Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I walk a lot), correct verb choice and grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot because I have a dog. I take him out every morning and evening, and on days when I have extra time I go to a nearby park for a long walk. Walking in the park helps me relax and enjoy the fresh air.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct tense and word choice. Use one clear sentence to say whether you walked often as a child, then add a supporting detail with proper linking words and specific examples. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go walking very often as a child. Instead, I preferred playing outside with my friends; for example, we often spent whole afternoons playing football or volleyball in the park.

Sugestão: Use correct verbs and pronouns, and give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Start with a topic sentence (People like walking in parks because...), then give two concise reasons with examples. Avoid unclear or invented phrases.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they provide fresh air and a peaceful environment. For instance, parks are good for light exercise and socialising, and walking there can help reduce stress and improve mood.

Sugestão: Use the conditional correctly and keep sentences clear and grammatical. Begin with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct repetitive words and tense errors.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk on the beach because I love the sea. It feels peaceful there, and after walking I usually enjoy swimming to relax.

Sugestão: Use past tense for a past event and correct verbs and nouns. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add a specific detail with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and check word choice (e.g., 'walked', 'path', 'ducks').

Exemplo: I went for a walk in Riverside Park near my home last weekend. I chose that route because it is peaceful and close by; for example, I walked along the path beside the river, enjoyed the fresh air, and watched the ducks, which helped me relax after a busy week.

× Yes, I work a lot because I have a dog.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because I have a dog.

The student used 'work' but the meaning is 'walk'. This is a word choice error rather than third person singular; however it affects subject-verb meaning. Use the base verb 'walk' with 'I' (I walk) to match the question about walking.

× I usually take him to work every morning and evening and sometimes I feel I have extra time.

✓ I usually take him for a walk every morning and evening, and sometimes I feel I have extra time.

The phrase 'take him to work' is incorrect when referring to walking a dog. Use the noun phrase 'for a walk'. Also add a comma before 'and' joining clauses. Keep present simple 'I usually take'.

× I will go to the park for long walking and to help me to relaxing and to smoke the sound fresh area.

✓ I will go to the park for a long walk to help me relax and to breathe the fresh air.

Multiple errors: 'for long walking' should be 'for a long walk' (noun phrase). 'to help me to relaxing' requires infinitive 'to help me relax'. 'to smoke the sound fresh area' is incorrect vocabulary and structure; correct is 'to breathe the fresh air'. Maintain future tense 'I will go'.

× No, I didn't often go to the memo when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't often go to the meadow when I was a child.

Use past simple negative 'didn't often go' is fine; 'memo' seems to be a wrong word choice — likely 'meadow'. Add article 'a' before 'child' ('when I was a child').

× I prefer played outside with my friend.

✓ I preferred playing outside with my friends.

Tense and grammar: after referring to childhood (past), use past 'preferred'. Use gerund 'playing' after 'preferred'. Also plural 'friends' fits context if speaking about multiple friends; if singular intends 'my friend', keep singular. Ensure subject-verb and form consistency.

× We usually played volleyball or football in the park because it's more fun and active.

✓ We usually played volleyball or football in the park because it was more fun and active.

Talking about past habit, maintain past tense: 'it was' rather than 'it's'. 'Usually played' is fine for past routines.

× I have the phone memory for space, whole afternoon running and lovely with them.

✓ I have many fond memories of spending whole afternoons running and having fun with them.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and uses wrong words. 'Phone memory for space' unclear; correct phrase 'fond memories'. Use 'spending whole afternoons' and 'having fun with them' to convey the intended meaning.

× I think people like to work in park because it helped me to relaxing and unwind.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because it helps them relax and unwind.

Use correct verb 'walk' (not 'work') and plural 'parks' for general statements. Use present simple 'helps' for general truths. 'Help ... relax' uses base verb. Replace 'me' with 'them' since speaking generally.

× Parking is often fresh air and the place surroundly which we can climb the mine and reduce stress.

✓ Parks often have fresh air and are surrounded by places where we can climb hills and reduce stress.

'Parking' should be 'parks'. 'Is often fresh air' is ungrammatical; use 'have fresh air'. 'Surroundly' is incorrect — use 'surrounded'. 'Climb the mine' likely wrong word; 'climb hills' fits better. Restructure sentence for clarity and correct nouns.

× Some people also enjoy working there for light exercise or to meet friends.

✓ Some people also enjoy walking there for light exercise or meeting friends.

'Working' should be 'walking'. Also use gerund forms consistently: 'enjoy walking' and 'meeting friends'. This fits the topic.

× If I had chance, I want to walk around on the beach because I like the sea.

✓ If I had the chance, I would walk along the beach because I like the sea.

This is a second conditional: use 'If I had the chance' (corrected) and 'I would' + base verb. 'Around on the beach' is unnatural; 'along the beach' is idiomatic.

× I think it's it's very peaceful and I can can help me to relaxing and always I have the time I will go to swimming.

✓ I think it's very peaceful and it can help me relax, and whenever I have time I will go swimming.

Remove duplicated words 'it's it's' and 'can can'. Use 'it can help me relax' (base verb after help). 'Always I have the time' should be 'whenever I have time'. Use 'go swimming' not 'go to swimming'.

× I want to work in the Riverside Park near my home last weekend.

✓ I went to Riverside Park near my home last weekend.

Talking about a past event requires past simple 'I went' not 'I want' or 'I want to work'. Also 'to the Riverside Park' -> 'to Riverside Park' is natural.

× I often choose the route because it's peaceful and close by.

✓ I often chose that route because it was peaceful and close by.

Maintain past tense for 'last weekend': 'chose' and 'was'. If speaker intends habitual present, keep present; but context is past visit so use past.

× For example, I walk along the pace beside the river, enjoying the fresh air and watching the dark swimming which help me to relaxing after busy week.

✓ For example, I walked along the path beside the river, enjoying the fresh air and watching ducks swimming, which helped me relax after a busy week.

Use past tense 'walked' and 'helped'. 'Pace' should be 'path'. 'Dark swimming' unclear; likely 'ducks swimming'. Use 'which helped me relax' (base verb after 'help'). Add article 'a' before 'busy week'.