and specific examples (e.g., legal documents, instructions, news articles). Use linking words like 'when' and 'but' to structure your answer.

Exemplo: You need to read carefully when the material is important, such as legal documents, instructions, or history texts, because a small detail can change the meaning. But for simple messages or short news headlines, skimming is usually enough.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and explain why with specific examples. Use correct terms ('scanning' and 'detailed reading') and link ideas with 'because' or 'however'. Avoid vague phrases and keep it to a maximum of five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading when I need to understand or remember information because it helps me learn thoroughly. However, I use scanning to find specific facts quickly, for example when searching for a date or a name in an article.

× Yes, the phone please. I do. I really enjoy putting things.

✓ Yes, please. I do. I really enjoy reading.

The phrase 'the phone please' is irrelevant to the question and likely a misphrase; 'putting things' is incorrect word choice and sentence structure for reading. Replace with 'reading' to match the context and ensure the sentence has the correct verb and object. Suggestion: use concise responses that directly address the question (e.g., 'Yes, I do. I really enjoy reading').

× It helps me broaden my horizon, which is important in everyday life.

✓ It helps me broaden my horizons, which is important in everyday life.

The idiomatic expression is 'broaden my horizons' (plural). Using singular 'horizon' is non-idiomatic. Change to plural for natural English usage.

× Also, it gives me the useful gain knowledge.

✓ Also, it gives me useful knowledge.

The phrase 'the useful gain knowledge' is ungrammatical—'gain' is a verb, and 'the' and 'useful' are incorrectly combined. Use the noun phrase 'useful knowledge' or 'gains useful knowledge.' Ensure word order: modifier before noun.

× Uh, for instance, I'll it's already historical book, which gives me success in the future.

✓ For instance, I read historical books that I think will help me succeed in the future.

Original sentence mixes future contraction 'I'll' with 'it's' and misuses article and tense. Correct by using simple past/present or present habitual 'I read' or 'I enjoy reading' and a clear relative clause 'that will help me succeed.' Ensure subject-verb consistency and correct verb forms.

× To be honest, I would rather choose a reading on a paper that on screen because you know this feeling when you're reading on paper.

✓ To be honest, I would rather read on paper than on a screen because of the feeling of reading on paper.

Incorrect article use: 'a reading on a paper' is wrong. Use the verb 'read' and the noun forms 'paper' and 'screen' with appropriate articles: 'on paper' and 'on a screen' or 'on the screen.' Use 'than' for comparison. Also streamline phrasing 'because you know this feeling' to 'because of the feeling.'

× I can't turn this pages and the affiliate, the smell and the reading books, it's actually can broaden my horizons there.

✓ I like turning the pages, the smell of books, and reading; they can actually broaden my horizons.

Several issues: 'can't turn this pages' has wrong modal and plural agreement; 'this pages' should be 'these pages' or 'the pages'; 'the affiliate' is incorrect word choice; 'it's actually can' mixes 'it' with modal 'can.' Recast as a list with plural verb 'they can.' Use correct determiners and vocabulary ('smell of books').

× I would say it is important to read a lot of pictures carefully because I doesn't you even doesn't realize how important is it.

✓ I would say it is important to look at many pictures carefully because you don't even realize how important they are.

Multiple errors: 'read a lot of pictures' should be 'look at many pictures' or 'study many pictures'; subject-verb agreement 'I doesn't you even doesn't' is garbled. Use second-person 'you don't even realize' and correct adjective-noun agreement 'how important they are.' Also place adjectives correctly.

× And then especially it comes to historically you should read very carefully because one of the central things mentioned in it.

✓ Especially when it comes to history, you should read very carefully because one of the central points may be mentioned there.

'Historically' is an adverb and misused; use 'history' or 'historical texts.' The clause 'one of the central things mentioned in it' is vague; 'central points may be mentioned there' is clearer. Ensure correct preposition 'when it comes to.'

× I would say balls that are important by themselves, but scanning is not actually important as this is reading.

✓ I would say both are important in their own ways, but scanning is not as important as detailed reading.

'Balls' is a mispronunciation of 'both'; 'important by themselves' is awkward—use 'in their own ways.' Comparative structure should be 'not as important as' followed by 'detailed reading' instead of 'this is reading.' Fix word choice and comparative syntax.

× Because when I read by scamming I can search any information in my mind.

✓ Because when I scan, I can search for any information in my mind.

'Scamming' is incorrect word; the correct gerund/verb is 'scan.' Use 'scan' or 'scanning.' Use 'search for information' rather than 'search any information.' Ensure verb form matches intended meaning.

× Uh or by the day reading I can learn by heart.

✓ Or by detailed reading I can learn things by heart.

'By the day reading' is incorrect preposition and word choice; use 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail.' Keep 'learn by heart' but include the object 'things' or 'them.'