Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, follow with one or two supporting details, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like “usually” or “often” appropriately.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk around my city for one to two hours with my friend and my father, and we often exercise together in the local garden.

Sugestão: Correct past tense and clarity: use past simple consistently and give a concise reason. Avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear time references.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I used to walk with my grandmother and grandfather in Al Ahmadi Garden for one to two hours. However, I could not continue doing that as I grew older because I became busy with school.

Sugestão: Be natural and concise: explain benefits clearly using correct vocabulary (fresh air, relax, exercise). Avoid inaccurate scientific phrasing. Use linking words like “because” and “for example” to structure the answer.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because they offer fresh air and a pleasant environment. For example, parks are quieter and greener, which helps people to relax and get good exercise.

Sugestão: Use conditional correctly and be more specific: use the second conditional for hypothetical situations and give clear reasons. Keep sentences brief and accurate.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk with my friend around Jabber Stadium, which is about 4.5 kilometres. There are many coffee shops and trees there, so it would be a pleasant walk.

Sugestão: Improve coherence and reduce hesitations: answer directly with a clear time reference and location. Remove conflicting or confusing statements (e.g. “24 hours” vs “8:00 until 8:00”) and use simple, complete sentences.

Exemplo: Recently I walked in the local garden. It is open 24 hours, so I often go there in the evening for a short walk.

× Yes I do. I usually walking around my city, uh from one to two hours with my friend and my father.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually walk around my city for one to two hours with my friend and my father.

The original uses the base verb 'walking' after 'usually' where the simple present 'walk' is required for habitual actions. Use 'usually' + base verb (or 'usually am/are/is' + -ing for continuous habits) depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'I usually walk' to describe a regular activity.

× We usually walking and doing an exercise in the garden.

✓ We usually walk and do exercise in the garden.

After 'usually' the simple present forms 'walk' and 'do' are needed to express regular activities. Also use 'do exercise' or 'exercise' not 'doing an exercise' in this context.

× Yes, when I was child I start walking with my grandma and grandfather in my in Al Ahmadi garden from one to two hours.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I started walking with my grandma and grandfather in Al Ahmadi garden for one to two hours.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and wrong verb tense: 'start' should be past 'started' to match 'when I was a child'. Also 'in my in Al Ahmadi garden' is redundant; use 'in Al Ahmadi garden'. Use 'for' to indicate duration.

× But unfortunately I was unable to continue my walking because I was child.

✓ But unfortunately I was unable to continue walking because I was a child.

Requires article 'a' before 'child'. 'Continue my walking' is unnatural; use 'continue walking'. Tense 'was unable' is correct for past.

× Because the people that goes directly to a garden to doing an exercise or walking, they take the oxygen and the Bureau air in the garden and exchange for the carbon dioxide to the oxygen and help the people to breathe and doing an healthy walking.

✓ Because people who go to a garden to exercise or walk breathe the fresh air in the garden, which helps exchange carbon dioxide for oxygen and helps people breathe and have healthy walks.

Multiple errors: use 'people who' not 'the people that'; verb agreement 'go' not 'goes' after plural subject; use 'to exercise' or 'to walk' (infinitive) not 'to doing'; 'Bureau air' is incorrect — likely 'fresh air'; phrase 'exchange for the carbon dioxide to the oxygen' should be 'exchange carbon dioxide for oxygen'; 'doing an healthy walking' should be 'have healthy walks' or 'walk healthily'. Also article and word choice corrected for clarity.

× If I have chance to walking a long walk, I will walk with my friend in Jabber stadium that's approximately around 4.5 kilometer.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would walk with my friend in Jabber stadium, which is approximately 4.5 kilometres.

This is a second conditional hypothetical: use 'If I had' + 'would'. The phrase 'chance to walking' needs infinitive 'to take a long walk' or 'to walk'; 'will' should be 'would' in hypothetical; 'kilometer' plural 'kilometres' and remove redundant 'around' when using 'approximately'.

× That's around the Kuwait City and there is a lot of coffee shop and trees there that emphasize me to walking.

✓ It's near Kuwait City and there are a lot of coffee shops and trees there that encourage me to walk.

Use 'near' or 'around' without 'the' before 'Kuwait City' (no article). 'A lot of' should be followed by plural countable 'coffee shops'. 'Emphasize me to walking' is incorrect; use 'encourage me to walk'.

× I, I usually, I am usually doing, uh, where did I was, uh, do, uh, doing walking around, uh, garden because 24, it's open, uh, 24 hours, uh, and uh, start from 8:00 until eight. Yeah, that's mean 24 hours.

✓ I usually walk around the garden because it is open 24 hours; it starts from 8:00 until 8:00. That means it is open 24 hours.

The original is disfluent and mixes tenses and redundant phrases. Use the simple present 'I usually walk' for habitual actions. 'Garden' should have an article if specific: 'the garden'. 'It is open 24 hours' is clear. The phrase 'start from 8:00 until eight' is confusing—clarify the opening times (start and end times must be consistent); ensure times use consistent format. Avoid filler words and halting speech in written correction.