Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a direct, clear answer and use correct grammar. State whether you walk a lot, then give a concise reason and one specific detail. Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary words.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. My job requires me to aim for 10,000 steps a day, so I walk during breaks and commute to meet that goal.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use past tense consistently. Provide a specific detail about where you walked and who with, linked logically with a connector.

Exemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. I usually walked to school with my friends because our homes were nearby, and we chatted on the way.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use clear, relevant reasons. Use linking phrases to connect ideas and avoid unrelated words. Provide one or two specific benefits of parks.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they can enjoy cleaner air and peaceful surroundings. Also, parks have open paths and natural scenery that help people relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Give a clear hypothetical answer using conditional language (I would...). Say a specific place and why you'd choose it, with one supporting reason. Keep sentences simple and coherent.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a riverside promenade. I enjoy riverside views and fresh air, and such paths are usually calm and scenic.

Sugestão: Use past tense for recent activity and be specific about the place. Explain briefly why you chose that place, using coherent reasons and correct vocabulary (pollution, gym/fitness center).

Exemplo: Recently I went for a walk at a local gym's indoor track. Because pollution levels are high in my hometown, I prefer exercising indoors for safety and comfort.

× Yes I see you.

✓ Yes, I see you.

The sentence is acceptable but requires a comma after Yes for natural spoken punctuation; no pronoun error. Keep as 'Yes, I see you.' (Note: If the intended meaning was 'Yes, I do,' use 'Yes, I do.' for answering 'Do you walk a lot?')

× I have my job for working one no 10,000 steps per day.

✓ My job requires me to walk 10,000 steps per day.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and extra words. Use 'requires me to' to express obligation and place the object '10,000 steps per day' after the verb phrase. Remove unclear words like 'one no.'

× So if I have a shame to work I always do this.

✓ So if I am too tired to work I always do this.

'Have a shame to work' is incorrect. Likely intended meaning is being 'too tired' or 'ashamed' does not fit. Use adjective 'tired' with copula 'am' and adverb 'too' if intensity is meant.

× Yes, I did already this when I was young.

✓ Yes, I already did this when I was young.

Word order: place 'already' before the main verb in spoken English or after the auxiliary: 'I already did' or 'I did this already.' Maintain past tense 'did' to match 'when I was young.'

× My school is there, my house, so I walk to school every day, I work with my friends, we will talk and yes until we back to the house.

✓ My school was nearby and my house was close, so I walked to school every day with my friends; we would talk until we got back home.

Tense consistency: use past tense ('was', 'walked', 'would', 'got') to match 'when I was a child.' Use 'walked to school' and 'got back home' (not 'back to the house'). Use 'with my friends' instead of 'I work with my friends.' Replace comma splices with proper clauses or punctuation.

× Because in the park you can get the fresh air more than any area if you mentioned about the city and they are a place that can move easily so the people can enjoy working in the pub.

✓ Because in the park you can get fresher air than in most parts of the city, and parks are open spaces where people can relax and enjoy walking.

Article and noun choices: say 'fresher air' rather than 'the fresh air more,' use 'most parts of the city' for comparison. 'They are a place' is wrong number agreement; use 'parks are.' 'Enjoy walking' fits context; 'working in the pub' is incorrect vocabulary for walking in parks.

× I was to walk along the liver so when I discussed the city that not a wrong river ice away get us early and straight to work by the little.

✓ I would like to walk along the river, so when I explore the city I could go to the river and then head straight to work.

Original is largely unintelligible. Use conditional 'would like' for hypothetical 'Where would you like' question. Replace 'liver' with 'river' and correct verb forms: 'explore the city' and 'head straight to work.' Ensure clear and logical sentence structure.

× I'll go to work at the Fitness because right now in my hometown there's a lot of pollutions and the government is warning us to stay inside.

✓ I go to the gym for my workout because right now my hometown has a lot of pollution and the government is advising us to stay indoors.

Question asked 'Where did you go for a walk lately?' so past tense or present perfect is expected. However the student responded about current behavior; corrected to present simple for habitual action 'I go to the gym' and 'has a lot of pollution.' Use 'gym' instead of 'Fitness,' 'pollution' (uncountable) not 'pollutions,' and 'stay indoors' rather than 'stay inside.'

× So I decide to work at the Fitness for the exercise and patience.

✓ So I decided to exercise at the gym for fitness and patience.

Tense consistency: use past tense 'decided' if referring to a recent decision, or present perfect if ongoing. 'Fitness' should be a goal or 'for fitness' not 'at the Fitness.' 'Exercise' is the verb; 'patience' is unusual — perhaps 'endurance' or 'health.' Use clearer nouns like 'fitness and endurance.'