Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and sentence clarity. Use correct tenses (I used to / I walk), avoid unclear phrases ("walk my door"), and combine ideas logically with linking words. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and add a brief reason or a specific example.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. When I don't have a car, I usually walk to work because it saves money and helps me exercise. I also enjoy walking through the nearby park, where I can see people walking their dogs and enjoy the scenery.

Sugestão: Fix past habit phrasing: say "I didn't use to" or "I didn't often". Keep tense consistent (past). Use correct prepositions and verb forms, and avoid mixing present and past ("we preferred"). Add a specific example of activities.

Exemplo: No, I didn't use to walk much as a child. My parents usually drove my sister and me to places, and we preferred riding bicycles or roller skates for fun on weekends.

Sugestão: Make a clear topic sentence, use linking words (because, moreover, for example), and give specific, well-structured reasons. Avoid repetition and awkward phrases like "that it's also walking". Limit to 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because they can enjoy natural scenery and relax. Moreover, parks offer chances to see birds and flowers, and to meet or talk with other people. Walking in a park is also a pleasant form of daily exercise.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and awkward expressions: use "the sea and the beach are" instead of "it's". Replace unclear phrases like "you can't enjoy washing some birds" with intended idea (watching birds). Use linking words (because, also) and give vivid detail but stay concise.

Exemplo: If I could, I would take a long walk along the seaside because the beach is very relaxing and I enjoy the sound of the waves. I could also watch seabirds and chat with other walkers, and walking on sand is great exercise for the legs.

Sugestão: Use correct past-tense phrases: "I went for a walk" and "we wandered". Avoid inappropriate words ("disgusting" is ok but explain calmly) and correct verbs ("stepped in" instead of "paste"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and provide a brief specific detail or feeling.

Exemplo: I went for a walk with my dog last night in the park near our house. Many people were walking their dogs, but unfortunately there was dog waste on the grass and I accidentally stepped in it, which was very unpleasant.

× For example, when I don't have a car I used to go to my work by walking.

✓ For example, when I didn't have a car I used to walk to work.

The original mixes present 'don't have' with past 'used to', creating a tense inconsistency. Change 'don't have' to 'didn't have' to match the past habitual 'used to'. Also 'go to my work by walking' is wordy and unnatural; use 'walk to work'.

× Also I love to walk my door through the park and seeing other people with their dogs and viewing the scenery.

✓ Also I love to walk from my door through the park, seeing other people with their dogs and enjoying the scenery.

Preposition 'my door through' is incorrect; use 'from my door through the park'. Parallel structure requires gerunds after 'love to' or rephrase: here use gerunds consistently: 'seeing' and 'enjoying'. 'Viewing the scenery' is acceptable but 'enjoying the scenery' is more natural.

× I didn't used to walk that much when I was a child.

✓ I didn't use to walk that much when I was a child.

With 'didn't' the main verb should be in base form, not past form. 'Used' should be 'use' after 'didn't'.

× I remember that my parents always took us with my sister through to the places by car.

✓ I remember that my parents always took my sister and me to places by car.

Use 'took X and me to places' rather than 'took us with my sister through to the places'. 'With my sister' is awkward; put both persons as objects: 'my sister and me'. 'Through to the places' is incorrect; use 'to places'.

× Also, we prefer to ride bicycles or riding some skates besides walking.

✓ Also, we preferred to ride bicycles or skate as well as walk.

The question asks about childhood ('when I was a child'), so verbs should be past: change 'prefer' to 'preferred'. Also maintain parallel structure: 'ride bicycles or skate' rather than mixing 'ride' and 'riding' and avoid 'some skates'. 'As well as walk' or 'instead of walking' depending on meaning.

× Because they can enjoy the scenery, also they can interact with other people.

✓ Because they can enjoy the scenery, they can also interact with other people.

Position of 'also' is awkward. Move 'also' after subject 'they' for natural word order: 'they can also interact'.

× For example, in parks you can view sunflowers, some birds and also talk with other people that it's also walking.

✓ For example, in parks you can see sunflowers and birds, and you can also talk with other people while walking.

Original has unclear clause 'that it's also walking'. Rephrase to show simultaneous actions: 'talk with other people while walking'. Use 'see' instead of 'view' for natural speech and keep parallel structure.

× And for instance it could be a daily exercise to enjoy.

✓ For instance, it could be a daily form of exercise to enjoy.

Phrase 'daily exercise to enjoy' is awkward. Clarify: 'a daily form of exercise that you can enjoy' or 'a daily exercise you can enjoy'. Adjust word order to be natural.

× If I had the chance, I would take a long walk at the seaside because I think the sea and the beach it's really relaxing.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk at the seaside because I think the sea and the beach are really relaxing.

In the clause 'the sea and the beach it's', subject is plural so verb must be plural 'are'. Remove contraction 'it's' which is singular. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Also, you can't enjoy washing some birds and talking with other people.

✓ Also, you can enjoy watching some birds and talking with other people.

'Washing some birds' is incorrect; intended verb is 'watching'. 'You can't enjoy' contradicts context; likely positive 'you can enjoy'. Correct verb and modality for intended meaning.

× I think walking in the sand could be a good exercise for your legs.

✓ I think walking on the sand could be a good exercise for your legs.

Use preposition 'on' with 'sand' when referring to walking on the surface: 'walking on the sand'. 'Walking in the sand' can also be used but 'on' is more typical here.

× I went to a walk with my dog last night.

✓ I went for a walk with my dog last night.

English uses the phrase 'go for a walk' rather than 'go to a walk'. Use the preposition 'for' with 'a walk'.

× We have a park near our house so we wonder there.

✓ We have a park near our house so we walk there.

'Wonder' is incorrect verb; likely intended 'wander' or 'walk'. In context of walking, use 'walk there'. If meaning 'wander', use 'wander there'. Ensure verb matches meaning.

× I saw other people also walking their dogs and it is disgusting because there was a lot of poo on the grass and I for mistake paste some poop.

✓ I saw other people walking their dogs and it was disgusting because there was a lot of dog poo on the grass and I accidentally stepped in some.

Maintain past tense: use 'it was disgusting'. Replace 'for mistake' with 'accidentally' and 'paste some poop' with 'stepped in some' or 'stepped in dog poo'. Use 'dog poo' for clarity. Ensure verbs and phrasing are natural.