Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason and a simple consequence or frequency. Use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: Not recently. I haven't been walking much because I work remotely and my schedule is very busy, so I usually commute between my room and the kitchen rather than going outside.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and give one or two specific examples to make it more vivid. Keep it within a few sentences and link ideas with a connector.

Exemplo: Yes, we did. My family was very active, and we used to stroll almost every day to the park, local shops, or exhibitions, so I have fond memories of those walks.

Sugestão: Correct small grammar errors and add a linking word to balance the two reasons. Optionally give a short example or result to show the effect.

Exemplo: I think people walk in parks because it relieves stress and, moreover, it's a gentle form of exercise that anyone can do; for example, a short walk can help clear your mind after a long day.

Sugestão: Use conditional phrasing clearly and improve grammar and vocabulary choice. State the desire, give a reason, and finish with a short expectation or feeling.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I'd love to take a long walk in Central Park, New York, because I've seen it in many films and imagine it would be beautiful and lively.

Sugestão: Organize the story with a clear time, subject, and sequence words. Remove fillers and correct grammar. Give one specific detail about the walk to make it more engaging.

Exemplo: A couple of days ago my friends and I walked around the city. First we visited a friend's grandmother, and afterwards we spent an hour relaxing in the city's largest park, sitting on a bench and chatting.

× I haven't been going for a walk very often lately because of my busy schedule and type of work that I'm currently have. I have remote work.

✓ I haven't been going for walks very often lately because of my busy schedule and the type of work that I currently have. I work remotely.

Errors: plural count (walks) and tense/verb form. 'Go for a walk' as a habit uses plural 'walks' after 'haven't been going' or you can use 'going for walks' for general activities. 'I'm currently have' is ungrammatical because 'have' is not used with 'am'; use 'I currently have' or rephrase to 'I work remotely'. Suggestion: use 'going for walks' or 'going for a walk' consistently and correct verb phrase to 'I currently have' or change to active 'I work remotely'. Grammar problem type ID:1,6,12

× Yes, when I was a child my family and I were very active and we go to stroll almost every day to park or small shops or exhibitions.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my family and I were very active and we used to stroll almost every day to the park, small shops, or exhibitions.

Errors: incorrect tense/form for habitual past and missing articles/prepositions. 'we go to stroll' is incorrect; use 'used to stroll' or 'would stroll' for past habitual actions. Also add 'the' before 'park' and commas between items. Suggestion: use 'used to' or 'would' for repeated past actions and include articles for specific places. Grammar problem type ID:5,11,17

× In my opinion, people like to walk in parks because it relieve their stress and it's light exercise that everybody can do without too much effort.

✓ In my opinion, people like to walk in parks because it relieves their stress and it's a light exercise that everybody can do without too much effort.

Errors: subject-verb agreement: 'it relieve' should be 'it relieves' because singular subject requires singular verb. Missing article: 'it's light exercise' needs 'a' before 'light exercise'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and include articles where needed. Grammar problem type ID:27,13,22

× I always had a dream to travel to New York and walk around the Central Park 'cause I've seen it in a lot of movies and in my view this is gorgeous place.

✓ I've always had a dream to travel to New York and walk around Central Park because I've seen it in a lot of movies, and in my view it is a gorgeous place.

Errors: tense and article use. 'I always had a dream' is acceptable but 'I've always had a dream' fits present relevance. 'the Central Park' is incorrect; proper name is 'Central Park' without 'the'. Contraction 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Missing article before 'gorgeous place': use 'a gorgeous place'. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing dreams and omit 'the' with proper park names. Grammar problem type ID:7,17,22

× It was couple days ago, my friends and I were walking just around city. We were visiting uh, our friend's grandmother, and then we went to the biggest park in our city. We were just chilling, did nothing.

✓ It was a couple of days ago. My friends and I were walking just around the city. We were visiting our friend's grandmother, and then we went to the biggest park in our city. We were just chilling and did nothing.

Errors: missing article 'a' and preposition 'of' in 'a couple of days ago'. Missing 'the' before 'city' when referring to a specific city. Conversational filler 'uh' removed. Sentence fragment/coordination: 'We were just chilling, did nothing' should be connected with 'and' or rephrased 'and did nothing'. Suggestion: include articles and connect clauses properly to avoid fragments. Grammar problem type ID:22,11,23