Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, ngắn gọn với câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No) và giải thích ngắn gọn, dùng từ vựng chính xác và cấu trúc câu đơn giản. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, từ sai chỗ (ví dụ “use my thumb”, “your bed”) và câu dài lủng củng. Nên dùng liên từ đơn giản (because, so) để nối ý. Ví dụ sửa lỗi, chia lời giải thành 2 câu tối đa, dùng từ đúng như "lazy" + hoạt động cụ thể.

Exemplo: No, I don't walk a lot. I'm quite lazy and prefer to lie on my bed and surf the internet in my free time, so I rarely go for walks.

Sugestão: Cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và câu rõ ràng. Tránh dùng từ sai ("working outdoors" nếu ý là chơi ngoài trời) và lặp từ. Sắp xếp ý: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (với linking words như "when", "and", "also"). Sử dụng từ đúng cho hoạt động (play, walk, exercise).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I spent a lot of time playing and walking outdoors with my friends, chatting as we went. I also often exercised with my family in the evenings.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp nêu lý do chính hợp lý, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (relax, fresh air, safe, less traffic). Tránh diễn đạt lủng củng và những cụm không rõ nghĩa. Dùng 1 câu chủ đề và 1-2 câu bổ sung với liên từ (because, so, also) và ví dụ cụ thể nếu cần.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because they are peaceful and offer fresh air. Also, parks reduce traffic and feel safer for families, so many people choose them for relaxation and exercise.

Sugestão: Cần dùng cấu trúc câu điều kiện đúng (If I had the chance / I would...), tránh lặp từ (neighbor/neighbours) và dùng từ chính xác (see how it has changed / see the scenery). Giữ tối đa 2-3 câu, rõ ràng mục đích và chi tiết cụ thể.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around my neighbourhood to see how it has changed over the years. I could enjoy the scenery and the calm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp nêu địa điểm cụ thể gần đây và dùng thì quá khứ đơn (I went to...). Tránh nói lắp, thông tin mơ hồ và câu không rõ nghĩa. Nên đưa thêm một chi tiết ngắn về lý do hoặc cảm nhận (because it’s nostalgic / to recall memories).

Exemplo: Recently I went for a walk to my old school. I visited it because it is close to my heart and I wanted to recall my memories there.

× To be honest I'm a lazy person so I don't really spend my most time on working instead of I use my on my thumb on lying on the bed and surfing the Internet so I feel it's your bed.

✓ To be honest, I'm a lazy person, so I don't spend most of my time working; instead, I lie on the bed and surf the Internet, so I feel comfortable there.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement and word choice. Corrections involve: add comma after introductory phrase, change 'spend my most time on working' to 'spend most of my time working' (correct use of quantifier and gerund), replace awkward phrase 'use my on my thumb on lying' with 'lie on the bed' (correct verb and preposition), change 'surfing the Internet' form to parallel gerund 'surf the Internet', and 'feel it's your bed' to 'feel comfortable there'. Suggestions: simplify sentences, keep verbs parallel, and use correct prepositions and collocations.

× Yes, of course. When I was a child, I spent all my time on working outdoors.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I spent all my time working outdoors.

Past tense issue and incorrect preposition 'on'. Use the gerund 'working' without 'on' after 'spent time'. Suggestion: Use 'spend time' + gerund to describe activities in past.

× I often go with my friend to talk to each other or chat on the way.

✓ I often went out with my friends to talk or chat on the way.

Subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. The context is past ('When I was a child'), so verbs should be past tense: 'went' not 'go'. Also plural 'friends' likely fits. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and match subject number.

× In addition, I added in in the evening.

✓ In addition, I went out in the evening.

Past tense issue and word choice: 'added in' is incorrect. Use 'went out' or 'joined in' depending on meaning. In context of walking, 'went out in the evening' is appropriate. Suggestion: choose correct verb and maintain past tense.

× I used to go working with my family to do exercise.

✓ I used to go out with my family to exercise.

Past tense and verb form issue: 'go working' is incorrect; use 'go out' or 'go for a walk' and 'to exercise' (infinitive) or gerund 'to exercise' is fine. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb phrase for habitual past actions.

× Basically people prefer to work in the past because past year or public destination that everyone can rest and is is can reduce the amount of vehicle and it will protect safe from the dangerous risk and it's also safety and the atmosphere is so crucial.

✓ Basically, people prefer to walk in parks because parks are public places where everyone can rest; they can reduce the number of vehicles, protect people from danger, and provide a safe, pleasant atmosphere.

Present tense and multiple issues: 'prefer to work' should be 'prefer to walk' (word choice), tense consistency (present general preference), noun choice 'public destination' -> 'public places', 'amount of vehicle' -> 'number of vehicles' (count noun), 'protect safe from the dangerous risk' -> 'protect people from danger', redundancies removed and adjective order corrected. Suggestion: simplify long sentences, use correct collocations (number of vehicles, walk in parks) and maintain present tense for general truths.

× If I have a chance, I will take a long walk in my neighborhood in my neighbors, because I want to go around the neighbor to see it how it train over the years and I can go sightseeing the screen as well as enjoy the atmosphere here.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around my neighborhood because I want to see how it has changed over the years, enjoy the scenery, and enjoy the atmosphere.

Future/conditional and tense issues: The hypothetical conditional should use 'If I had the chance, I would...' not 'If I have a chance, I will...' Also word choices: 'in my neighbors' -> 'around my neighborhood', 'see it how it train' -> 'see how it has changed', 'sightseeing the screen' -> 'enjoy the scenery'. Suggestion: use correct conditional forms and common collocations (neighborhood, scenery).

× The places I have, uh, I have course, a doctor school, I have grade 2 when I were 18 years old because it's near my heart and I went to go to there to revive my, uh, uh, my experience there.

✓ The places I went to include my school and a vocational college; I was 18 when I attended grade 2 there because it was important to me, and I went back to relive my experiences.

Multiple past tense and subject-verb agreement errors. 'I have' should be 'I went to' for past actions. 'when I were 18 years old' -> 'when I was 18 years old' (subject-verb agreement). 'went to go to there' is redundant; use 'went back' or 'went there'. 'revive my experience' -> 'relive my experiences'. Suggestion: use simple past for past events, correct subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundant verbs.