Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Укажите прямой ответ сначала, сократите повторения и уточните детали. Используйте связки для логики (e.g., "but", "because", "so"). Например, начните с "It depends" или "Not always" и затем объясните причины и смену ситуации. Уберите лишние слова типа "I just" и поправьте грамматику: "I didn't walk a lot" вместо "I didn't work a lot".

Exemplo: It depends. A few weeks ago I didn’t walk much because I was studying for an exam, but after I moved to Istanbul I walk a lot every day because the city is very walkable and public transport is convenient.

Sugestão: Дайте ясный вступительный ответ, затем приведите конкретные примеры и избегайте повторов. Исправьте словосочетания: "I lived in a village" и "I would walk to the local river or to a friend's house". Используйте связки (e.g., "for example", "because").

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I lived in a village for five years, so I often walked to the local river or to my friends' houses. For example, I used to walk every afternoon to play by the river because there were few cars and many safe paths.

Sugestão: Начните с краткого ответа, затем перечислите 2–3 конкретные причины и поясните каждую с помощью связок. Исправьте фразы: "fresh air", "green spaces". Избегайте тавтологии (двойные "I think").

Exemplo: There are several reasons. Firstly, parks provide fresh air and green spaces, which helps people relax. Secondly, they are good for exercise and socialising, for example many people jog or meet friends there.

Sugestão: Дайте прямой ответ и затем уточните причины и конкретные места. Улучшите грамматику: "I would go to another country, probably China" и избегайте неопределённых выражений типа "something you just maybe". Используйте связки: "because", "for example".

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would go to China. I’d like to walk in historic areas such as ancient towns and around famous landmarks, and also try local street food while exploring the cities on foot.

Sugestão: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос о последней прогулке, назовите место и опишите кратко, что вы делали и почему это было интересно. Исправьте фразы: "local park" или "local area", "located in the centre of Istanbul", "we visited some restaurants serving traditional Turkish food". Сделайте ответ более связным и конкретным.

Exemplo: Recently I walked around a local park in the centre of Istanbul. After the walk we visited several restaurants nearby that serve traditional Turkish dishes, so it was a nice mix of exercise and food.

× So actually I can say it depends on time, because two weeks ago I didn't work a lot because I was preparing to my exam and after that when I moved to Istanbul. Here I walk a lot every day and I just do.

✓ So actually I can say it depends on the time. Two weeks ago I didn't walk a lot because I was preparing for my exam, and after that when I moved to Istanbul I walked a lot every day.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect verbs and prepositions. Use 'walk' for habitual present and 'walked' for past actions (Present tense issue). Use 'the time' and 'preparing for my exam' (incorrect preposition fixed). Remove fragment 'and I just do' and combine clauses correctly. Suggestion: separate past and present actions clearly: past events use past tense (walked), present habits use present simple (walk).

× So of course I always went outside, outside when I was a child because I was living in a village for five years and there are a lot of opportunity for walking because I just walked to the local river or just moved to my friend.

✓ So of course I always went outside when I was a child because I lived in a village for five years and there were a lot of opportunities for walking. I would walk to the local river or just go to my friend's house.

Use simple past for completed past states (Past tense issue). 'I was living' changed to 'I lived' for a habitual past. 'There are' changed to 'there were' to match past context. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. 'Moved to my friend' is incorrect; use 'go to my friend's house' or 'visit my friend'.

× So I think that there are several reasons why people like to walk in parks. I think that the first and most common is that people like to fresh air and I can say that park is the place green place, which is develop a lot of green.

✓ So I think that there are several reasons why people like to walk in parks. The first and most common is that people like the fresh air, and I would say that a park is a green place with a lot of plants.

Incorrect adjective and article use and awkward phrasing (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Like to fresh air' should be 'like the fresh air'. 'Park is the place green place' corrected to 'a park is a green place'. 'Develop a lot of green' changed to 'with a lot of plants' for natural English. Suggest using clear noun phrases and correct articles.

× So if I had a chance, I would like to move to other country, it's would be China. And after that I want to explore something you just maybe historical places or castles or just national food and walk a lot on the street.

✓ So if I had the chance, I would like to move to another country; it would be China. After that I would want to explore historical places or castles, try national foods, and walk a lot in the streets.

Mixed conditional and future expressions and incorrect articles (Conditional/future tense issue and article errors). Use 'the chance' and 'another country'. 'It's would be' is ungrammatical; use 'it would be'. Maintain conditional 'would' for planned actions. Use correct nouns: 'national foods' and 'walk in the streets'.

× To be honest, it could be local charge which is located in center of Istanbul and after that we visited some restaurants which develop unique food and nationality foods of Turkey.

✓ To be honest, it could be the local market located in the center of Istanbul, and after that we visited some restaurants that serve unique and traditional Turkish foods.

Incorrect word choice and tense agreement (Past tense issue and incorrect use of adjectives). 'Local charge' seems wrong; 'local market' fits context. Use 'the center' with definite article. 'Which develop unique food and nationality foods' is incorrect; use 'that serve unique and traditional Turkish foods'. Use past tense 'visited' consistently. Suggest choosing correct nouns and collocations like 'serve' and 'traditional'.