Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid unnecessary words. Add one specific detail about why you like that poet and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially poetry by Sunder Sardaar, a well-known Punjabi poet, actor and singer. I particularly like his vivid descriptions of rural life because they feel authentic and emotional. In the evenings I often read a few poems with a cup of tea to relax and clear my mind.

Sugestão: Provide a complete, grammatically correct answer and give a specific reason using a linking word. Avoid trailing words and finish the thought. Add one contrasting point if possible.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and I’m not interrupted by notifications. However, I do use a screen for research because it’s more convenient for finding information quickly.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but could be improved by varying vocabulary and tightening sentences. Use linking words (for example, "whereas" or "however") and give a concrete example of what you skim versus read in detail.

Exemplo: I read carefully when studying for exams because I need to understand and memorize details, such as formulas or dates. However, when I read for pleasure I usually skim and focus only on interesting sections, for example, chapters that develop the characters or describe a scene.

Sugestão: Make the answer fluent and remove fillers like "uh". State a clear preference, give a concise reason, and provide a specific example of what you scan (e.g., headings, dates, key facts). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually prefer scanning because I’m short on time and want to find key points quickly. For example, I scan headings, dates and conclusions to get the main idea without reading every word.

× Just I enjoy reading specially poetry books from Sunder Sardaar who is famous Punjabi poet, actor and singer.

✓ I just enjoy reading, especially poetry books by Sunder Sardaar, who is a famous Punjabi poet, actor, and singer.

The original has incorrect word order ('Just I' should be 'I just') and spelling ('specially' -> 'especially'). Use preposition 'by' for an author and include the article 'a' before 'famous'. List items need commas between them. Suggest moving 'just' after the subject and using 'especially' for emphasis. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I do prefer to read on a paper because while reading on screen I often get disturbed by the notifications and all that. But.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I read on a screen I am often disturbed by notifications and similar distractions.

Use 'read on paper' (no article) rather than 'on a paper'. 'I do prefer' is acceptable but unnecessary; simplified to 'I prefer'. Use 'when I read' for general habit and present continuous 'am often disturbed' is clearer. Remove the trailing 'But' which is an incomplete clause. Also 'the notifications' -> 'notifications' for general reference. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I do read carefully when I read for my exams because at the time I have to read every line carefully to memorize a lot of things.

✓ I read carefully when I study for my exams because I have to go over every line to memorize many things.

Avoid redundant uses of 'read' and 'carefully' twice. Use 'study for my exams' instead of 'read for my exams' for clarity. 'At the time' is unnecessary; use simple present to describe habitual actions. 'A lot of things' -> 'many things' for formality and correctness. Grammar problem type ID:6

× But when I read just to refresh my mind, I skip most of the reading and just read only the interesting parts.

✓ But when I read just to refresh my mind, I skip most of the text and read only the interesting parts.

Remove redundancy: 'just read only' is repetitive; use 'read only'. 'Most of the reading' is awkward; 'most of the text' or 'most of it' is clearer. Place adverbs to avoid duplication. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Actually, most of the time I prefer scanning because I'm only read the interest, interesting parts of the reading, uh, because I do not want to waste a lot of time as I don't uh, have so much time. So I prefer scanning the dates, the, you know, the send.

✓ Actually, most of the time I prefer scanning because I only read the interesting parts, as I do not want to waste time when I have little of it. So I prefer scanning for dates and other key details.

Use 'I only read' (not 'I'm only read') and correct 'interest, interesting parts of the reading' to 'the interesting parts'. Replace informal fillers and repetition. 'Have so much time' -> 'have little of it' for clarity. 'Scanning the dates, the, you know, the send' is unclear; interpret as 'dates and other key details'. Use consistent simple present for habits. Grammar problem type ID:5