Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, fix verb forms and articles (e.g., "it is good"), remove repetition, and add a specific supporting detail or example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "and"). Keep answers to at most 3–4 short sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I prefer long walks because they are good for my physical and mental health, and they help lower my blood pressure. For example, I walk for 45 minutes every morning to feel more energetic throughout the day.

Sugestão: Provide a clear past-tense response and avoid hesitations. Use a topic sentence in past tense, then give a specific supporting detail about frequency or a memory. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid unfinished fragments.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often went for long walks with my parents because they were very strict about health. For example, every Sunday we walked in the nearby park for an hour.

Sugestão: Give a concise, well-structured answer with specific reasons and one example. Use plural and articles correctly (e.g., "parks are", "the park is") and linking phrases like "for example" or "because" to show coherence.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because parks are quiet and relaxing, and they offer fresh air and green space. For example, many people jog, have picnics, or practice yoga there to relax and stay fit.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then explain why with specific details. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Mention concrete features (mountains, lakes, trails) and link ideas with "because" or "because of".

Exemplo: I would like to walk in Switzerland because of its beautiful mountains, clean air, and scenic hiking trails. For instance, I imagine hiking along alpine paths near Lake Lucerne and enjoying panoramic views of snowy peaks.

Sugestão: Answer in clear past tense for a recent event: state where you went, when, and one specific detail about the place. Avoid redundancy and correct grammatical errors (e.g., "a quiet place", "the population was small"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Recently I went for a walk in a small nearby town last weekend. The town was very quiet with few people around, so I could walk calmly along the streets and feel relaxed.

× Yes I do I prefer walking for a long time because it good for my physical and mental health it also good for my.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer walking for a long time because it is good for my physical and mental health, and it is also good for me.

Missing present tense 'be' verbs: 'it good' should be 'it is good' to form a correct present simple statement; missing conjunction and punctuation. Suggestion: include 'is' after 'it' and add connectors like 'and' to join clauses, and use commas or periods to separate ideas.

× Some kind of activities I can improve my body blood pressure.

✓ Some activities can improve my blood pressure.

Awkward word order and incorrect phrase 'my body blood pressure' instead of 'my blood pressure'. Also 'some kind of activities' is unidiomatic; use 'some activities' or 'certain activities'. Suggestion: use natural noun phrases and correct word order: subject + verb + object.

× I usually prefer to go for a long walk with my parents because they always very strict about the health.

✓ I used to prefer going for long walks with my parents because they were always very strict about health.

The question asks about childhood, so past tense is required. 'Usually prefer' should shift to past ('used to prefer' or 'preferred'); 'go for a long walk' -> 'going for long walks' for natural phrasing; 'they always very strict' is missing the past 'were' and 'about the health' should be 'about health' or 'about their health'. Suggestion: match tense to time frame and include the verb 'be' ('were').

× So I went with them when I was a child. They yeah.

✓ So I went with them when I was a child.

Fragment 'They yeah.' is incomplete and does not convey meaning. Remove the fragment or replace with a complete clause if intended (for example, 'They enjoyed it too.'). Suggestion: ensure every sentence has a subject and verb and expresses a complete thought.

× Well, because park is a very quiet and very relaxing place, lot of people went there for fresh air and quiet places.

✓ Well, because the park is a very quiet and relaxing place, a lot of people go there for fresh air and quiet.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'park'. 'Lot of people' needs article 'a lot of people'. Use present simple 'go' for general habit (question asks why people like) not past 'went'. 'quiet places' is redundant; use 'quiet' as noun or 'quiet atmosphere'. Suggestion: add 'the' and use correct tense and articles.

× They can enjoy a lot and they can do some kind of activities as well.

✓ They can enjoy themselves a lot and do various activities as well.

Use reflexive 'themselves' after 'enjoy'; 'some kind of activities' is awkward—use 'various activities'. Also can omit repeated 'they can' for conciseness. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'enjoy themselves' and avoid repeating modal unnecessarily.

× Definitely Switzerland. This is my dream country I wanted to visit once in my life.

✓ Definitely Switzerland. It is my dream country; I want to visit it once in my life.

Mismatch of tenses: 'This is my dream country' is present, but 'I wanted to visit' is past — should be present desire 'I want to visit'. Also missing pronoun 'it' before 'once'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for current desires and include object pronoun.

× I saw a couple of videos I bought Switzerland.

✓ I saw a couple of videos about Switzerland.

'Bought' is incorrect (means purchased) and wrong preposition use. Use 'about' to indicate topic of the videos. Suggestion: use correct verbs and prepositions to express relation.

× Their, their nature, the beauty, the fresh air, the long mountains.

✓ Their nature, the beauty, the fresh air, and the long mountains.

Comma-separated fragment needs conjunction 'and' before final item. Also leading 'Their, their' suggests repetition; use single 'their' if referring to Switzerland's. Suggestion: construct parallel list with 'and' and avoid repeated words.

× I usually want to walk, long walk.

✓ I usually want to go for a long walk.

Redundant and disfluent phrasing. 'Walk, long walk' is fragmented. Use idiomatic expression 'go for a long walk'. Suggestion: use established collocations.

× I usually go for go to the quietly places where I can walk silently and get relaxed and peacefully.

✓ I usually go to quiet places where I can walk quietly and relax peacefully.

Redundant 'go for go to'; 'quietly places' incorrect adjective/adverb use—'quiet places'. 'Walk silently' is odd; 'walk quietly' acceptable but 'relax peacefully' better uses verbs/adverbs correctly. Suggestion: use adjective before noun and adverbs with verbs; remove redundancy.

× For example, I went to a very small town where population was very less and the relaxation has very good there they with that was very quiet place.

✓ For example, I went to a very small town where the population was very low and it was a very relaxing and quiet place.

Missing article 'the' before 'population'; 'very less' is ungrammatical—use 'very low' or 'small'; 'the relaxation has very good there' is ungrammatical—use 'it was very relaxing'. Sentence is long and fragmented; combine clauses properly. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('population was low'), include necessary articles, and use clear subject-verb structures.