Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer slightly more concise and add a specific example to sound more natural and vivid. Use one clear topic sentence then one supporting detail with a linking phrase. Avoid repeating general phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk quite often. For example, I walk to school every morning and usually take a 30-minute loop around my neighborhood in the evening, which helps me stay active and unwind while listening to music.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give a specific memory or detail to enrich the answer. Use a linking word to connect the idea of fun with the benefit you mention.

Exemplo: Yes, I went outside to walk a lot as a child. For instance, I and my friends would walk to the nearby park every afternoon to play, so it was both fun and a good way to get fresh air and exercise.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and cohesion: combine short fragments into full sentences and use linking words. Give one or two specific reasons or examples instead of fragments. Avoid vague phrases like "so many people."

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because the peaceful environment and fresh air help them relax and clear their minds. In addition, parks are safer and more pleasant than busy streets, which makes them ideal for families and joggers.

Sugestão: Correct small grammar mistakes and avoid repetition. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail with a clear linking word. Mention a specific location or activity to make it vivid.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk along a mountain trail overlooking a lake, because the quiet scenery would help me relax and recharge while I enjoy the fresh air and photo opportunities.

Sugestão: Keep the answer concise and add a specific detail such as timing or a feature of the route to make it more vivid. Use a linking phrase to show the result of the walk.

Exemplo: Lately I went for a 30-minute walk around my neighborhood in the evening because it's close to my house; the quiet streets and tree-lined path help me relax and clear my mind after a busy day.

× Also walking in park fields. Safer and more enjoyable than walking or on the street. So many people.

✓ Also, walking in park fields is safer and more enjoyable than walking on the street, so many people prefer it.

Original fragments lack a main verb and have sentence fragments. The first fragment 'Also walking in park fields.' needs to be connected with a verb; add 'is' to form 'is safer...'. Remove extra 'or' before 'on the street' and combine into one complete sentence. Use a subject for the final clause ('so many people prefer it') to make the idea complete.

× It's also a great way to enjoy nature and got some and get some fresh air.

✓ It's also a great way to enjoy nature and get some fresh air.

The verb 'got' is past tense and incorrect in parallel with 'get'. When coordinating verbs, use the base form 'get' to match 'enjoy' and maintain parallel structure. Remove the extra 'and' that created redundancy.

× Lately I went for a walk around my neighborhood.

✓ Lately I have gone for a walk around my neighborhood.

The adverb 'lately' commonly pairs with the present perfect tense to indicate a recent action with present relevance. Use 'have gone' instead of simple past 'went' to reflect that recentness. Alternatively 'I went' is acceptable if specifying a past time; here 'lately' favors present perfect.

× I usually walk there because it's close to my house and it's a quiet area.

✓ I usually walk there because it's close to my house and it's a quiet area.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No changes needed. It uses present simple appropriately for habitual action and the linking verb 'is' correctly.

× I normally walk to school and around my neighborhood.

✓ I normally walk to school and around my neighborhood.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Present simple correctly indicates habitual actions; no correction required.

× I usually played in the neighborhood with my friends, and walking around was a big part of our daily routine.

✓ I usually played in the neighborhood with my friends, and walking around was a big part of our daily routine.

This sentence is correct in past tense describing habitual childhood actions. No correction needed.

× Parks have fresh air and open spaces which help people clear their minds and reduce stress.

✓ Parks have fresh air and open spaces which help people clear their minds and reduce stress.

This sentence is correct. 'Help' correctly agrees with plural subject 'open spaces' and 'which' clause; no change necessary.

× If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk by a lake or in the mountains.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk by a lake or in the mountains.

This conditional sentence is correctly formed (second conditional) to express a hypothetical desire. No correction needed.

× I really enjoy quiet places with beautiful views and walking there would help me relax and disconnect from daily stress.

✓ I really enjoy quiet places with beautiful views, and walking there would help me relax and disconnect from daily stress.

The original sentence is correct but benefits from a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' to separate two independent clauses. 'Walking' as a present participle correctly functions as the subject of the second clause.

× Yes, I walk quite often.

✓ Yes, I walk quite often.

This short answer is grammatically correct and appropriate for the question; no correction required.