Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence. Reduce redundancy and correct minor grammar (e.g., 'I walk a lot' not 'I work a lot'). Add one brief supporting detail about frequency or purpose using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. Since I don't own a car and prefer avoiding public transport, I walk almost every day to get to work and run errands, which also helps me stay fit.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear past-tense topic sentence and complete the reason. Avoid hesitations and incomplete phrases. Use linking words to explain obstacles or frequency and provide a specific example or detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I often wanted to go out for walks with my friends when I was a child, but my mother usually worried about our safety, so we mostly played in the yard instead.

Sugestão: Start with a direct, general reason why people like parks, then give a specific example. Avoid repetition and use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because'). Improve vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'older people', 'good for their health').

Exemplo: People enjoy walking in parks because the atmosphere is peaceful and there is plenty of fresh air. For example, older people often walk there for gentle exercise because it helps improve their fitness and mobility.

Sugestão: Give a clear, confident answer naming the place (or describing it) and explain why with one or two supporting details. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and uncertain language. Use linking words to connect the reason.

Exemplo: I would love to take a long walk in Central Park in New York because it is vast and scenic; moreover, the varied paths and lakes make it ideal for a relaxed, long stroll.

Sugestão: Respond directly in past tense with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail about the walk (what you saw or how you felt). Avoid hesitations and vague phrases like 'I guess'. Use a linking word to add the detail.

Exemplo: Recently I went for a walk in the small forest near my village. It was quiet and peaceful, and I enjoyed seeing different birds and breathing fresh air.

× Actually, I wanted I always wanted to go outside for a walking with my friends, but my mom was a umm.

✓ Actually, I always wanted to go outside for a walk with my friends, but my mom was a bit strict.

The sentence has several problems: wrong word order 'I wanted I always wanted' (sentence structure error) and 'for a walking' uses a gerund/noun incorrectly and wrong article. Based on the allowed error types, the main issues are 'Incorrect reflexive pronoun use' is not exact; however per instruction we only correct types from the list — here the best matching types are 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 22 (Article errors). To follow requirements, the correction fixes word order to 'I always wanted', changes 'a walking' to 'a walk' (noun) and replaces vague 'umm' with 'a bit strict' to complete the idea. Suggestion: keep subject-verb order 'I always wanted' and use 'a walk' after 'go outside for'. Use concise modifiers (e.g., 'a bit strict') rather than filler sounds.

× Actually, I don't prefer walking at the park, but let's give an example. For example, old people always walking on the park, at the park, and it's very good for their health and they can always support their body.

✓ Actually, I don't prefer walking in the park, but let's give an example. For example, old people always walk in the park, and it's very good for their health and helps keep their bodies strong.

Errors: wrong preposition 'at the park' should be 'in the park' for being inside/open space; 'old people always walking' lacks correct verb form (present tense third person plural needs 'walk') so this is a subject-verb agreement/present tense issue; 'support their body' is unnatural — use 'help keep their bodies strong'. Suggestions: use 'in' with park, use simple present 'walk' for habitual actions, and choose natural collocations like 'keep their bodies strong' or 'maintain their health'.

× For example, old people always walking on the park, at the park, and it's very good for their health and they can always support their body.

✓ For example, old people always walk in the park, and it's very good for their health and helps them stay healthy.

The phrase 'old people always walking' omits the correct finite verb form. In simple present habitual statements for third persons plural, use the base verb without -s (they walk). Also 'support their body' is awkward; use 'help them stay healthy.' Suggestion: form habitual present with 'walk' and pair with natural expressions like 'stay healthy' or 'maintain their health'.

× I can't remember its name at the moment, but it's, you know, New York has a big park at the city center, and I always wanted to walk in there, so that's why.

✓ I can't remember its name at the moment, but New York has a big park in the city center, and I have always wanted to walk there, so that's why.

Problems fixed: unnecessary 'it's, you know,' removed; preposition 'at the city center' should be 'in the city center'; 'walk in there' is unidiomatic — use 'walk there'; tense 'I always wanted' should be present perfect 'I have always wanted' to indicate a desire continuing to present. Suggestions: use 'in' for locations like city center, and present perfect for experiences or desires that continue up to now.

× I guess I went to forest in my village. It's not that big, but it's quiet and small, yeah.

✓ I guess I went to the forest in my village. It's not that big, but it's quiet and pleasant.

Error: missing article before 'forest' — use 'the forest' (article error). Also 'small' repeats idea; 'quiet and pleasant' is more natural. Tense 'I guess I went' is acceptable colloquially for recent past, but ensure article use. Suggestion: include definite article for specific places ('the forest') and choose complementary adjectives rather than repeating meaning.