Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and be concise. State the fact, give a reason, and add one brief detail. Use correct collocations (e.g., “10,000 steps a day”, “a good form of exercise”) and remove filler words.

Exemplo: Yes. I walk a lot for my health — usually more than 10,000 steps a day. Walking is a good form of exercise because it boosts fitness and reduces stress. For example, I walk to work and take a longer route when I have time.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement about the past, use past tense consistently, avoid hesitations and repetitions, and give one or two specific details (who, when, routine). Link sentences with simple connectors like “so” or “because.”

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I often walked with my family, especially my father, after dinner. We enjoyed chatting as we walked, and because I’m outgoing, I liked spending time outdoors with them.

Sugestão: Provide a clear reason first, use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “trees”, “fresh air”, “relaxing atmosphere”), and organize supporting details with linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Be specific about benefits.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because of the fresh air and green surroundings. For example, parks have many trees and quiet paths, which makes them peaceful and relaxing for exercise or walking with friends.

Sugestão: Use a clear conditional sentence and natural prepositions (e.g., “along the riverbank”, “by the river”). Give one or two specific reasons and avoid word repetition. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the riverbank because the water views are calming and there are many trees. I also enjoy seeing other people exercising, which makes the atmosphere lively.

Sugestão: Answer in the past tense with a clear subject and verb, state the location and one reason or feeling. Correct word order and avoid unclear phrases. Keep the response to one to three sentences.

Exemplo: Recently I went for a walk along a long river path. Seeing the water and trees made me feel relaxed and refreshed.

× Yes, I walk a lot for health in usually I walk over 10,000 per day and I think walking as a is a is a is one of sport and this is good for our health so I watch a lot of.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot for my health. Usually I walk over 10,000 steps per day, and I think walking is a kind of sport and it is good for our health, so I walk a lot.

Problems: incorrect adverb placement ('in usually'), missing article ('for health' -> 'for my health'), awkward phrasing and repetition ('as a is a is a is'), missing noun after number ('10,000' -> '10,000 steps'), wrong verb 'watch' instead of 'walk'. Suggestions: place adverbs before the main verb or at sentence start ('Usually I walk...'), use appropriate articles ('my health'), use concise phrasing ('walking is a kind of sport'), include countable noun for steps, and proofread for repeated words and incorrect verbs.

× Yes, When I was child, I would usually walk out with my families and my father.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I usually walked out with my family and my father.

Problems: missing article ('when I was child' -> 'when I was a child'), incorrect plural 'families' should be 'family' for one person's family, inconsistent tense and modal 'would' is unnecessary for habitual past (use simple past 'walked'). Suggestions: use 'a child' for age reference, use simple past for habitual past actions ('usually walked'), and use 'family' when referring to one's immediate family.

× Umm, we like to, we like to walk out after dinner.

✓ We liked to walk out after dinner.

Problems: inconsistent tense with previous sentence (should remain past 'liked' not present 'like'), repeated phrase 'we like to, we like to' is redundant. Suggestions: keep tense consistent and avoid repetition; use 'we liked to walk out after dinner.'

× And I'm an extrovert person, so I like to stay out.

✓ I was an extroverted person, so I liked to stay out.

Problems: adjective form 'extrovert person' is awkward; use 'extroverted person' or 'an extrovert'. Tense should be past to match context ('was' and 'liked'). Suggestions: use natural adjective forms and consistent past tense: 'I was an extrovert, so I liked to stay out.'

× And so walking to me is a fair, is a, is a.

✓ So walking was enjoyable to me.

Problems: broken, repetitive sentence with missing final word ('fair, is a, is a'). Suggestions: choose a clear adjective and maintain past tense: 'Walking was enjoyable to me' or 'Walking was pleasant for me.'

× Because in part there is many, many tree and they can breathe with a with air, with fresh air and part can the environment of part is to is giving everyone feel relaxing.

✓ Because in parks there are many trees and people can breathe fresh air; the park environment makes everyone feel relaxed.

Problems: wrong preposition 'in part' should be 'in parks', subject-verb agreement 'there is many' should be 'there are many trees', incorrect verb 'they can breathe with a with air' should be 'people can breathe fresh air', and awkward structure 'environment of part is to is giving everyone feel relaxing' should be 'the park environment makes everyone feel relaxed'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('in parks'), correct subject-verb agreement, and simplify clauses: 'the park environment makes people feel relaxed.'

× I would like to long walk in behind of the river because it is long and I can see the river or water that make me feel relaxed and so many people are running at the same time and there are many three as well.

✓ I would like to take a long walk along the river because it is long, and I can see the water which makes me feel relaxed. Many people run there at the same time, and there are many trees as well.

Problems: incorrect verb phrase 'long walk in behind of the river' should be 'take a long walk along the river', plural agreement 'make me feel' -> 'makes me feel', wrong plural 'three' -> 'trees', awkward tense mix. Suggestions: use correct verbs for walking expressions ('take a walk'), correct prepositions ('along the river'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct plural nouns.

× And I walk lately as AI was a long of river and when I saw the river that made me feel relaxed.

✓ Recently I walked along a long river, and when I saw the river it made me feel relaxed.

Problems: 'lately' with 'walk' needs auxiliary or past simple 'walked recently' -> 'Recently I walked', 'as AI was a long of river' is gibberish; likely meant 'along a long river', and pronoun 'that' usage is acceptable but 'it' is clearer. Suggestions: use 'recently' or 'lately' appropriately with past tense, use correct preposition 'along', and simplify the clause: 'it made me feel relaxed.'