Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Pronunciation and grammatical accuracy need improvement. Give a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler or unclear phrases (e.g., "woke" → "walk", remove "as a car, as a form of light called you"). Keep to 3–4 sentences and be specific about routine and purpose.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot, especially after I finish work. Usually I walk around my neighborhood for about an hour to an hour and a half. I do this mainly for light exercise to improve my cardiovascular health and relax after a busy day.

Sugestão: Answer is generally natural but slightly repetitive. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific examples and use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., "In addition" or "For example"). Keep sentences concise and avoid phrases like "back in the day" if you can be more precise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went outside as a child. In addition to walking, I usually played games with my friends, such as running races or tag, which kept me very active.

Sugestão: Good content and relevant vocabulary. Improve grammar (possessive/pronoun agreement and singular/plural) and use linking words for fluency. Make the sentence structure slightly shorter and more precise.

Exemplo: I think people prefer parks because the air is fresher and the atmosphere is peaceful. Moreover, the greenery and wildlife create a calming, therapeutic effect that streets usually lack.

Sugestão: Clear and relevant answer with good reasons. Improve small grammatical points ("a clean air" → "clean air") and vary linking words to avoid repetition. Keep sentences concise and combine related ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would walk in a wide, green area with fresh breezes and clean air. Such an environment helps me think more clearly, feel calm, and reduce stress and anxiety.

Sugestão: Good specific content but sentence grammar and fluency need work. Remove repetitions, correct sentence fragments, and use linking phrases to make a coherent short narrative. Include one clear time reference and one specific detail about the route or experience.

Exemplo: Recently I walked in the garden behind our house, which is a circular path of about two kilometers. I completed one lap in around 20 minutes; the route has plenty of greenery, though it can get crowded at times.

× Yes, I woke a lot, especially at the end of the day when I finished my work and everything.

✓ Yes, I walked a lot, especially at the end of the day when I finished my work and everything.

The student wrote 'woke' which is the past tense of 'wake' and does not match the intended meaning. The correct past tense of 'walk' is 'walked'. Use 'walked' to describe habitual past walking. Suggestion: replace 'woke' with 'walked'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I go for a walk around my home for about an hour, an hour and a half as a car, as a form of light called you to improve my heart health.

✓ I go for a walk around my home for about an hour or an hour and a half as a form of light exercise to improve my heart health.

The original sentence is confused and contains incorrect words ('as a car', 'called you') and poor structure. The intended meaning is that walking is light exercise. Use 'or' to join time ranges, 'light exercise' as the correct phrase, and reorder to make the purpose clear. Grammar problem types: sentence structure (26) and incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (13). Per instruction, corrected items must match listed types; primary issue: sentence structure. Suggestion: simplify and use 'as a form of light exercise to improve my heart health.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, when I was a child I went for a walk a lot.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I went for walks a lot.

'Went for a walk a lot' is understandable but using the plural noun 'walks' with 'went' is more natural for repeated actions in the past. This avoids awkward singular/plural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:5

× It's not just to walk.

✓ It wasn't just walking.

The student is describing past habitual activities; use past tense 'wasn't' and the gerund 'walking' to express the general activity. The original 'It's not just to walk' is ungrammatical in context. Suggestion: use 'It wasn't just walking.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× I preferred back in the day, outdoor activities with my friends, like running or playing or just going for a walk.

✓ Back in the day I preferred outdoor activities with my friends, like running, playing, or just going for a walk.

The phrase 'I preferred back in the day' has awkward word order. Place the time phrase 'Back in the day' at the beginning. Also add commas for listing. This fixes prepositional/word order issues. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I believe people like to walk in parks instead of just the street because of it's a fresher air, its atmosphere, it's wildlife, the greenery, all of these gives calming effects and it's therapeutic too.

✓ I believe people prefer walking in parks instead of just on the street because the air is fresher, the atmosphere and wildlife and the greenery have a calming effect, and it's therapeutic too.

Multiple issues: incorrect article and pronoun contractions ('it's a fresher air' should be 'the air is fresher'); incorrect preposition 'just the street' should be 'on the street'; subject-verb agreement 'all of these gives' should be 'have'; also prefer 'prefer walking' or 'like to walk' for style. Main grammar problems addressed: article use (22), preposition (11), and subject-verb agreement (27). Suggestion: reorder and use 'the' with singular uncountable 'air', plural verbs with plural subjects. Grammar problem type ID:22

× If I had a chance, I would like to go for a walk in a place that is open, has a lot of greenery and has a fresh breeze and a clean air.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go for a walk in a place that is open, has a lot of greenery, a fresh breeze, and clean air.

'A clean air' is incorrect because 'air' is uncountable and should not take the indefinite article; use 'clean air'. Also streamline repeated 'has' by listing noun phrases. Minor article error (22) and present participle formatting for parallelism. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'clean air' and keep parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID:10

× All of these things help me to think better, to feel calm and to be more relaxed and reduce my anxiety and stress.

✓ All of these things help me think more clearly, feel calmer, be more relaxed, and reduce my anxiety and stress.

Original sentence is long and uses mixed verb forms; make verbs parallel (help me think, feel, be) and use comparative forms 'more clearly' and 'calmer'. Pronoun use is acceptable but verb parallelism and adjective/adverb choice needed. Primary issue: incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (13) and parallel structure (26). Suggestion: keep verbs parallel and use appropriate comparative forms. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I went for a walk around the garden that's located behind our home.

✓ I went for a walk around the garden located behind our home.

The original is mostly correct but 'that's located' is wordier; reduce to 'located'. Main tense is past and correct. This change improves conciseness. Grammar problem type ID:5

× The garden is a is a circle that is about two kilometers long.

✓ The garden is a circle that is about two kilometers around.

Original repeats 'is a' and uses 'long' incorrectly for a circular path; say 'about two kilometers around' or 'has a two-kilometer perimeter'. Also remove duplicate words. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I finished one. I finished one lap of a in about 20 minutes.

✓ I finished one lap in about 20 minutes.

The original contains repetition and an extra article 'a' in the second sentence. Combine into a single clear sentence. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It has a lot of greenery, but the downside of it, it gets busy sometimes with a lot of people.

✓ It has a lot of greenery, but the downside is that it gets busy sometimes with many people.

Original uses awkward phrase 'the downside of it, it gets busy' and 'a lot of people' is informal; replace with 'many people'. Use 'downside is that' to introduce the clause. Fixes preposition/structure issues. Grammar problem type ID:11