Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, fluent and avoid hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Replace fillers with pauses if needed and correct grammar (e.g., 'working and do something' → 'work and do other things').

Exemplo: No, I don't walk a lot. I find walking a bit boring and too slow for my schedule, so I usually prefer cycling or taking public transport to save time.

Sugestão: Answer directly about childhood habits with a clear topic sentence and specific details. Avoid repeating previous answers and reduce hesitations. Use linking words (for example, 'however' or 'instead') to contrast walking with other activities you liked.

Exemplo: Not really. As a child I rarely went for walks because I found them boring; instead, I preferred running or playing games with my friends in the playground.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and then two specific, linked reasons. Use correct vocabulary ('surrounded by trees', 'feel healthy' or 'feel relaxed'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'also'. Reduce hesitations.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they are usually peaceful and surrounded by trees and flowers, which makes the air fresher. Also, walking there helps reduce stress and improve physical health.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer naming a place, then explain why with clear, specific reasons. Fix grammar ('walk is very bored' → 'I find walking boring') and choose precise vocabulary ('scenery', 'relaxed'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Exemplo: I would like to take a long walk along a coastal path because the sea views and fresh air would help me relax and unwind after a busy week.

Sugestão: Use correct past tense and be specific about time and place. Start with a clear topic sentence ('Yesterday I went for a walk...') then add one or two details in sequence using linking words like 'then' or 'there'. Avoid repetition and hesitations.

Exemplo: Yesterday I went for a walk with a friend in a nearby park. We walked along a frozen pond and tried walking on the ice briefly, which was exciting and a bit unusual.

× No, I don't walk a lot because I think walking is a boring exercise for me and because walking is too slow and you, you just can't uh, uh, working and do something at the same time.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot because I think walking is a boring exercise for me and it is too slow, and you just can't work and do something else at the same time.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'working' after 'can't' and awkward clause repetition. Reason: After modal or auxiliary verbs like 'can't' we must use the base verb form, so use 'work' not 'working'. Also replace 'and because walking is too slow and you, you just can't ... working' with clearer structure. Suggestion: Use base verbs after modals/auxiliaries and simplify repeated words (remove extra 'you, you' and filler 'uh'). Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Just like I said, I don't like work because I think work is boring and I didn't, uh, go out and just walk outside, uh, even when I was a child, uh, because, uh, I don't like these things, but I do like go out and run and hang out with my friend.

✓ Just like I said, I didn't like walking because I thought it was boring and I didn't go out just to walk even when I was a child, but I did like going out to run and hang out with my friends.

Errors: inconsistent tense and incorrect verb forms. Reason: The question asks about past habits, so use past tense ('didn't like', 'thought'). Use gerunds after verbs like 'like' ('like walking', 'like going out'). Also pluralize 'friend' to 'friends' if referring to more than one; if singular, use 'my friend' consistently. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout and use gerunds for activities. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think the, the reasons people like, uh, working in the park because, uh, there are usually so many trees in parks and you could uh, uh, surrounded by tree and other uh, uh, plants like, uh, flower and you could feel so health.

✓ I think the reason people like walking in parks is that there are usually many trees and other plants like flowers, so you can feel healthier when you are surrounded by nature.

Errors: use of 'working' instead of 'walking', incorrect article 'the reasons' (should be 'the reason' or 'reasons'), wrong verb form 'surrounded by tree', incorrect noun forms ('flower' -> 'flowers'), and adjective 'health' used incorrectly. Reason: Use correct activity word ('walking'), ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun plurality, use comparative adjective 'healthier' or adverb 'feel healthy' with 'feel' + adjective, and correct passive structure 'be surrounded by'. Suggestion: Use 'walking', plural nouns for countables, 'surrounded by trees', and 'feel healthier'. Grammar problem type ID: 11},{