Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler sounds (uh, mm) and correct verb forms (e.g., 'walk' not 'walking'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' neatly.

Exemplo: No, I don't walk much. I usually drive to work because I need to drop my daughter at daycare, so I rarely have time to walk.

Sugestão: Provide a clear past-tense topic sentence and one specific detail. Reduce hesitations and correct verb forms (e.g., 'went' not 'go', 'enjoyed walking' not 'enjoyed to walking'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks with my mother when I was a child because she enjoyed walking in the garden, so we spent many afternoons exploring the park together.

Sugestão: Give a clearer, more natural explanation with specific reasons and better vocabulary. Use linking phrases (for example, 'because' and 'also') and avoid awkward words like 'rescue'—use 'refresh' or 'rejuvenate'.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because the peaceful atmosphere and fresh air help them relax, and the greenery makes them feel refreshed and less stressed.

Sugestão: Use a conditional sentence correctly and give a concise reason. Remove repetitions and hesitations. Say the place first, then one clear reason using simple vocabulary like 'relaxing' or 'listen to the waves'.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along the beach because I find the sound of the waves relaxing and I enjoy the open sea views.

Sugestão: Speak in past tense for a recent event and be specific about location. Remove fillers and correct prepositions ('in Stanley Park', 'north of Vancouver'). Provide one detail about why it was enjoyable.

Exemplo: Recently I walked in Stanley Park in North Vancouver with my husband and daughter. It's a beautiful park with seaside views and wide paths, so we had a lovely family stroll.

× I don't have a chance to walking a lot.

✓ I don't have a chance to walk a lot.

After 'chance to' use the base form of the verb (infinitive without to) or the full infinitive 'to walk'. 'To walking' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'to walk' or 'a chance to go for walks'.

× I use a car to, uh, head out to work and also I need a car because I need to drop in and drop off my daughter to daycare.

✓ I use a car to head out to work, and I need it to drop off and pick up my daughter at daycare.

Use base verbs after 'to' (to head). 'Drop in and drop off' is awkward here; common collocation is 'drop off and pick up'. Use 'at daycare' rather than 'to daycare'. Also avoid repeating 'I need a car' by using a pronoun 'it'.

× So I don't have this chance to use.

✓ So I don't have the chance to walk much.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'To use' lacks an object. Rephrase to match context: 'the chance to walk' or 'the chance to use my car less' depending on intended meaning.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

Question uses past tense 'Did... go', which is correct; change preposition 'to have a walk' to natural collocation 'for a walk'.

× Oh yes, as a child I uh, usually uh, go out and vent outside to have a walk with my mother.

✓ Oh yes, as a child I usually went out for a walk with my mother.

Talking about childhood requires past tense 'went' rather than present 'go'. 'Vent outside' is incorrect; remove it. Use 'for a walk' as the idiomatic phrase.

× My mother umm, enjoyed to walking in the garden so umm, we use uh.

✓ My mother enjoyed walking in the garden, so we did too.

After 'enjoyed' use the -ing form 'walking', not 'to walking'. The sentence was incomplete; add 'did too' to indicate that they also enjoyed it.

× I think all the atmosphere of the parks appeal the people and attract the peoples up to walking and the nature always rescue people to become fresh.

✓ I think the atmosphere of parks appeals to people and attracts them to walk, and nature always helps people feel refreshed.

Use 'the atmosphere' or 'atmosphere of parks' not 'all the atmosphere of the parks'. 'Appeal the people' should be 'appeals to people' (verb + preposition). 'Attract the peoples up to walking' is ungrammatical; use 'attracts them to walk'. 'Nature always rescue people to become fresh' should be 'helps people feel refreshed' for natural phrasing and correct verb agreement.

× Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

✓ Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses the correct conditional 'would... if you had'.

× If I had a chance to, if I have a chance to working a lot, I uh, prefer to take along the beach, uh, take along the beach walk because I enjoy umm, from walking, uh, acres along the beach and umm, the water.

✓ If I had the chance to walk more, I would prefer to take a long walk along the beach because I enjoy walking along the shore and the sea.

Use correct conditional: 'If I had the chance... I would prefer'. After 'chance to' use base verb 'walk', not 'working'. 'Take along the beach' should be 'take a long walk along the beach'. 'Acres' is incorrect; use 'along the shore/along the beach' and 'the sea' or 'the water' more naturally.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

Use 'recently' rather than 'lately' in many varieties of English; however 'lately' is not ungrammatical. This suggests 'recently' is the more natural choice. Past tense 'did... go' is correct.

× Recently I enjoy to walking across this the Stanley Park in Vancouver with my husband and my daughter.

✓ Recently I enjoyed walking across Stanley Park in Vancouver with my husband and my daughter.

'Enjoy' referring to a past event should be past tense 'enjoyed'. After 'enjoy' use the -ing form 'walking', not 'to walking'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'Stanley Park'.

× UH is a beautiful park in the North UMM of the Vancouver which is located in north of the Vancouver city.

✓ It is a beautiful park in the north of Vancouver, which is located north of the city.

Replace 'UH' with 'It'. Use lowercase 'north' unless part of a proper name; 'the North' is unnecessary. 'Of the Vancouver' is incorrect; use 'of Vancouver' or 'in Vancouver'. 'Located in north of the Vancouver city' should be 'located north of the city' or 'in the northern part of Vancouver'.