Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문법과 어휘 선택을 고쳐 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 말하세요. 주제 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤(Do you walk a lot? → No, I don't walk a lot) 한두 개의 구체적 이유와 장소를 연결어로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 반복(예: "Umm")을 줄이고 동사 형태를 정확히 사용하세요.

Exemplo: No, I don't walk a lot, but I enjoy it when I do. Near my home there is a lake, so I usually walk around the lake for about 30 minutes to relax.

Sugestão: 과거 시제를 정확하게 사용하고 문장 구조를 간결하게 만드세요. 주제 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤 이유와 활동 예시를 연결어로 제시하세요. 'had to work'는 의도와 다르게 들리므로 'played'나 'helped' 등 적절한 동사를 사용하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went outside as a child because I was very active. For example, I used to play with my friends in the street and help my parents in the garden.

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 이유를 두세 가지로 구체적으로 설명하세요. 문법(예: 'the air of the park' → 'the air in parks')과 동사 선택을 수정하고 문장 연결어를 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because the air is cleaner and it feels peaceful. In addition, parks offer greenery and quiet paths, which help people relax and exercise. For example, I often walk around the lake near my home to clear my mind.

Sugestão: 상상 조건문에 대한 답변은 명확한 주제 문장과 구체적인 이유·묘사를 포함해야 합니다. 어휘 선택을 바로잡고(예: 'autonomous pier'→'peaceful shoreline'/'pier') 'listen the way'같은 모호한 표현 대신 구체적인 소리(파도 소리 등)를 쓰세요.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along the beach because I enjoy looking at the water and listening to the sound of the waves. The peaceful shoreline and fresh sea breeze help me relax.

Sugestão: 최근 시제 사용과 이유 설명을 더 명확히 하세요. 문법과 어휘(예: 'in late night'→'late at night'; 'I usually walk my apartment around my apartment'→'I usually walk around my apartment complex')를 고치고, 안전 걱정과 행동을 연결되어 자연스럽게 표현하세요.

Exemplo: I went for a walk late at night recently. Because I was worried about safety, I usually walk around my apartment complex rather than going far from home.

× No I don't work a lot but I enjoy it.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot but I enjoy it.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk', which is a vocabulary error rather than a verb conjugation error. The verb 'do/does' is correctly used for first person: 'I don't walk'. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'walk' to match the question context.

× Umm near my home there is a lake so I like to walking around the lake.

✓ Umm, near my home there is a lake, so I like walking around the lake.

After verbs of preference such as 'like', the gerund (verb + -ing) is required: 'like walking', not 'like to walking'. Alternatively 'like to walk' is possible. Suggestion: use 'like walking' or 'like to walk'.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

The original question from examiner uses 'have a walk' which is less natural; 'go outside for a walk' is more idiomatic. No tense change required because 'did' + base verb is correct. Suggestion: use idiomatic collocations: 'go for a walk'.

× Yes, because I was more active person when I was child so I went outside very often and had to work with my parents or my friend near my house.

✓ Yes, because I was a more active person when I was a child, so I went outside very often and played or worked with my parents or friends near my house.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'more active person' and 'a child', and inconsistent noun number 'friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Had to work' implies obligation; likely intended 'played or worked'. Suggestion: include articles where needed and make nouns plural when referring generally.

× Because the air of the park is very clean and people can feel peaceful and work around park.

✓ Because the air in the park is very clean, and people can feel peaceful and walk around the park.

Use preposition 'in' with 'air in the park' and 'walk around the park' not 'work around park'. 'Work' is incorrect verb; likely intended 'walk'. Also add article 'the park'. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions and verbs and include articles.

× In my case I usually when walking around the lake.

✓ In my case, I usually walk around the lake.

The sentence is ungrammatical: misplaced 'when' and missing main verb form. Use simple present 'I usually walk' to express habitual action. Suggestion: keep subject + adverb + verb order: 'I usually walk...'.

× Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

✓ Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

This sentence is already correct. The conditional 'would... if you had' is appropriate. No change needed.

× I would like to take a long walk near the beach because I like to see water and I like that peaceful autonomous pier of the ocean and also I like to listen the way.

✓ I would like to take a long walk near the beach because I like to see the water, and I like the peaceful, open expanse of the ocean, and I also like to listen to the waves.

Several issues: missing article 'the water'; 'autonomous pier' is incorrect word choice — likely intended 'open expanse' or 'peaceful pier' but 'autonomous' is wrong. 'Listen the way' is incorrect; correct structure is 'listen to the waves'. Add comma between adjectives and use correct nouns. Suggestion: choose appropriate vocabulary and use 'listen to' with sound nouns.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

'Lately' pairs better with present perfect (Have you gone lately?) while 'recently' is more natural with past simple 'Did you go recently?'. Suggestion: match adverb choice to tense: use 'recently' with past simple or change tense to present perfect with 'lately'.

× In late night actually, I worried about safety so I usually walk my apartment around my apartment.

✓ Late at night, actually, I worry about safety, so I usually walk around my apartment.

Errors include incorrect adverbial phrase 'In late night' (should be 'Late at night'), tense mismatches 'I worried' vs 'I usually walk' — maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'I worry' and 'I usually walk around my apartment'. Also remove redundant 'my apartment'. Suggestion: use correct time expressions and consistent tense for habits.